MANAN OS: FRIENDSHIP AND LOVE INCOMPARABLE RELATIONS

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Hii guys. I am back with an OS on our manan.
Thanku to my bestie yashu who always help me in writing. So thanks a lot to her
Sorry guys if you guys have better title thqn do suggest.

Manan OS: friendship and love incomparable relations

Nandini- guys you are late.
Fab 5 was again late for practice. Manik is angry on nandini like hell for just walking away, but he has to tolerate her for the group( nothing happened, like manik's house fiasco.)
Manik- can we start?
Nandini- i am not your servant who ll keep on waiting for you guys.
Manik was hell angry but than pnly soha entered.
Soha- hi guys. How's everything going?
Nandini- all's cool soha. They are practicing properly.
All were shocked that why nandini is lieong to her.
Soha- oh than great. She than moved to manik.
Soha- hii handsome. How are you?
Manik was irritated but when he saw nandini's angry face he too played.
Manik-hi beautiful. I am fine.
Nandini kind of shouted- soha. Soha got scared so nandini controlled her anger. And said. Actually if you dont mind can we continue? Because we want to practice.
Cabir chuckled at her possessive nature.
Nandini said in anger- what? Is there anything funny?
Cabir and others were literally scared of her anger.
Cabir- nothing. Lets practice.
Soha was also scared- umm ya i should leave. You guys continue.
Nandini- bye.
After some time of practicing when they were on break.
Cabir came to manik- yar teri vali toh proper sherni hai. Dekhti hai toh lagta hai khaa jayegi.
Manik smiled at his sentence and thought in his mind. Bat toh sahi hai lagta toh hai ki kha jayegi. But pata nahi mujhse kab bat karegi.
All were sitting there only.
Aliaa- so guys what you have thought?
Mukti- aur agar usne phir koi galti kari toh?
Cabir- same question.
Aliaa- ok lets make a deal guys.
Dhruv- what?
Aliaa took a deep breath- ok so its the lqst time i am trusting him. Agar unhone dobara kuch bhi kia Toh he ll hqve to pay for it by going to lockup for his whole life
And she ran from their with tear in eyes.
Cabir- kya yar. Ek taraf aliaa hai and ek taraf my complaint.
Manik- vaise she is right for her we should take our complaint back.
Cabir- than lets go.


They all went to jail to get him out of lockup.
Everything was going smoothly fab 5 were rehearsing properly, harshad was quiet or we should say trying to make some plan to take revenge, and manik and nandini were same. Nandini was not able to recognise her feelings and manik wasstill angry on her.
Both were right at there places, communication gap was there but because of abhimanyu's advises nandini was trying to overcome her fears.
Abhimanyu- so whats new?
Nandini- nothing bas vohi me and manik again fought. Dont know what should i do.
They were talking when nandini got a message.

Message:-
If you want to see manik alive than come on college's terrace. Agar kisi ko bhi bataya to he ll be dead.

Nandini's mobile dropped from her hand and without thinking twice she ran to terrace.
Abhimanyu called her out but she didn't listen
Than abhimanyu took her mobile and read the messages.

Message 1:-
If you want to see manik alive than come on college's terrace. Agar kisi ko bhi bataya to he ll be dead.

Message2 :-
Manik will be dead. Beaware.

Message 3:-
Manik in danger. If you can than save him.
Abhimanyu ran to terrace but while going there he listened music and heard fab 5. He entered in and was shocked to see manik there safe and sound.

Mukti- you? You are again here?
Manik was also angry because nandini spend lot of time with him.
He was about to say something but abhimanyu spoke abhimanyu- shut up plz. My friend is in danger.
Cabir- who?
Abhi- Nandu. Guys see this. Than he showed them the mobile.
Manik- oh shit. Itne messages or usne mujhe kuch nahi batya.
Abhi- mujhe bhi nahi. Anyway i have to protect her.
Manik- i ll also come.
All boys left.


Scene shifted to terrace.

Nandini opened the door of terrace and searched for manik. But noone was there.
She was crying like hell whe she heard closing of door, she turned and saw 4-5 boys with harshad.

Nandini- harshad tum?
Harshad- itni jaldi bhul gayi mujhe? Because of you only i went to jail. He grabbed her arm and digged his nails in her flush- hows dare you ditch me?
Nadini winced in pain- uh r hurting me harshad.
Harshad- you also did the same.
Nandini shouted- uh deserved it.
And with that harshad slapped her hard, so hard that her lip was bleeding and with the force she fell on floor.
Harshad- you bitch. Yeh toh meri sister ka love hai jo i am out. I assured her that i have changed. But i ll not leave you, i ll spoil your life.
He held her and was about to kiss her but she slapped him, he was so angry that he slapped her again and tore the sleeves of top.
He ordered the boys to hold her hands.
Nandini was crying like hell.

