OS-Talli Love 2... "Yeh tune kya kiya" ~ NEW PART Up on 20 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
superb superb superb
very romantic and beautiful dialogues.
kaafi time ke baad itna romantic padd rahi hoon and I like it very very much.
Ram is very naughty and woh karke hi rehta hai jo woh karna chahta haiπŸ˜‰
Raya romantic couples😳
but ek hi complaint hai...detailing dena chahiye tha na.
Nevik are true friends...its so funny the way they confronted Ram.
hats off to ur thinking the way u r taking the story. 
great work from great writers.
And thank you so much that u r continuing this story. very good decision.
please continue soon. Sorry for late
thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Raya naughty at sixty lage rhonlolkz
gud update.
Vik neha bechare πŸ˜† πŸ˜†   idhar toh raya k chal chaln hi badl gya hai πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
Beautiful romantic update
Continue soon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 1

most lovable thing in this part is the song...
and the way you use it was superb ...

one of my favourite song...
but its not now one of...
but it is now my favourite as i can imagine RAYA...

most cute, adorable and the sizzling couple i must say...
πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Edited by deekshasxn - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 2

NeVik was as best as they are...
and
RaYa chemistry as cute as they are...
and the Bold avtaar of PRIYA was Just muaaahhh...

she always make stunned to Ram with her Action
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 3

bang of our NeVik on Ram...

he was almost dead...

Saviour of RAM's life is none other Than our Queen Priya
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally i read all parts again in one go..
 and as u know i am ur big fan..
 fan of ur writting... 
Dear please continue soon 
 waiting for the next ..
 its really superb 
 and cant find word to express 

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Raya naughty at sixty lage rhonlolkz
gud update.
Vik neha bechare πŸ˜† πŸ˜†   idhar toh raya k chal chaln hi badl gya hai πŸ˜‰


 darling yaad hai na 
 RAM hotty at 40 πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

RES
unres
beautiful...updt :)
kase likhlate ho yr buddy...gr8 wrk
Nevk is suprbbb




thanks ffor reading & loving it... ur comment mans alot to me... bas RaYa ka magic hi hai jo kuch bhi main likh pati hun...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Leena,
H r u doing?
I think your 3stories are to be updated?
Can u continue plz..
I really don't like to read half the story. Climax jab tak nhi aata bahot aadha adhura laggta hai.

To all IF writers , koi bhi story yunhi startat karo,n leave it half way, padhnewaloan kan me bechaini ka keeda chodke. It's a humble request.