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Posted: 10 years ago
OSJ...Finally you posted yours...Was eagerly waiting for this one!
Ohh my my..Whatta beginning! The title...Its enough to make one blush had this not been a G fest, its so APT!..☺️☺️
" Why do you even try to do MY job? " <=== That one line..Gaawwdd..It was so SEXY! That one itself has me blushing like an idiot already...☺️☺️ Ahh, ofcourse..what followed next was ahem..HOT! Yours didn't need action..the intensity of the words is enough to make one go red! That's exactly what happened in this one too. Ahh, the beauty with which you write is simply..BRILLIANT! ⭐️👏 The last 2 lines were the cherry on the yummy cake! 😆

To put it in your brilliant words..I succumbed to your flawless writing! 😳 Thank you for that beautiful OS! <3 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
OSJ, Finally you posted ... Worth the wait it was .. This was truly the dessert after the main course.
Just loved the way she was muttering and stared in to him when he came forward to help her..
All succumb to his charm when unleashed and JKR is not different.
Just loved the way she surrendered herself to him and the way it was explained
Hot, Sensuous and what not.. I did not want the OS to end..
Lovely work 👏👏👏, I blushed blushed and blushed ☺️☺️☺️
Thank you for this
Edited by arunabhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Okk aruna di

i read the updated version
its wonderful yr
really..raman ne ishu ki achi band bajadi
good job divya u asked for update



hahaha .. Thanks for reading it ..
Puttar ☺️☺️...
I will have to tell her today
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona

Arunabhi..that was haawwwttt..i cant imagine such a strip show between ishra..but i would love to see it in real...it will be such a treat to our eyes along with his oneliners. Am sure our gutterish minds cant rest for a few days..it was great..



Thanks a lot .. I am just liking the comments I am receiving for this OS. Well, We can only imagine and I really doubt if its going to happen in real. Ofocurse yes ! who can match his one liners.
Our gutter minds will go berserk for sure.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

@ Aruna : Loved the edited version! <33 The best version of carom.! BAS! ☺️☺️☺️
She gave in eventually before he could discard the last piece of cloth. Poor soul..😆 Kudos to Divya for making you edit it and add more hotness.! And obviously, thanks to you too! 😳😳



Wah !!!! My G queen has certified it 👏👏👏👏.. What more can I ask for 😳😳.. Who can handle Puttar's hotness for so long.. Too difficult.. Hotness ka dukkhan.. Yes I should def tell Divya about it .
Thanks a lot Anu !!!..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Terrific job all of you! What an amazing away to celebrate the anniversary!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haaye very sweet dessert to the feast
Thanks, had a G good time here :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Osj...that was totally magic☺️ still reeling under the spell
loved ur style of writing.👏
thanks for the pm buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

OSJ...Finally you posted yours...Was eagerly waiting for this one!
Ohh my my..Whatta beginning! The title...Its enough to make one blush had this not been a G fest, its so APT!..☺️☺️
" Why do you even try to do MY job? " <=== That one line..Gaawwdd..It was so SEXY! That one itself has me blushing like an idiot already...☺️☺️ Ahh, ofcourse..what followed next was ahem..HOT! Yours didn't need action..the intensity of the words is enough to make one go red! That's exactly what happened in this one too. Ahh, the beauty with which you write is simply..BRILLIANT! ⭐️👏 The last 2 lines were the cherry on the yummy cake! 😆

To put it in your brilliant words..I succumbed to your flawless writing! 😳 Thank you for that beautiful OS! <3 😃


Now u r got me blushing by your comments together with these blushing profusely emos 😳
Thank u very much. I tried my best to play with the words to explain the love and the passion between the two rather than the detailed action,
I am very pleased to see that u guys r finding it hot. 😳
Thank u again.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabhi

OSJ, Finally you posted ... Worth the wait it was .. This was truly the dessert after the main course.
Just loved the way she was muttering and stared in to him when he came forward to help her..
All succumb to his charm when unleashed and JKR is not different.
Just loved the way she surrendered herself to him and the way it was explained
Hot, Sensuous and what not.. I did not want the OS to end..
Lovely work 👏👏👏, I blushed blushed and blushed ☺️☺️☺️
Thank you for this



Thank u😳
Well you guys finding my work hot enough to b out here is in itself a great achievement. Though I have written many stories on IshRa, some cute, some romantic, sone quite hot, I still was nervous for this one.
Glad u liked it.

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