MaNan One Shot ~ Straight to Heaven

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Straight to Heaven ~ MaNan One Shot




I can't believe this!
Drama Queen!
In one night, I have indeed become a fool.
Laughed like one with Nandini - check
Was about to see her stripped - check
Almost got caught by Hitler - check
Played Tom and Jerry with Nandini - double check
Had my 7th and 8th attempts of kiss failed - check to the power 100.

And now I have lime water thrown on me! So much for being a gentleman!

Ouch! Nandini you idiot! - I yelled as I had seed of lime struck in my eyes.
Oww! Manik. I'm Sorry - she said childishly.. I'm extremely Sorry.
Meanwhile my eyes, blazing red and burning like hell. Citrus is doing its job.
And what this drama queen do?
She pulls me by my collar with both the hands and brings her cherry pink lips to my eyes.
And I wait to feel her soft blows in my burning eyes.
And That never came.
Why?
Because I felt her tongue in my eyes - making me statuesque was her warm, wet tip of her tongue evoking the sinister desires. I didn't realise when she retreated brushing off the seed from my eye.

Time for a long eye-lock...O.. o.. o ..o .. Shayad yehi hai pyaar..! Followed by 9th attempt of Kiss..
Want to know the result? 
Not needed I guess - As usual failed.
Trust me, would have just passed if this question hadn't crossed her mind at the right moment.
Manik! Which cologne do you use? - Enough to run shivers down my spine as she asks me in chinese whispers.
Duffer! Is this important now?
I usually don't share my secrets with anyone, but since there is least hope of you remember something tomorrow, let me tell you. And I went closer and whispered with equally intensity brushing my lips to her ears STRAIGHT TO HEAVEN by Killian
And you are taking me there she said in trance, closing her eyes and parting her lips and hugged me, cuddling.. Nothing mattered more as she confessed.
Not even the 10th failed attempt of kiss that followed.





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That's it people.. Wrote in two minutes.. yes, two minutes I have least hopes on this. But still if you read this hit like and give your comment.


God Bless Everyone
Tich.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really you write this in two min seriously kudos to you. I know its a drabble but I want to read more so next time plz write a long one. I love to read ur works.
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ahaan you are first this time..
lekin unres kar meri maa.. here and in ff too..πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Really you write this in two min seriously kudos to you. I know its a drabble but I want to read more so next time plz write a long one. I love to read ur works.


thanks dear.. yeah it is sort of a drabble.. i didnt knew in which category i should put it into.
yep, I'll post a long one next time on your suggestion. Hope you will like it.πŸ˜ƒ
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thank you nadia... glad u liked it.πŸ˜ƒ
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@rima4ever:

thanks a lot for extending your support and liking my works.
feels really good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Found it. πŸ˜†
It's really nice and unique. I love the whole kiss attempts thing. The poor tortured soul of Manik once upon a time Monster Malhotra 🀣
The things he does for Nandu. πŸ˜†
But cute drabble, and I would love to read your in depth stuff, I miss those. :P
Something angsty or intense? xD
Anyway, I loved this πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Found it. πŸ˜†
It's really nice and unique. I love the whole kiss attempts thing. The poor tortured soul of Manik once upon a time Monster Malhotra 🀣
The things he does for Nandu. πŸ˜†
But cute drabble, and I would love to read your in depth stuff, I miss those. :P
Something angsty or intense? xD
Anyway, I loved this πŸ˜ƒ


Ani.. those serious stuff works on serious brain.. right now my brain is in gutter, hence this type.
Clearly crappies i have written till date. But ironically, i enjoyed it the most.. Perhaps because of Manan or may be because it seemed better for those two minutes.
And yeah failed attempts.. lolzz. I wanted to make fun of those.
thanks a lot babes for liking this somehow..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gudakesha


ahaan you are first this time..
lekin unres kar meri maa.. here and in ff too..πŸ˜†


yes...yes..me first

ipti is not aroundπŸ˜†so i became the firstπŸ˜‰

straight to heaven ? in two minutes? u are an instant story maker πŸ˜›

so,what to commentπŸ€”
just wanted to say that your 2 minutes made story..made me smile for 2 minutes...😊

so,thanks for making me smile...😳

jiyaπŸ˜›

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yahan bhi kiss miss 🀣 how long will they torture Manik like that ? Poor soul πŸ˜†