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Posted: 8 years ago
first of all happy b'day sanyu once again it was awsme sanyu is too great she can do anything she will never let the team face any problem this rajveer I so wanna kill him omg sanyu hurt rd caring for her he cnt see her like this sanyu confused with her feelings omg priya too got hurt now DT is in problem I'm sure sanyu will dance updte soon wtng
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb updateee...😉


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsm update!!
Girls were indeed good to handle the situation
Sanyu hurt,piya got fractured her leg!!
Dance!???
Hope sanyu dances and take control over the situation!!
Waiting for the next update!!😊
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😊😊 Edited by anu5 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome...
Happy bday, bday girl-Sanyu...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guys I have already written chapter 28

Agar jaldi updaye chahiye toh comment and like fast...

Warna update will be pending for u all

So time khoti mat karo aur na hi kanjusi karo...
Sirf like and comment karo
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CHAPTER 28









The crowd was getting out of control for the volunteers and Dream Team.

Arav-"Sanyu? Please tell me what to do?"

Arushi-"yes we will not be able to control them for long"

But Sanyukta was all quiet. Looking at her shocked face, Randhir decided to call off the opening ceremony.

Rd-"Arav call it the end. Now"

Arav-"what? But that will harm the image of college !"

Rd-"do as I say."

With no options left, Arav decided to do as Randhir suggested. He was about to announce it when a voice roared on his headphone, "STOP... JUST STOP"

"Sanyukta?" Came Arushi's confused voice.

Sanyu-"we cannot give up like this."

Yoyo-"but what can we do now? We have no other option."

Sanyu-"we have. Randhir" she looked at him.

Rd-"what me? I cannot dance."

Sanyu-"shut up. You will go on stage and perform what you can, sing a song"

Rd-"what? And how can I sing it abruptly? I need practice"

Jiggy-"moreover we can earn bonus when we dance, and not on singing. Are you in your senses?"

Sanyu-"I am in complete sense and I know what I am doing. I don't need to explain anything to you all, coz I am the Captain. (She said in a soft yet stern voice) and Randhir you can sing. Remember you told me you have your faith in me? And guys you all trust me,? So do as I say, So now just close your eyes take a deep breathe and sing it out. Sing out what you feel and you will see the magic it creates.I trust you Randhir. Just go now." She assured him.

Arav and Arushi made the announcement and RaNdhir was on stage with his guitar.

Randhir looked at the whole crowd, his Team and finally his eyes laid upon his inspiration, who was standing there and assuring him with her eyes and wishing lucks.

He closed his eyes and her words echoed in his brains, "sing out what you feel and you will watch the magic it creates." Oh ! How be could tell her that his heart only felt for her and nobody else.

He could play her smile in his head and with that he gripped the guitar tightly.

The whole crowd was booing around but he could only remember her face and her word 'I TRUST YOU'. And the magic started.

Ruhaani si ik shaam hogi
Halki teri usmein aawaaz hogi
Ruhaani si ik shaam hogi
Halki teri usmein aawaaz ho

Tu naa jaaye kabhi, aitbaar karun
Tu naa jaaye kabhi, khuda se ye hi kahun

Main jo bhi hoon jaisa hoon
Tujhme rehta khota hoon
Tu mera aaj hai, mera kal hai
Meri zindagi ki duaa (x2)

Tu dua hai, tu hi hai mera karam
Tujhpe hi shuru, tujhpe hi khatam (x2)

Shehron mein galiyon mein
Apno mein parayon mein
Dhoondha tujhe hai

Shehron mein galiyon mein
Apno mein parayon mein
Dhoondha tujhe ke

Mil jaaye mujhe, tu kahin roobaru
Tu hi dikhe, main jahan rahun

Main jo bhi hoon jaisa hoon
Tujhme rehta khota hoon
Tu mera aaj hai, mera kal hai
Meri zindagi ki duaa (x2)

Tu dua hai, tu hi hai mera karam
Tujhpe hi shuru, tujhpe hi khatam...

The crowd was now swaying to his beats and they forgot the boos they were hooting. Instead they were clapping for this melodious voice.

Randhir looked around to find everybody appreciating his performance but the face he was looking for was missing. He bowed down and left the stage.

Backstage his whole team was cheering for him.

Kaustu-"superb Randhir."

Randhir-"thanx guys. But where is Sanyukta?"

"Sanyukta?" Said Piya who was sitting on a chair thanks to her leg.

Rd-"its ohk Arav-Arushi you go on stage before the crowd starts their hooting. Go and wrap it up."

Arushi and Arav went on stage, while the team started looking around for Sanyukta.

Arushi-"so guys hope you all enjoyed yourselves" the crowd responded in yes.

Arav-"we also enjoyed ourselves and now its time to wrap..." his words were left in middle as the lights went off.

Yoyi-"what happened to lights?"

