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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: yazhi
awesome... fabulous...
perfect couple ishra
their convo was cute..
emotions of shagun was very well penned
atlast she realised she had spoiled her life and house with her own hands..
but tooo late...

perfect start of a os for this new year 2015.. loved it

Hey!

Thanks a lot yaa!

REally glad you liked the way Shagun's emotions were described..

Thanks again :)

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Completely, thoroughly and irrevocably in love with this shot. How I loved the diary entry and the conversation and kiss that followed!

Indeed it's cheers to Shagun's stupidity that Ishita got this life today! 😃

Hi meri jaan!

Really? Thanks a lot yaara! Terrese yehi ummeed thi mko.. :P

I really dont like the diary part personally.. but since you say its good, i accept it😉

lol yeah! She's a stupid confused soul.. and she needs to get a life!

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Priya

@BombayPonnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Hey priya
I guess this is the first work I am personally reading from you.
That's amazing. I love it n would like to read more from u now on.
Keep it up n cheers to shagunya n her stupidity! 😃
Happy new year n stay blessed.

Hey Di!

okay.. we havent interacted really and i dont know how to address you.. Hope Di works fine :)

I really feel glad that you liked the story.. and im actually dancing at the fact that you want to read more from me.. you made my day🤗🥳

Thanks a lot for the comment :) and really glad you like it :)

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ishra123
Awesome update

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
It was so nice..the emotions of shagun is so beautifully written.. The diary part was so lovely..

Originally posted by: shavi2311
excellnt...
thanks fr pm...

Originally posted by: cutie782
Firstly new year wishes to u buddy...
Awesome superbbb os though I hate shagun's character this particular os in shagun's pov is just amazing...👏👏

Originally posted by: shinseen
Awesome ...loved it

Hey guys!

Thanks a ton for the comments! Really glad you liked the update

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: RomComFan
This is just beautiful Priya!👏

Not sure why you are unsatisfied, it's a look ta an ordinary moment that works so well.

Your portrayal of Shagun is very well done- not overly 'vamp'; just a very misguided woman full of regrets and and a sense of desperation. I can understand and appreciate that. I love that she witnessed such a normal moment between the couple that says more about their affection for each other then any real intimate moment could.

Terrific job once again, I can't believe you posted two pieces of writing so close together!

hey there :)
Pehle toh naam batado yaar! I dont even know what to call you..

I was unsatisfied mainly because i was really blank when i wrote this and i didnt know what i was typing.. im really relieved it turned out fine..

Im glad you like the way Shagun was portrayed.. thanks for the appreciation..
well sometimes a normal gesture of care concern and affection can create a magic that even physical intimacy cant. Hence this..

hehe! i cant believe i posted two pieces of writings so close together either.. But i needed to get this out of my system.. Bas frustration nikalna tha..

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
awesome...loved the way shagun realised her stupidity...
absolutely loved this piece of work

Originally posted by: Arooj.M
Lovely OS!

Originally posted by: JniISHRA83
Superb👏

Originally posted by: florine_20
Awesome

Originally posted by: VENBA
A beautiful os...
Loved it,,
So brilliantly written...
Happy new year..Have a great and successful new year..😊😊

Hello guys!

Thanks a ton for the lovely comments.. really glad you liked it..

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
Lovely OS Priya..
Perfectly well descried emotions..
Its good she knows what she has lost and what she cannot ever get back no matter how much she tries.
Loved the IshRa bits, specially the diary part. Perfect! ⭐️👏

Thanks for the super OS and the PM :)

I still am yet to catch up with your new SS..Will surely do so soon! :D Ohh yes, and a very happy new year to you too!! 😳😳

Hey!

Thanks a lot yaa! Really glad you think its good..
Hope she figures that out in the show too.. But high hopes ho jayega naa woh..

You're welcome for the PM..

Will be waiting for your comments on the SS as well :)

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: nabni
Awesome OS.

Why eggs and tomatoes?????? You need standing ovation for this kind of writings.👏 I am serious.

I wonder if CVs can handle our show with such maturity.

Instead of showing Shagun's dirty n cheap tactics,they could have shown Shagun's character in a tolerable way.

Hey!

Thanks a ton.. Really? well, im honoured..

The CV's have no sense of maturity and they have proved that time and again.. Iss baar bhi im sure its no exception..

@Bold totally agree with this part..

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice one-shot..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Ardor
Thank for pm
Amazing OS...dairy part was superb...loved how u wrote about shagun observing bhallas routine and regretting at what she had lost.

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Fab

Originally posted by: AARMAY1
amazing... loved it.

Hey guys!

Thanks a lot! Really glad you like it:)

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