Originally posted by: Yhm-KaruDivu
Very nice going all . Waiting curiously for each and every part . But can anyone inform me where is the 2nd part ?
Scene starts in Srinagar...wer raman is thinking about ruhi nd hw he loved her daughter, remembering all the good times with her nd her hw cutely she use to call him PAPA...he is caressing her pic nd crying nd saying meri RU...please come soon papa is missing u...
In delhi Bhalla's nd Iyers's are in same society...They are opposite to each other...bt they didn't notice...In Iyer's place...ishu is running behind ruhi...fr making her brush nd bath..bt ruhi is nt listening nd running faster...while running ruhi is saying run fast nd catch otherwise I wont bath... finally ishu gets hold of ruhi nd starts tickling her...ruhi giggles...Mr & Mrs. Iyer are very happy by seeing ishu nd ruhi lik this...
Ruhi is selecting clothes fr ishu as it is their daily routine...ishu only wears what ruhi selects fr her nd further arguments on it... Ishu nd ruhi are on break fast table...only ishu should feed ruhi... she wont eat from other person hands r by herself... so ishu mak sure tht she wil only feed ruhi...because she wil stay hungry bt she wont touch the food...
Mr.Iyer went to bring som grocery nd met Mr.bhalla...they are close friends nd due to career reasons they parted... Mr.bhalla recognises Mr.iyer nd thy involve takking abt their past life...bt never mentioned about ishita r raman r ruhi...
Ishu calls appa... nd says did he buyed every thing needed fr party...he says yes nd she asks him to come soon as ruhi is sleeping now nd she can complete the arrangmnts... mr.iyer invites mr.bhalla to his home...as there is surprise b'day fr his pothi(grand daughter) mr.bhalla remembers ruhi nd gets sad...bt mr.bhalla says they wil definatly come nd moves to their respective houses...
Mr.Bhalla says to everyone about party bt mrs.bhalla sasy its their b'day pothi b'day too nd says I don't want to go...all becomes sad nd decideds not to go...
In iyer's house ishu completely decorates ruhi's room with teddy's , ballons nd kept Barbie theme...she takes her to her room at night 12 AM... ruhi observes every thing nd shouts in excitement...ishra in UNISON says HAAPY BIRTH DAY ruhi(ishu nd saying to ruhi nd raman saying this to ruhi's pic...in srinagar) nd Ruhi says Happy b'day to Ishimaa... ruhi tells her she will celebrate her b'day wen she celebrates it...to vch ishu says we both celebrates our b'day...( it is the day wen ishu took ruhi with her nd I made it ruhi's real b'day tooo...) Ishu nd ruhi celebrate their b'day nd cut the cake...a lone tear passes from ishu nd mr.nd mrs.iyes eyes...as hw ruhi beautifully changed their life nd hw happy ishita is...
P.S: I hop it really reached ur expectations..nd vikas I think I didn't let down ur part...
Originally posted by: AllezJustine
Dear friends commitment is something very important and this story can only work if everyone is committed and we work as a team
Due to lack of communication I had to make a decision so this can move smoothly there for shavi2311 will be writing the second part.Everyone the numbers have changed a little so be ready for your turn and I hope you make it even more interesting Shivani, best of luck
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