Scene shifted to fab 5.
Manik and all were running like mad people, they were in stairs when they heard harshad saying about aliaa. Aliaa was shameful and shocked.
The door was closed abhi and manik pushed in 2-3 times and oppend it.
All were shocked to see nandini and harshad on him.
Manik was so angry that he just roared his named and bounced on him.

Harshad was about to kiss her when she heard manik's voice and bouned on him. Nandini was there lying on floor ashamed of herself.
Abhimanyu came to Nandu and gave him his jacket and went to boys to beat them.
Manik was beating harshad, he saw her in pain and wanted to kill him there and than. But cabir came to him.
Cabir- bhai tu nandini ke pas jaa she needs you a lot.
Mukti hugged nadini tightly- chup ho jaye. Kuch nahi hoga hum aa gaye na. Bas bas chup.
Nandini was crying like a baby in his arms when manik approached them.
Manik- nandini.
Nandini left Mukti and jumped on manik, she hugged him and wound her arms around his waist like a baby.
Mukti was shocked by her action but she loved that moment. Than his eyes landed on abhi who was beating harshad mercilessly, first she thought that he likes her the mere thought made her angry. But than his next words made her happy and gained more respect from her.
Abhi- saale meri behen ko marega. Aaj ke baad use hath bhi lagaya toh jaan le lunga teri.
By that time aliaa reached there with principal and police.
Aliaa- inspector plz arrest bhai and other goons also.
Harshad- aliaa.
Aliaa- shut up bhai not this time. Never contact me now.
All left except fab5 abhi and nandu.
Abhi came to nandini who was still hugging manik and crying.
Abhi- come nandu.
Nandu hugged manik more tightly and denied.
Abhi- hum sab hai yaha kuch nahi hoga tumhe. Come.
She loosed her grip, manik dropped her down.
And with that everyone's anger was back specially manik's.
Manik- pagal ho kya? Agar itne msgs aa rahe toh mujhe btana zaruri nahi samjha.
She than side hugged abhi. Abhi too hugged her.
Mukti- manik chup hoja she is not in a state of listening anything.
Aliaa was so ashamed that she left from there, dhruv also left after her.
Nandini- mujhe ghar jana hai.
Manik- chalo guys we ll drop her.

So how was it?
It has a second part if you guys want me to continue. So do tell me.
Love Vish❤️

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Bloody jerkshad 😡
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nice. god dat harshad, if he want a revenge he cn actually do that. d way nandu hugged manik and dnt let him go it ws so beautiful.
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Awesum.. Post the nxt prt soon dear if u hv written it.. Excitedly waitin😊😛
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Originally posted by: MagsDhingra

Hii guys. I am back with an OS on our manan.
Thanku to my bestie yashu who always help me in writing. So thanks a lot to her
Sorry guys if you guys have better title thqn do suggest.

Manan OS: friendship and love incomparable relations

Nandini- guys you are late.
Fab 5 was again late for practice. Manik is angry on nandini like hell for just walking away, but he has to tolerate her for the group( nothing happened, like manik's house fiasco.)
Manik- can we start?
Nandini- i am not your servant who ll keep on waiting for you guys.
Manik was hell angry but than pnly soha entered.
Soha- hi guys. How's everything going?
Nandini- all's cool soha. They are practicing properly.
All were shocked that why nandini is lieong to her.
Soha- oh than great. She than moved to manik.
Soha- hii handsome. How are you?
Manik was irritated but when he saw nandini's angry face he too played.
Manik-hi beautiful. I am fine.
Nandini kind of shouted- soha. Soha got scared so nandini controlled her anger. And said. Actually if you dont mind can we continue? Because we want to practice.
Cabir chuckled at her possessive nature.
Nandini said in anger- what? Is there anything funny?
Cabir and others were literally scared of her anger.
Cabir- nothing. Lets practice.
Soha was also scared- umm ya i should leave. You guys continue.
Nandini- bye.
After some time of practicing when they were on break.
Cabir came to manik- yar teri vali toh proper sherni hai. Dekhti hai toh lagta hai khaa jayegi.
Manik smiled at his sentence and thought in his mind. Bat toh sahi hai lagta toh hai ki kha jayegi. But pata nahi mujhse kab bat karegi.
All were sitting there only.
Aliaa- so guys what you have thought?
Mukti- aur agar usne phir koi galti kari toh?
Cabir- same question.
Aliaa- ok lets make a deal guys.
Dhruv- what?
Aliaa took a deep breath- ok so its the lqst time i am trusting him. Agar unhone dobara kuch bhi kia Toh he ll hqve to pay for it by going to lockup for his whole life
And she ran from their with tear in eyes.
Cabir- kya yar. Ek taraf aliaa hai and ek taraf my complaint.
Manik- vaise she is right for her we should take our complaint back.
Cabir- than lets go.