Rd-"looks like somebody is surely trying to mess with us. Lets go and check" they ran but were stopped in middle as a voiceover played.

"Swagat nhi karoge humara? party toh abhi shuru hui hai. Kyuki hum jaha khade hote hai line wahi se shuru hoti hai. Ab aap sochenge main kaun hu? Toh main na apni favourite hu. Because I AM THE BEST."

N they could hear sound of somebody's feet.

Sahil-"what is this new trouble yaar?"

The whole crowd was in pin drop silence to look at the unknown voice.


Dress of performer(golden one)




Tu ru ru...

Mujhko hui na khabar
Chori chori chhup chhup kar

(They could see a figure coming whistling)

Mujhko hui na khabar
Chori chori chhup chhup kar
Kab pyaar ki pehli nazar
Hay

Le gayee le gayee
Dil le gayee le gayee
Le gayee le gayee
Dil le gayee le gayee

(That person started dancing but the lights were still dim. Hence anybody could not see her face)

Mujhko hui na khabar
Chori chori chhup chhup kar
Kab pyaar ki pehli nazar
Hay

Le gayee le gayee (hy hey)
Dil le gayee le gayee (hy hey)
Le gayee le gayee (hy hey)
Dil le gayee le gayee (hy hey)
Le gayee le gayee (hy hey)
Dil le gayee le gayee

(She repeated the steps)

O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye mera

(And it was the time when the lights came bright and everybody were able to see the fave of the dancer)

Ishq fikar da chadde palla
Mauj karda ho ke jhalla jeeve...
Ishq mein dil na
Hoyea fakeeri
Maange sab ki
Khair sukayya, jeeve..

Gira deeware...
Laga lalkare...
Ishq di masti de
Vich sone de jaage...yeah...

Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve..
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...

O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye mera

O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye mera

( Dancer-"Armaano ki chadar udhe,
Rukh kia sooraj ka.
Aaj toh uss aag ke gole se aankhen mila, usse bhi harana hai.
Bahot jee liye hum kinaro par,
Ab dariya ko chir kar par jaana hai.
Kashti humari kisi patvaar ki mohtaaj nhi,
Kyuki ab apne hoslon se samundar paar, uss mandir mei dip jalana hai.")

Jazba aa..
Kaante rehne de gulaab tod le
Neendo ki tehniyon se khwab tod le
Ho o Kaante rehne de gulaab tod le
Neendo ki tehniyon se khwab tod le

Khwahisho ki hai kahaniya padi
Chun le kahaniya kitaab jod le
Pheeki hai zindagi toh yaara
Padh le dil ka ishaara
Saara badal de nazara
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba hoye
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba hoye
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba

Jazba aa..
Zara sa zara sa jaga le jazba
Zara sa zara sa jaga le jazba

Kya karein kya nahi
Khali khayalo mein paseena kya bahana
Behtar hai yehi
Karke dikhane ke tareeke aazmana
Kitne munh utne hi baaton mein tu naa jaana
Dil ki hi tu sun.na dil ko apni sunwa na
Sapno ke pahiyon ko yaara
Speed limit na gawana
Khuli udaano ne pukara
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba hoye
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba hoye
Jaga le tu jaga le jazba

Jaga le jaga le
Jazbaa aa...

Hey yeah..
Hey yeah..
Thap thapa tu zara
Lazy iraado ki tu sustiyaa chhuda le
Dabdaba hai tera
Raahon ki mushqilon se kushtiyaa lada le
Jo hoga so hoga hone de naa ghabrana
Tu apni koshish mein kanjoosi na kar jaana
Kismat ki lehron pe yaara
Le ke nikal tu shikara
Chamkega tera bhi sitara

Jagale tu jagale jazba haaye
Jagale tu jagale jazba
Jagale tu jagale jazba hoye
Jagale tu jagale jazba

Na na na.. Jazba..
Hey ya, hey ya, jagale..

(Dancer-"to the ones who try to mess with me. This is me, so you better think before messing with me. )

Tedhe medhe raaston ko
Seedha mein banadoon
Mujhe jo sikhane aaye
Usse mein sikhadoon
Who the hell are you
To tell me what to do
Roz khud hi mein likhhon
Aur khud hi mein mitadoon
You better not mess with me
Mere dil mein joh aaye
Mein woh karoon
You better not mess with me
Kisi se bhi aakhir
Haan mein kyun daroon
Just leave me alone
I want to be on my own
Kyun chup rahoon
Mein kyun sab sahoon...o... 

Hothon ko kya seena
Who the hell are you
To tell me what to do
Mujhe hai pasand
Bas issi tarah jeena
Better not mess with me
Meri saanson mein bada zor hai
You better not mess with me...i..
Meri dhadkanon mein bhi shor hai
Just leave me alone
I want to be on my own
Kyun chup rahoon
Mein kyun sab sahoon...o...

