Meethi si yeh zindegi..a kr ss Updated pg 11

Character Sketch

Reyaansh Singhania: zindegi se pareshan ek 26 saal ka ladka jisse uski ma ek chota baccha samajhte hain. Papa use hamesha dantte rehte hain kyun k jo bhi kaam wo karne jata hain wo bigad jati hain. Uske padosi ki beeti Manju usse bahot pyar karti hain par hamara hero sirf aur sirf Deepika Padukone se pyar karte hain. Likhai padhai mein ekdom zero. Zindegi ka sapna hain hero banna jiske liye wo ghar se bhaag jaate hain.

Kriya Ghai: smart and intelligent. Uska sapna hain aapni papa ki sapne ko pura karna. Ladke usse uski tez dimag aur strong personality ke liye avoid karte hain. Kabhi kabhi ladke aur ladkiyan usse taane bhi maarte hain kyun ke uska koi bf nahi hain. But apni heroine is least bothered..wo apni andaz mein jeena chahti hain. Iss douran use ek english newspaper agency mein naukri mil jaati hain.

Scene One
Raat k 9 baaje..ek choti si railway station. The announcement went on "kripya dhyaan de..Amritsar se Mumbai jaane wali train kuch hi der mein rawana hogi". Kriya chekd her seat no. and reservation.
"Pohochte hi ph karna beta aur apna dhyan rakhna" her papa was saying.
"Aap tension mat lo..aur apna khayal rakhna" saying this Kriya boarded the train.
Most of the people were sleeping. She searched 4 her seat and finally located it. Par yeh kya? yahan to koi aur leta hua hain.

Will continue if I get popular support😊
Edited by kreyafan - 9 years ago

new ss
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brilliant concept 😊
amazing cs...
totally different rey 😉
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& plzzz try to fulfill my wish 😆

new ss

interesting concept

intresting cs
update soon😉
Edited by devilishpam - 9 years ago

Back with the update 😊

Kriya sochne lagi "yeh kaunsi nayi musibbat hain..aur mere seat pe hi kyun?". Usne apna seat num dobara chk kiya.."nahi yahan to saaf likha hain 40".
"Suniye...o bhaisaab..O mr...yeh admi hain ya kumbhkaran.." Kriya k chillane ka koi faida nahi hua. Fir usne apni bottle se thoda paani lekar uss ladke ki muh per fenka

"Kya kya..kaun kaun...bachao mujhe.." woh ladka chillane laga.
Kriya use tajjub hokar dekh rahi thi, koi itna stupid kaise ho sakta hain.

"Chillana band kijiye..kuch nahi hua apko..ap meri seat pe lete the isliye maine apko jagaya" Kria said controlling her laughter.

"Aare yeh koi tareeka hain jagane ki...kitni maaze se Deepika k saath lungi dance kar raha tha..puri neend kharab kar di is ladki ne" Rey sat up. The train started moving.

"Ab jaldi se uthiye yahan se yeh meri seat hain" Kria showed him her tkt

"Toh yeh mera bhi seat hain madam" Rey showed her his tkt where it was also written 40.

"Toh main ka puri raat corridor mein khadi rahoon?" Kriya asked

"Tumhari marzi" Rey answered.

"Dont act 2 smart..maine paise deke yeh tkt kharidi hain ok?" Kriya was tired and angry.

"Toh maine ka tkt chori ki hain?" Rey was also angry "ek to meri neend kharab ki upar se Deepika ko bhi bhaga diya".

Itne me tt wahan pe aya tkt chk ki aur kaha "rail dept se hi galti ho gayi madam..sir aap dono kisi bhi tarha seat share kar lijiye..bas subha toh pohoch hi jayenge".

So Kriya sat beside the window and Rey beside the corridor. Kriya ko kabhi train mein neend nahi ati thi par hamara hero sayad firse Deepika k sapne dekh raha tha. Raat ke 12 ya 12.30 baj rahe the. Train ek statn mein ruka. Ek aadmi nashe ki halat mein gungunate huye aakar Kriya ki opposite window mein baitha aur use ghurne laga. Kriya ne darr kar Rey ki taraf dekha par wo so raha tha.

deepika ke saath lungi dance 🤣
aadmee nasheme
hero soraha he
ab kya ?
update soon

Kriya ne dhere dhere apni vanity bag uthayi. Wo aadmi apni seat se uth chuka tha woh drink karne k waje se thik se chal nahi pa raha tha, uske pao dagmaga rahe the. Kriya v khadi ho gayi thi. Achanak train ek jerk deke chalne laga aur woh admi jake Rey k upar gira, firse Rey ki neend kharab ho gayi.

"Abbey kaun be...ullu ka pattha gadhe ki dum, pyar ka dushman" Rey us admi ka collar pakad ke use ek ghusa lagaya. Wo wapis apne seat pe chala gaya.

Rey ne Kriya taraf dekha "tum thik ho? tumne mujhe jagaya kyun nahi?" Kriya jawab dene ja rahi thik jab us admi ne Rey par attack kiya.

Kriya ne apni bag se deo spray nikali aur spray kiya us drunken ke ankhon mein. Aur bhi log waha ekkatha ho gaye the. Sab ne milkar uski dhulai ki.

"Aap thik ho? I am sorry meri waje se apko inti pareshani uthani pari" Kriya apologized.

"Koi baat nahi senorita aise bade bade desho mein aisi choti choti baatien hote rehte hain" Rey said in SRK style.

"Lagta hain ap filmein bohot dekhte ho..waise mera naam senorita nahi Kriya hain" she said.

"Hi mera naam Reyansh hain par sab mujhe pyar se Rey bulate hain" they shook hands.

"Tum kya Mumbai ghum ne ja rahi ho?" he asked

"Nahi mujhe wahan Everyday Mumbai mein naukri mili hain aur aap?" Kriya asked

"Main to ghar se bhag raha hoon...meri papa meri shaadi zabardasti us Manju se karwana chahte the...par main to sirf Deep...raat bahut ho gaya hain hume thoda rest karna chahiye" he changed the topic.

Scene Two

Subha k 8 baje..busy Mumbai station.

ullu ka pattha, gadhe ki dum, pyar ka dushman 🤣

diii it's freaking awesome!!!!!!
damn hilarious & fabulous update...
kya sapna haye
deepika ke sath lungi dance  🤣
i'm loving this story 😃
rey is so cute & funny 😆
update soon...