|Unscripted Love| ~ KR Short Story (Part 11: page 53)

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Hello everybody. I'm back with another drabble series. This one was supposed to be an OS initially but then it turned out to be a drabble. It is going to be short drabble, maybe consisting of ten parts utmost. This is dedicated entirely to Snigdha as the concept belongs to her, also I had an OS promised to her. And thank you Shruti and Snigdha in helping me to select the title.


Prologue:

 

"You have to choose anyone out of us both Kriya. Whoever who you choose will be the winner and the other person will surrender himself to the winner." Two men were facing each other with gun's pointing at each others forehead. One was dressed in black whilst the other one in white. The man dressed in white uttered these words. Kriya was standing between them.

 

 

"I...I can't do that"

 

 

"Kriya you have to choose anyone." The man in black spoke this time.

 

 

"Please don't make me do this..." She replied whilst tears streamed down her face

 

 

"Kriya, it's either him or me." Both of them yelled at once gripping their guns tightly. She was confused. One side was the person who has been her only support from the last four years and the other side was the person whom she loved to the core.

 

 

"Why can't you both solve your differences for me? I need both of you in my life. Why don't you guys understand? It is not easy to choose between you."

 

 

"Kriya don't waste more time. We can't stand here for long. We need to leave before the cops arrive." The man in white said.

 

 

"Then why can't both of you come along with me? We can sit and talk."

 

 

"Kriya, water has exceeded its level. We cannot sit and have a discussion. Make a choice Kriya." The man in black replied.

 

 

"I'm sorry." She replied and with her head bowed down she walked towards the man dressed in black. He smirked at the other person and without wasting a moment he shot the man dressed in white. Kriya shut her eyes and turned away not having the heart to watch it.

 

 

...

 

 

"Kriya what have you done? He doesn't love you. He purposely made you fall in love with him so that he can use you against."

 

 

"This...this can't be...true...he loves me. He truly loves me.

 

 

...

 

 

"How could you do this to me?"

 

 

"No baby, I really fell in love with you. I'm sorry but I didn't mean to hurt you. I was going to tell you everything this evening. Trust me please. Give me another chance baby. Let me prove it to you that I love you.

 

 

 

She woke up with a jolt. She clutched her head in her hands, trying to calm herself. Pushing aside the duvet she climbed out of the bead and headed to the washroom. After splashing cold water on her face her breathing returned.

 

 

"It is entirely my fault. I wish I could have chosen the right person. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I really am sorry." Wiping her tears she returned to the bed hoping to sleep without having that nightmare again. "I wish I never had met you."

 

 

She closed her eyes only to be surrounded by his memories.



So, how's it? I hope you guys liked it. Please like this post and leave your reviews.





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Prologue

Part 1: page 7

Part 2: page 11

Part 3: page 17

Part 4: page 22

Part 5: page 28

Part 6: page 33

Part 7: page 36

Part 8: page 41

Part 9: page 45

Part 10: page 49

Part 11: page 53

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Sanchita_14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maannuuu Story 🤗

yeeaaahhh me firsy yipeee

👏 👏

Mannu Its so confusing 😕
Kisne kisko mara
or kriya Kiske saath h ? 😕

Waiting for the parts Do
update soon
NOW pls update ur new ss
pls Edited by Sanchita_ArSha - 9 years ago
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I L.O.V.E. the concept !
War between love n friendship !
Woah !
Majaa aayega !
Jaldi update kar !
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mai zyada kuch comment nahi karungi...

but ye tha kya??? 😲

okay i hope its not a sad os... agar hai toh bata de... i will skip 😛
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Originally posted by: Effacious

mai zyada kuch comment nahi karungi...


but ye tha kya??? 😲

okay i hope its not a sad os... agar hai toh bata de... i will skip 😛



Hahahaha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mannu bahut confuse ho gayi
Kuch samaj nahi kisne kisko maara aur kyu????
Plzzz update jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally another work by you. I am a fan of your writing.
Last few works by you have been tremendous.
I bet this one will be the same.
Thanks for the PM. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG!

I just love your concepts. Seriously.

And who was killed? I have an intuition. Were the men in black and white swayam and rey??

But I am not wholly sure.

Anyway, update soon! 

And surely PM me :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is very gripping...just can't wait for ur updates
Looks like Kriya chose the one who she loves over the one one who protected her
But I'm confused with how much of that dream is reality and how was it in actual time
Ab itna confuse kardiya hai toh plz jaldi update karo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum start...intresting..i wanna knw ki kisne kisko mara...
update soon
thnx fr d pm