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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi frnds,thank you all ,excuses if any grametical or spelling mistakes

and here is the next part
Original writer Soumya
Part-4:



(In Mumbai)

He enters a New Year party with his friends after long back because he came back to India last week from London after completion of his higher studies

While he enjoying the party he hears a giggle sound from a group of girls,but he can't find exact one.

After some time

He is on the way to washroom talking with someone on phone.

A girl hurries to the washroom and dashes him,his phone falls on the floor. And her phone also

Girl: - Oh my God! I am so sorry!

He:who is facing down gets up - Don't worry, It's...my mis...take

He was mesmerized by her beauty. Her bigger wider eyes and pink lips, long hair, slim waist.the entire world stops some time to him. She is saying something, but his ears stop working. His eyes only working specially to watch her expressions. His Heart beat already stopped before some seconds. She wore a blue jeans with a pink shirt and a scarf around her neck nothing else, but she looking so beautiful to him like an angle. Something magic around her.

Girl : no no it's my mistake I am really sorry,I am in hurry,I am really really sorry.

Suddenly power gone. His eyes missing her that few seconds also.

Power comes back.

He :(coming to his sences)looks around.

all are shouting "HAPPY NEW YEAR".

They look each other and both at a time says "happy new year"

Both smiles at each other.

Both picks another's phone, they exchanges their phones.

Once again greet each other and she moved from there.

He(st):oh god!what a new year!!may be this is love year for me!

After some time:

He back to the party with his frnds ,but his eyes was searching for her,and again he hears that same giggle sound from one corner but this time he figerout her from few inches distance with some other guy holding her hand

He :are yaar!ye vahi ladki!

At same moment she looks at ram and smiles with hello sign

He replys with same smile

Girl :with hands sign "may I come there?"

He :" yes nod".

But she came with that guy holding his hand with her

Girl : "hello! I am priya...priya sharma"

He :"hai! i am ram...ram Kapoor"

Priya:nice to meet u and he is my fiancee "ashwin..Ashwin Khorana"

Ram: "nice to meet u too"

Priya:u know Ashwin?he is the first one in my new year!right ram?

Ram:yes u r the first one in my new life,I mean my first new year,I just entered in to my business life

Priya:congrats..but this is the last new year for us as bachelors

We are getting married soon, we love each other since 5 years. This is the bachelors party for us

Ram:congrats yaar!

Btw wt r u doing mr.Ashwin?

Ashwin:me and Priya are doctors just completed our internships.

Ram:oh both of u doctors!great combination,made for each other.

Both are blushed at each other.but ram face changes with that news ,they both are in love...

At the same time ram phone rings

Ram:excuse me!u guys carry on ..

priya and ashwin back to the party and enjoyed

Ram came back to the party after some time and watched both ,priya and ashwin laughing with each other

Ram(st):don't know why I am feeling bad for their relation?wt happened to me?i just saw her before 2 or 3 hours. But I can't see her with him, annoyed with himself.

Ram drinks more than his usual days and watching ashwin and Priya

At that time ashwin went to attend a call

A group of guys watching priya from some time and mixed some drugs into her juice

Unaware of Priya drinks more than 2 or three glasses

Ashwin on phone call:

Ashwin:hello maa!

Ashwin's mom:hello Ashwin!kaha thi tum?

Ashwin:maa! I am in a new year party with my frnds

Ashwi's mom:party?priya bi tere saath?

Ashwin:ha maa!she is with me

Ashwin's mom:kithne bhar maine kaha shadi se pehele aisa nahi mil sakthe,tume maloom nahi rituals?

Ashwin:maa!i am sorry ,frnds ne force kiya,isiliye aana pada.

Ashwin's mom:teeke,abhi se abi ghar vaapas aavo.priya ko dekh na bhi math,samji?

Ashwin:ok maa!i will be back home

Ashwin(st):"ab mai priya se milke nahi ja pavunga,vo muje chodunga nahi,she will force me for more some time.ek kam karthi hoon,ghar jane baad phone karoongi..yehi teek hoga!

He leaves party without informing her.

In party:

Priya waits for Ashwin and starts searching for him

That group of guys informed priya "ur frnd went to hotel room to meet someone,and he informed u, meet him there,he is in hurry that's way he can't inform u,may be he is waiting for u there"

Priya:with drugs effect she feels dizzy and can't stands properly "oh thank u ,I will meet him"

priya leaving party hall to hotel room                                                                   

Ram : just watches priya and follows her

That guys also followed priya unknowingly about ram

And priya enters in lift ,that boys also enters lift

At the last moment of door close, ram stops the door with his one leg, enters into lift.

Ram:hey priya!where r u going?and where is ashwin?

Priya:oh ram! You!Ashwin is in room I am going to meet him

That boys all are looked at each other , decides to leave her because ram also with her

Ram and Priya both are gets out from the lift at some floor

They both are out of control because of heavy drinks and don't know their destination.

They both stood with others support

Ram:oh! in this floor?

Priya:yes

Ram: which room? i mean room no?

Priya:room no? that guys didn't say room no?wt I do?

Ram:don't worry!i will help you to find ur lover!

Priya:thank you,you know? I love him so much,and he also loves me too..

Ram:hmm..

Priya: ram,wt about u?don't u have any girlfrnd?

They both are forgot to find ashwin and entered in some room talking with each other

Ram:no I don't have any girlfrnd

Priya:why?ur looking so handsome and,hot yaar, but not more than my ashwin!

