Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa
Wish I had more time to express myself ...sigh
Beautiful! So touching :)
Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa
Wish I had more time to express myself ...sigh
Beautiful! So touching :)
Originally posted by: MidnightMusings
Aani π€
First of all, great title genius. Even before I read I was curious, wondering how a stranger can be familliar or how someone familliar can turn to stranger. Honestly, didnt expect an os on Adi.
Like I said, I love this track for Adi in Bhalla house more than anything shown right now.. And this is exactly why.
Adi's turmoil, and him feeling out of place. The confusion, the insecurity and the fear. Him having the blind faithon shagun while unwrapping the gift. Only to get a reality check. while Ishita Raman together ensure that he gets the love by their acts.
Love it, the last line is beautiful. Looking forward to a new day *Brilliant*
Wonderful Aani!
Originally posted by: janu12345
Pankha alert... πAnother beautiful OS in quick succession...and I am a happy person.. ππ³I hope you are inspired time and again... π³Adi ... one of the most complex and troubled characters in the family.. to get him back on track is a huge task... depending on how they do it will make a beautiful track.. but right now I am keeping my expectations in check!!πAwesome take on the upcoming Christmas party...πAdi wants to be loved.. both by his mother and father...he thinks his mother loves him.. this expectation you can see in every gift he opens...he believes her love is the only truth in his life.. if ever he finds out otherwise the kid would be broken beyond repair..! That his dad loves him as much is a wish the kid has but not an expectation... when his dad does everything that he wanted the kid is going to be in a bigger dilemma... ( I dread the actor's expressions.. but nevertheless.. getting used to it slowly π)The lack of relationship between his mother and father... his estrangement from his dad...the budding romance between his dad and step mother... the unconditional love both his sister and step mother have for him (he has always been told otherwise)... a family who love him unconditionally...at this age its quite a bit for the kid to deal with... you have touched upon all these aspects of the Adi's character... and I am your pankha all over again..ππ. I wish they show even something close to what you have written... Adi getting back to track has to happen gradually.. and this would be a perfect start...π³Well if they dont show... I have imagined this scene the way you have written it.. I would just play it in my head again...πππPS: Sorry... lammmba ho gaya without realizing! π
Originally posted by: Jaaneman98
Awesome!!! Adi's fellings were so well described
The OS was so nice! Thanks for the PM π
aww loved it
feel for adi- but there's still time and i hope ishra's goodness drives away the venom
Just awesome...
Loved the way u wrote in Adi's point of view...Brilliantly written...ππ
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