SaAz OS : Of the Moons and The Woods 13/11 (Index on pg12)

WaqtZaya thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Most Comments (August 2021) 1 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#1


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


Created

Last reply

Replies

80

Views

12200

Users

42

Likes

163

Frequent Posters

shonayaa thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
firstly sorry for unressing so  dam late ..
it was a fab ,cutie shutie os❤️👏
you described his routine so well..an her innocent antics
i loved nick names gabbar chaudharyan and design baaz
he confessed his love for her and in a wink of an eye they had exchanged their wows 
past memories were described flawlessly
ankie i loved your passion overboard😳 and the tittle too🤗
p.s though i'm late i'm still at first place
Edited by smj7 - 9 years ago
subhkisonu thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Ankie is back with a bang!!!!
🤗

I have already expressed my feelings about this OS to you on WA😳
I can see the old Ankie , "Taabeez" wali Ankie once again😳
it is just beautiful! so romantic, musical and soothing😳
I loved the last para most

And that last line "Passion overboard" just took  my breath away☺️

Loved loved loved it!!! Buss!!!❤️
Edited by subhkisonu - 9 years ago
Snow_kf thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Lovely OS.                                 Loved it so much.
roserox99 thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Wow, this is exceptional!
You have an amazing talent Ankie! 
Write more! 😃😃😃
Homeslice thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Ankyy Babbyy! <3
This was superb! I love how you showed them married and took us into a flashback. The use of the word "baaz" was well done. I love Sahir's character here, the way how you potrayed him. And last when Arzoo in her sleep says "SGC" was the cherry on the cake! Superb. 

Keep the good work coming <3

Love,
Nish
Edited by TeriGalliyan. - 9 years ago
VandyP thumbnail
Anniversary 15 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
omg!!!!!!
this was good!!
humpty baby...ye dil maange more
-DarkSlayer- thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Mine! 😊

Unres.

It has been so long since I read some of your works and Allah knows why I am so damn in love with them. Absolute perfection Ankie! Loved it to the core. The fact that the dialogues were minimal was fab. That just added to the beauty of the couple itself. I loved how it was from Sahir's POV and how he reflects on the life he had until she came into his life. The worsd exchanged at the end were simply amazing and then yes, the "passion overboard" had me going gaga. Lol. 

The moment I started reading I couldn't stop. My eyes were glued to the screen, simply soaking up every single word, period, comma, exclamation that you wrote. Naturally, when it ended I was on the verge of crying because I wanted to read more and more. Girl, I missed your writing. If time had been lenient on me I would've continued reading all your works but it didn't. I'm so glad I took some time off to read this. Reminded me what I have been missing out on and specially what a fool I am. 

Awestruck, amazed, and SaAzified. Thanks so much and please write more on SaAz. Dying to read more of your works. Drats, it's time I hunt down your index again. I remember those AsYa works and gosh they are calling out to me😃. 

Love ya! 
❤️
Akira (or better known by my middle name: Raz)
Edited by AmbroseFever - 9 years ago
Urooj.HCiansx thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
OMG Ankie dearest  
I loved this OS wah wah good job  👏 
Keep it up!! You rocks ❤️👍🏼
Alone111 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Whoa... U hv started write on them...!!!!
Uuummm y I m not surprised !? Haha..

Okie... 1stly sry... I did try to imagine saAz while I reading it...
Hut u knw it was difficult for me to do so :-\

Mere dimag mein tho mangalpuri asya hi the *sign*

But I seriously loved it.. It was so beautiful is ankie...
Simple nd lvly one <3
Nd end of the chappy was cute...

Do write more... I knw u ll ;-)