Khula hai aasmaan
Jis mein band hoon
Apne bas mein nahi
Lekin bas mein hi hoon
Mere andar mere andar
Ik toofaan hai
Mere andar mere andar
Har subaha shaam hai...ehe...

Jo bhi chaha na mila
Toh maine usse chinha
Keh diya toh dil mein aaya
Hothon ko kya seena
Who the hell are you
To tell me what to do
Mujhe hai pasand
Bas issi tarah jeena
Better not mess with me
Mere dil mein joh aaye
Mein woh karoon
You better not mess with me
Kisi se bhi aakhir
Haan mein kyun daroon
Just leave me alone
I want to be on my own
Kyun chup rahoon
Mein kyun sab sahoon...o...ow...


And the performance came to an end. The way She performed everybody was just in awe. The crowd was whistling, cheering, clapping and shouting F.I.T.E F.I.T.E.

Even the roars of "ONCE MORE" could be clearly heard.

BACKSTAGE

The moment the spotlight fell on the person's face only one word escaped the mouth of DT, "SANYUKTA?!?!"

While some were smiling, others were confused and shock was common to all. The way she danced to the beats it was looking mesmerising. It was like she was breathing it.

First among them to break the silence was Yoyo.

Yoyo-"anarkali" and he whistled and cheering for her.

Piya too, despite the pain in her leg, stood up with Arush's help to watch her sister dancing after 10 long years.

Everyone, be it backstage or in audience, was just swaying and loving the performance.

Arush-"but Sanyukta had sprained her leg badly. She was unable to stand also. Then how can she dance like this?"

FLASHBACK

When Sanyukta heard about Piya's accident and that how will the team loose not only the bonus points but also its image if a performance is not done, she went into deep thoughts.

The only word she could remember was of her Vardhan bhai. How he trusted her with the responsiblity of sucha huge fest. How can she break the trust of so many people just for a past? Will it be correct? She cannot force anyone into this trouble, being the captain this time it was her turn to face the trouble standing her way.

She just needed a few minutes. Hence she asked Randhir to go on stage and sing so that it can deviate the audience and she knew Randhir can do this job very well.

SANYUKTA'S P.O.V.

I send Randhir on stage. But what now? I mean how can I perform something which I left 10 years back. That too without any practice infront of such a huge crowd.

No Sanyu ! You cannot give up now. You need to do it. Right nkw you were lucturing Randhir, amd nkw you yourselg are getting nervous?

Yaa but it is oblvious to get nervous. Right?

Wrong. This is not the time to get nervous. So relax take deep breathes, close your eyes. I closed my eyes and the beautiful memkry came running. I was drowning in the memory lane and that dreadful moment was going to appear when I opened my eyes. I could feel myself sweating, but I was calmed by the melodious voice of Randhir. This guy pacifies me unknowingly.

I limped, I could feel the pain in my leg. I cannot bear this, damn! No Sanyukta you can and you will do it. I changed my clothes with great difficulty, Randhir's performance was over.

Arav and Arushi were going to call the night off. I took a deep breathe switched the lights off, connected my cell with stereos.

FLASHBACK ENDS

AUTHOR'S P.O.V.

After the performance mic was in Sanyukta's hand.

Sanyu-"hello guys. Kemun acho? (How are you?) Namaskar to the respected people, love to all my friends, warm welcome to guests and.. and.. and.. my precious gift for those special folks out there who are here for special reason. You guys have earned what I give out rarely to anyone. MY HATE !! So Mr. Jealous bashers I challenge you all in open. Try out as many ways as you want. Sanyukta Agarwal is ready for game. You know what I want to thank you all for making my exciting life more happening. Don't worry I will not leave any stone unturned to give you all the royal Sanyukta special treatment. Because my rule is IF YOU LOVE ME, I WILL LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART AND SOUL; IF YOU HATE ME, I WILL HATE YOU WITH MY HEART AND SOUL. Means whatever I do, I do it with complete dedication. I hope all the participants out here also play the game with utmost dedication. We respect and expect fair game from you all, because we too believe in fair game, but... but... but if you try to play dirty I will play the dirtiest, yet in a fair way. So now enjoy and celebrate guys. Hope to see you all in the informal party, which is exactly after a week. So till then stay happy and stay blessed. Sayonara.. Hasta La Vista..."



PRECAP:- SANYUKTA-RAJVEER TASHAAN. AND AND SURPRISE
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsme update loved it sanyu so wrried she cnt lose hope like this she has firm believe on rd wow the way rd singing it was mindblowing it was really awsme he can do anything for sanyu and then the performance everybody shocked the way u described the dance sequence was commendable loved it sanyu rocked it she's really the best captain precap exciting update soon wtng
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Love the end speech
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Loved it. Can't wait for next chapter. Plz update next chapter soon and do me.