They all went to jail to get him out of lockup.
Everything was going smoothly fab 5 were rehearsing properly, harshad was quiet or we should say trying to make some plan to take revenge, and manik and nandini were same. Nandini was not able to recognise her feelings and manik wasstill angry on her.
Both were right at there places, communication gap was there but because of abhimanyu's advises nandini was trying to overcome her fears.
Abhimanyu- so whats new?
Nandini- nothing bas vohi me and manik again fought. Dont know what should i do.
They were talking when nandini got a message.

Message:-
If you want to see manik alive than come on college's terrace. Agar kisi ko bhi bataya to he ll be dead.

Nandini's mobile dropped from her hand and without thinking twice she ran to terrace.
Abhimanyu called her out but she didn't listen
Than abhimanyu took her mobile and read the messages.

Message 1:-
If you want to see manik alive than come on college's terrace. Agar kisi ko bhi bataya to he ll be dead.

Message2 :-
Manik will be dead. Beaware.

Message 3:-
Manik in danger. If you can than save him.
Abhimanyu ran to terrace but while going there he listened music and heard fab 5. He entered in and was shocked to see manik there safe and sound.

Mukti- you? You are again here?
Manik was also angry because nandini spend lot of time with him.
He was about to say something but abhimanyu spoke abhimanyu- shut up plz. My friend is in danger.
Cabir- who?
Abhi- Nandu. Guys see this. Than he showed them the mobile.
Manik- oh shit. Itne messages or usne mujhe kuch nahi batya.
Abhi- mujhe bhi nahi. Anyway i have to protect her.
Manik- i ll also come.
All boys left.


Scene shifted to terrace.

Nandini opened the door of terrace and searched for manik. But noone was there.
She was crying like hell whe she heard closing of door, she turned and saw 4-5 boys with harshad.

Nandini- harshad tum?
Harshad- itni jaldi bhul gayi mujhe? Because of you only i went to jail. He grabbed her arm and digged his nails in her flush- hows dare you ditch me?
Nadini winced in pain- uh r hurting me harshad.
Harshad- you also did the same.
Nandini shouted- uh deserved it.
And with that harshad slapped her hard, so hard that her lip was bleeding and with the force she fell on floor.
Harshad- you bitch. Yeh toh meri sister ka love hai jo i am out. I assured her that i have changed. But i ll not leave you, i ll spoil your life.
He held her and was about to kiss her but she slapped him, he was so angry that he slapped her again and tore the sleeves of top.
He ordered the boys to hold her hands.
Nandini was crying like hell.

Scene shifted to fab 5.
Manik and all were running like mad people, they were in stairs when they heard harshad saying about aliaa. Aliaa was shameful and shocked.
The door was closed abhi and manik pushed in 2-3 times and oppend it.
All were shocked to see nandini and harshad on him.
Manik was so angry that he just roared his named and bounced on him.

Harshad was about to kiss her when she heard manik's voice and bouned on him. Nandini was there lying on floor ashamed of herself.
Abhimanyu came to Nandu and gave him his jacket and went to boys to beat them.
Manik was beating harshad, he saw her in pain and wanted to kill him there and than. But cabir came to him.
Cabir- bhai tu nandini ke pas jaa she needs you a lot.
Mukti hugged nadini tightly- chup ho jaye. Kuch nahi hoga hum aa gaye na. Bas bas chup.
Nandini was crying like a baby in his arms when manik approached them.
Manik- nandini.
Nandini left Mukti and jumped on manik, she hugged him and wound her arms around his waist like a baby.
Mukti was shocked by her action but she loved that moment. Than his eyes landed on abhi who was beating harshad mercilessly, first she thought that he likes her the mere thought made her angry. But than his next words made her happy and gained more respect from her.
Abhi- saale meri behen ko marega. Aaj ke baad use hath bhi lagaya toh jaan le lunga teri.
By that time aliaa reached there with principal and police.
Aliaa- inspector plz arrest bhai and other goons also.
Harshad- aliaa.
Aliaa- shut up bhai not this time. Never contact me now.
All left except fab5 abhi and nandu.
Abhi came to nandini who was still hugging manik and crying.
Abhi- come nandu.
Nandu hugged manik more tightly and denied.
Abhi- hum sab hai yaha kuch nahi hoga tumhe. Come.
She loosed her grip, manik dropped her down.
And with that everyone's anger was back specially manik's.
Manik- pagal ho kya? Agar itne msgs aa rahe toh mujhe btana zaruri nahi samjha.
She than side hugged abhi. Abhi too hugged her.
Mukti- manik chup hoja she is not in a state of listening anything.
Aliaa was so ashamed that she left from there, dhruv also left after her.
Nandini- mujhe ghar jana hai.
Manik- chalo guys we ll drop her.

So how was it?
It has a second part if you guys want me to continue. So do tell me.
Love Vish❤️

beautiful..please,you should to continue.. is very nice
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awww lovely story!!
that jerkshad🤢
poor nandhu hope manik confronts her!!
continue soon waiting for it!!
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wow it is awesome 👏...so long waala update ...just loved it plz-2 continue it soon dear 😊

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