Originally posted by: harsh_pree
Nice chapter
Nicely written..luv icecream scene:)
Originally posted by: harsh_pree
Nice chapter
Nicely written..luv icecream scene:)
Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
That conversation of ZaYa...oh sorry Zain and Rhea was sort of emotional...
Well writtenArre bhai.. police station kyu leke jaa rae ho??Wrong parking ya khule aam...ahem ahem..Waiting for the next update...Continue soon:-) :-)
Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Sim it is an amaizing nice beautiful awesome storyπ
literally i'm out of words u have emoted all the sentiments and feelings of zain perfectly it makes me to feel his painlπsorry i was not able to comment regularly because of examsbut i'm in love with this story u are an outstanding writerππΌu have said once that this story is going towards its i have a request plz come with another one after ending it.π³
Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya
nice update..kinda funny lol..
Loved it..
Cont soon..
Thanx for d pm.. :)
Originally posted by: robsten_
Thanks for the update...loved it...the cute kitkit between zain and rhea...and that cute zain too...
Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka
First time ever through this I laughed at the end imaging Harshad in a Mickey Mouse Avtaar.Thnx Sim
Hmm Now Mr.Abdullah started his Besharamgiri.Sare Aam Kissing Pecking...π...Nice one.Continue Dear.π
Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
This chapter made me laugh ! Their kitkit was way awesome and I loved the Mickey Zain I could imagine him in the attire I like such light hearted updates continue soon ! I am loving it !
Sim sim sim
HahahaI loved it cute and funny chapter...And the best thing was Mrs zain abdullahNext the cute cute dressing this would really look good on A 5 year old kid but my zain abdullah will rock this look too waiting for the next part ...K I am still smiling I wish harshad could read this I am sure he would laugh imagining himself as the cute little zain abdullah
Originally posted by: Priya_arora
Amazing chapter
He he I'm still trying to controlling my laugh π
Loved their kitkit
Waiting 4 d next part
Do cont soon
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