VidArth OS based on 12/12 precap || IMPENDING WISH|| - Page 2

Tich

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: vena.cava.
OMG this was such a treat to read, I actually laughed out loud at the last bit!
Thank you so much for this! 👏

Awww.. thanks dear. You commenting on my work is great honor. You know I'm a fan of your VidArth posts.

Thanks a lot again.🤗🤗

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Tich

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: anuaskif
Oh this was the impending wish... to break Varun's bones!!!!

haha... You started off with such tension among the characters and the climax... it took my heart away...

Thanks for sharing this amazing OS.. And try to continue it into an SS

hahahah yeah. impending wish of both Parth and we VidArthians. Kick out that Chomu Varun.

I may not continue it dear. But i'll keep writing more OSs.

Thanks a lot for reading and giving your feedback. Means a lot to me.

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Tich

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: .Peeves.
EEE!! That was awesome! ⭐️

awww... thank you..😃😃😃

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Tich

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: shreyad27
nice 1 😊 ab bas mon ke epi ka intezaar hai

yeah me too. I just read the spoilers that Parth breaks PKCs drone. Feeling sad. I'm glad I made different version of it before the spoilers.

Thanks for liking this one.😊

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Ashlesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Unreserved.

Added to the Index of vidarth works.

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Tich

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes
Unreserved.
Added to the Index of vidarth works.

Aww.. Thanks ash...
Please add true blood too if possible.
And can you please send me the index link?

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Ashlesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

Aww.. Thanks ash...
Please add true blood too if possible.
And can you please send me the index link?

Have already added it!

Link to the index!

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Aimy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

That was awesome yaar.
Really loved reading it,especially the last part. 🤣
And the Dteam's reaction to Parth's actions. 😆
Nicely written. Loved it!! <3

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Moony87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Moony87
RES.. 😃

Unresing.. 😊

This was straight out of my sadist dreams.. f**king Brilliant.. Parth shined like supernova here.. Ek Ek moment of this OS was a whistle maaro moment.

Grr.. Vidushi.. Only if someone could punch her too...

ANyway.. The best moment was the punch in the stomach to Varun.. Waah.. ekdum dil khush ho gaya.. LOL He confirmed with Vidushi "For you?" and hit Varun as an answer.. LOLWA.. Epic this was..

And the way he stopped Vidushi.. Superb.. Absolutely superb.. Hehe.. Sanyukta ke saath saath hamaare bhi hosh udaa gaya tumhaare OS waala Alpha Parth.. 👏👏

And the Best of all.. LOL.. vidushi ki neend udaake Aaraam se ghode bech ke soing Sadda Parth.. Howlarious.. 🤣

Waise sahi logic hai Parth ka. I completely understand.. Pyaar se zyaada aaj ke time mein kisi ko Maarna zyaada satisfaction deta hai.. 🤣🤣🤣

Epic.. COntinue this if possible.. 😆😆

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RIDDSI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

wow yaar

kya dhasu update thi

ab yeh episode mein hojaye

sandhir ke saath mujhe bhi

shock laga parth ka

yeh avatar dekh kar

he he he

but i loved this avatar

keep writing

update soon

with love

RIDDHIMA

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