Arnav, the over-protective, possessive husband is irreristable :-)
Originally posted by: cocoamob
Writing a story set 75 years ago needs a lot of research - the circumstances, the people, clothes, language, ideas of what is acceptable in society and what is not, medicines that were available then and so much more. And you are doing a wonderful job in doing all that research and weaving it into your story so well that is just blends in.
Arnav, the over-protective, possessive husband is irreristable :-)Physically they are completely in tune with each other - have to wait and see how they learn to compromise, sacrifice, adjust and build a future together ?
Originally posted by: addicted25
π π π first AWESOME!
it has just occurred to me, Resistance, has the story now moved on from the resistance against the Raj, to Resitance of her love for Arnav? The first part where she realises that from now on his room is now their room, she will be sharing his room with him. Then she watches him shave, but her actions make him nick himself, and she then has to go and make sure he is ok. She cares, actually loves him so much yet is still fighting it. Maybe if she can explain her memories to him he will feel differently?
It was a very touching chapter, both of them can feel the electricity between them, yet she is still resisting him. Now she has become sick, how is he going to explain that to his parents who have entrusted her to him, their own son?, yet he let her, he could have brought her in. Slept on the floor if she wouldnt share the bed. How very star plusπ
I loved how you showed his myriad of thoughts, the need to take care of her, yet feeling uncomfortable about changing her clothes... gosh wouldnt it have been less than letting his mother do it for her, withehim in the same room? But he did eventually do the right thing. Hopefully her resistance will now break down, or will it, has the story just begun?
Absolutely love your writing. Cant wait for the next chapter x
Originally posted by: john-angad
everyboday would predict from hushis behaviour that she has a very active wedding night...if only they knew! now arnav is terrified of he fever and i wonder how she will react when she wakes up
As he holds on to that hand tightly ...[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z1UEk2Bdzw0[/YOUTUBE]
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