Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
WOW!! what an emotional update
Silence really was the culprit in their case😭
So much to express but no words to do it!
So sad and unfortunate.but wishing it will be different now
and things change for the better
Wonderful update
Originally posted by: love_chitra
Yagya! Just so amazing!
So emotional and painful...
But draupadi shud accept him fast...
Arjun is suffering so badly
Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Lovely update di ! So sad yet a perfect one . I really like the words u chose and the the way u explained the pain of both of them especially Arjun cause we have always come to know about Yagya pain but not Arjun , why he was so bound to take a step of ignoring his wife when she needed him the most . Poor he too had some restriction and his own reasons but its only that his reasons are buried inside the pain of Yagya .
U explained his pain and his silence so well 👏👏 I hope that now Arjun will be able to win his Yagya back 😳 I hope he will be able to make her understand his situation and his unfulfilled desire for her .LoveSam
Originally posted by: SethuParvathi
first nd foremostly...u have such an amazing language dear!!!
i've noticed dat in all ur updates!!loved every bit of it!!!i swear i used to be truly angry towards arjun in the situations dat r told above!!!!i always wanted him to regret for being silent in dese situations nd for bringing subhadra home!!!!u make him regret very nicely thru dis ff yagya...im sooo happy abt dat!!!but yeah at tyms i feel sad for him too!!!!aftr all he was bound by his dharm!!!!anywayz continue soon dear!! loved it!! 👏
Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Thanks a lot for saying that I have good language, Paro! Because recently a reader said my grammar sucks! They have taken this birth not just to complete their love but also to justify each and every action and pay the unpaid dues! And this was one of them! Thanks a lot for liking it, dear! And I am very glad that I have satisfied one of my readers through this update!
Originally posted by: SethuParvathi
hhhaaawww...😡dats becuz he/she doesnt kno wht proper language is!! u rock sweetheart!!!i bet u have a bright future in writing!!!👏
Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
I swear on God, Navu! If you don't unres this post, I will not speak to you!
Sharminda karne ka bhi had hota hai, Sakhi! Aaj to kuch jyada hi dose hogaya!Unres!
Yayieee! Finally I have unresed!Yaar I swear I was really busy and then I died because I started cardio! Anyway, about the update!Truly truly loved the update! Beautifully written like always sakhi!😃All the parts that I have missed commenting on were fantastic! The way you pen down all the updates for this FF is commendable! They are all so wonderful!The flashbacks were so heart wrenching! Really, no matter how hard we try the pain of what happened at the dhyut sabha is really great and the Pandavas especially deserve to be punished for their silence. It is something no woman can forget😭But I think this is what the kalyuga FFs are about, rewriting their story so that we can at least correct the wrong, doesn't matter if it's just fiction!The way you described Arjuna's POV was fantastic! The way you thought about the reason for his silence was absolutely amazing! The silence was also for his Panchali, his wife!But anyway, just hope that the past is put behind them fast so that their story can be written once again by such an amazing writer as you Yagzz! 👏
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