Ram:(annoyed )because she comparing with ashwin,come close to her and places his hands on her shoulder and said "sach bathao, ashwin is more hot than me?"

Priya:looked into his eyes "ofcourse not"

Ram:then why u told subbu first?

Priya:sorry...with puppy face

Because of heavy drinks she vomits on her dress and ram's.

Priya:I am sorry yaar,I will clean it

And immediately grabs him into bathroom

And starts cleaning with water

Ram:ab tum chodo,mai bhi tume help karoongi.

Priya:u r so sweet,u always helping me.

Ram:u know?u r beautiful priya

Priya:u also

suddenly shower water starts, they both drenched totally

Priya:hey bhagwan!it is too cool

Ram:come out

They both gets out from bathroom.

Ram:are itna cool yaar,muje nahi chahiye ee shirt!

Priya:muje bhi nahi chahiye!

Ram and Priya throws their shirts immediately.

ram stares her wet beauty

And starts kissing her in every inch of her body

Priya also equally responding with him.his touch made her going crazy.

They both lost their senses at that moment and spend together that night

Next day morning:

Ram wakes up first and sees priya,who peacefully slept in his arms.he feels

very happy that innocent face lying with him in the bed under the duvet

But that moment brushed ,by realizing what happened.

The room was messed up with their dresses.

He came back to his senses and wears his dress .

Ram:what I was done?how can I did this?tears flows on his cheeks. Priya is still sleeping.

He tries to remember,how they are came here,their talking,and he is kissing her...

Ram talks to himself.

I am sorry priya for what happened,but ,muje patha nahi ee sab kaise hoga,mai tumhare gungeghar hoon,but I can't even face you, mai maafi ka laayak bhi nahi hoon!

He leaves that place with guilty face.

After some time Priya wakes up. Her head is aching with hangover.

She realizes her body is covering with duvet.

She is shocked,looks around,but she couldn't find anyone in the room.

Priya: Hey bhagwan!ye kya hogaya mere saath?she tries to remember something but nothing works, because of that drug drink.

Her mind blured with thinks.she is coming with some one and talking something ang she trows her shirt and kissing him.but she cann't finds his face. Tears flows her cheeks continouslly.

Suddenly her phone rings . it is Ashwin.

She immediately picks the phone.

Priya:Ashwin!where r u?

Ashwin:priya,please don't angry with me,kal raath jo kuch huva,I am very sorry.

Priya feels slite relief,thinks it was Ashwin,she spent night with him,no words to her to ask.

Ashwin:I don't know how to say sorry!

Priya:phir bhi!tum ne muje inform bhi nahi kiya!

Ashwin:kaise batho,tum tho acchi mood me thi.

Priya:phir bi,this is not right way.

Ashwin:patha tha,lekin kya karoo?mom ne aachanak call kiya,tho mai ne tume disturb nahi karna chahtha hoon,isiliye mai jaldi wapas chali.

Priya:tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakthe ho?

Ashwin:just 2 days,after all we are getting married na?

Priya (st):haa priya!ye tumhara hone wala pathi hoon!isme ithna chintha kar ne waala baath kya hai?after marriage also it will happens na!

Ashwin:maine galthi kiya,par samjao na situations ko!ab bas,just take rest.i will talk to u later.

Bye priya, love u

Priya:teeke bye.(feels uncomfortable)

Immediately she wears her dress and leaves from there.

The next two days she is very busy with all marriage preparations,haldi,mehandi functions.

But her mind feels,how embarrass to meet him after that night what happend.

These two days were hell for ram. his mind reminds that night thousands of time.

Finally ram decides to meet priya and ask her apologies.

Feels he cant live that guilty life forever.

He finds priya address and wants to meet her next morning.

Next day when he reaches her society.the entire society was decorated by flowers and garlands.

And that time only, the baarad is coming with groom. He sees ashwin in marriage dress attire.

He finds that is priya -ashwin marriage.

Ram(st):aaj priya,Ashwin marriage,how can I face her today?

No,I don't disturb her again.she is moving with her new life,her soulmate.

Maine priya ke saath jo kuch bi kiya ,vo maafi ki laayak bhi nahi,muje is gulty se jeena hi hoga.

I am really very very sorry priya,all the best for ur new life.

He leaves from there,while ashwin enters mantap..

Precap:

RAYA meeting,

Priya:aap muje janthe ho?



Thankyou friends,next part will be soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
good going 
nice part...
nicely written...
priya ko ram batadena chahiye...😕 priya misundrstd
thnks for pm😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
nice update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
So this was the flashback...
Waiting for Raya meeting and revelation...
Please continue soon...
Thanks for PM😛😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
lovely...so it was the past
thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
very nice
pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
yeahhh...i knew it i deffo knew...its rayas son...or daughter.?? m a lil confused coz once u wrote bethungi!...never mind the update...they made love...i know u cant do this nor any raya fan...ashwin and priya together never ever...and there close moments are way to far...waiting for them to meet...soo priya dont remember him...ram is guilty... ohhh..so much of suspense...wah...next soon plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Raya past was quite interesting
their first meeting was good but unexpected
they ended by spending nite together with Priya can't remember anything and more over Ram feeling guilty. Let's see if Ashwin Priya marriage happen or not.
Continue soon and thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Thanks for pm.
Nice update.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Nice update

Nicely written

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