thnk u neel di for posting..pls aapki frnd ko batayiye k 😉its very interesting start...!!complt different story..and good title...ram n priya are two different poles...kehte haina opposite attracts let see kya hota hai..😛feeling bad for priya 's situation...waiting for the next,,.
Originally posted by: mayanandan
Interesting story witha different concept...
Pls continue soon..
Accha neel, at last u posted
well its interesting to be read as snake n mice raya.
Im so sorry , I may not drop PMS so please check for the title whenevr i updatae will change the title bar . Thank you ..
PART-1
Ram:- rich and spoil brat only son of amaranth Kapoor...He never serious about his life. He spends lots of money for useless things...his friends always provoked him for doing all the wrong things...his friends is also with him for money. He likes to spend time in Club, parties etc. He never gave respect to anybody especially womens...He believes womens are made for his enjoyment. Only person he scared of is his dadi...She wanted to get him married and settled and becomes responsible. She believes agar Ram ki shaadi ho jaati hai toh he becomes responsible...lekin Ram hamesha shaadi ki baat taal jata tha. He never took interest in business.
Priya:- sensible and soft person...she has only one dream...she wanted to independent and get away from her family...her family...mother shipra, her stepfather shiny and her step brother Karthik. Pyar ke naam se iss ghar usse kuch nahi mila...maa se lekar uska chotta bhai sab usspar chillate hai, gussa karte hai aur maarte bhi hai. Priya ko kuch bhi karne ka freedom nahi tha...only thing she can do is she can continue her studies because marne se pehle Priya ke father ne eisa clause banaya tha jisse who apna studies continue kar sakti hai. Priya janti hai ki uski shaadi kabhi nahi hogi warna saari properties unke haato se chali jaayegi. All torture Priya very badly.
Her friends support her...and she shares everything with her friends. Praia is very good in studies and she is doing her last year MBA from the reputed college.
Ram not in town...as usual Ram apne dosto ke saat lonavla mein apne farm house mein hai. woh apne friends ke saat gypsy mein raat ko road par ghum raha hai...drinking and enjoying.
Wahi Priya apne friends ke saat last show dekhkar bus ka wait kar rahi hai. aadha ganta ho gaya but bus nahi auto wala bhi nahi tha...Priya get very scared.
Priya:- meine tum sab se pehle nahi kaha tha ki last show nahi jaayenge...abb dekho ek auto tak nahi mill rahi.
P friends:- common Priya...aaj pehli baar tu hamare saat hai toh socha tere liye film dekh le...aur tu hai ki humpar hi gussa kar rahi hai
Priya:- lekin abb kya...ghar kaise jaayenge...pura sunsaan hai...aur agar muje yahan kisi ne iss waqt yahan dekh liya toh bass
P's friends:- common Priya aaj tere bhai ka birthday hai...tere gharwale tuje include karna nahi chahte issliye tuje hamare saat rehne ka permission de diya...abb Karthik aur uske saare friends unki b'day party mein honge...koi nahi dekega.
Priya:- lekin hum abb ghar kaise jaayenge
P'sfriends:- chill Priya...dekh koi gaadi aa rahi hai...lift le lete hai
Priya:- guys please no lift...muje yeh sab sahi nahi lagta...mein nahi jaane wali
P's friends:- Priya...tu darr matt kuch nahi hoga...you are our responsibility...hum tuje kuch nahi hone denge.
Priya's friends saw one gypsy approaching towards them...they waves hand. Ram saw the girls and told his friend to stop the jeep.
They stop the jeep...there were six friends. Two get down. Ram is sitting at
the back.
P's friends ask for the lift. Ram agrees without looking into anybody's face. P's friends become happy and said thank you. Priya is not ready to go...
Priya:- kya kar rahe ho...dekho inhe sab peeye hue hai...hum inhe jante bhi nahi ...nahi...mein nahi chalne wali.
P's friends:- priya hum yahan aadhe gante se kade hai...ek gaadi tak nahi hai road par...hamare paas aur koi option nahi hai...aur waise bhi yeh log hame kuch nahi kar sakte...open jeep hai...kuch karenge bhi toh hum chilaayenge...
Ram:- kisi ko koi problem ho toh aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...hame late ho raha hai...chadna hai toh chado jaldi
P's friends:- common Priya...dekh ek lauta lift mila hai...woh bhi nikal jaayega...please come
Iss tarah sabhi jeep par baith jaate hai...four guys on one side and four girls opposite to them. Priya ekdum side par and opposite to Ram.
Ram Priya ko dekhta hai aur Priya face dusri taraf kar leti hai. other guys are talking with p's friends. After some time ram touch her legs with his. Priya looks at him angrily aur pair peeche kar leti hai. Ram ko maza aata hai and again Ram apne pair se priya ke pair ko move karta hai. Priya apna pair pura peeche leti hai...ram then apna pair stretch karta hai aur priya ke pair ke beech mein rakta hai. Priya kuch nahi karti aur avoids him.
Ram then ask her aapka naam kya hai
Priya kuch nahi bolti but uske friends Priya ka naam bata dete hai. Ram is continuously staring at her...Priya bahut uncomfortable feel karti hai aur usse darr bhi lagta hai issliye woh chup rehti hai. At last stop they Drops near to their place and left. Priya room mein pahuchte hi sab par gussa hoti hai
Priya:- enough...bahut ho gaya...aaj ke baad mein tum logo ke saat kahi nahi
jaaungi
P's friends:- common Priya...tu apne parents ki wajah se kahi nahi jaa paati toh socha show dekhne ke liye chalte hai...aur tu hai ki hum par hi gussa ho rahi hai
Priya:- I know yaar tum yeh sab mere liye kiya...but lift...woh bhi unn ladko se
P'sfriends holding near her and said "priya tu hamari responsibility hai...aur unn logo ne kuch kiya toh nahi na...in fact unhone hum sabse achhe se behave kiya.
Priya Ram ki harqato ko yaad karti hai and stare at friends angrily.
On the otherside,
Ram's friends:- kya baat hai Ram tune iss baar ladkiyoon se baat tak nahi ki...koi bhi tere type ki nahi thi kya
Ram:- lovely...uski aakhen bahut kuch kehti hai...meri nazre hatt hi nahi rahi thi usse.
Ram friends:- kon????? Kiski baat kar raha hai
Ram:- Priya...
R's friend:- Priya?????? Tune toh usse baat tak nahi ki...aur who bhi humme se kisi se baat nahi ki.
Ram:- kya kaha unlogo ne..."kaunse college mein padte hai"
R's friend:- kyun???? Tu Priya se milne wahan jaayega...wahan tuje entry tak milne nahi wali
Ram:- janta hai na mein kon hoon Mr. Ram Kapoor...mera naam hi kaafi hai
R's friends:- sach bata kahi tuje Priya se pyar toh nahi hua
Ram:- bilkul nahi lekin koi ladki meri taraf na dekhe eisa ho nahi sakta...aur Priya ne mujse baat tak nahi ki.
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