#1| IshRa : Meherbaan FF | Thread One - Complete. Moved to Thread Two. - Page 85

Originally posted by: .Rajji.

December 18, 2007. 

IshRa's night. 

December 18, 2014.

Our night. The amount of spamming we do... ROFL.

demons . nightmares. 

refuge . calmness . finality . sorrows . song .

Because no one does angst as better as us. 

He needed company, he mused. And company he would get.

Their second encounter. It's coming. IT'S COMING. 

Crushed. Crumpled. And carefully disposed of

The rambling. The nagging. The complaining. The familiarity. The sense of acceptance. Did it have anything to do with his meeting with that lady he met hours ago, he didn't know

Those two paragraphs were PERFECTION. I can't kiara. When i say you didn't disappoint, it's because proof is here : these paragraphs, it's the soul of my TS. Payal will agree.

I've been stuck to you since the day my mother forced me to terminate my first child

You give meaning to Shagun. It's all about perspective, once you said to me. You make a character out of the mess we see onscreen. That whole paragraph. I remember reading it when you first sent it to me and i was blown away. Shagun has a past, something that justify the way she left raman. You did the job the cv's couldn't do up to date. You're amazing. I mean it but you won't believe it. Proof is : look, my comment on the way you wrote shagun is longer than my other comments. 

That's the same with BYH (not BMB as you once called it you dummy!), you had thought it through. Raman being a lost man picking the wrong decision and i didn't know. You amaze me. You think things out. Your characters have dept. Okay moving on or you'll think i'll flattering you. But just get this : i'm impressed. Ok. Bas now.

Wat a wonderful update..from the garden scene to the last scene it was too good..so subbu dance with ishita..here I thought their next encounter wil be dhamekar but to think of it in a way it shows that ishita has completely moved on and no place for subbu in her life..but surely that idiot and his friend are gonna interpret something else..doesn't ronit know ishita is married and that too to the Raman bhalla..setting his wife to subbu can't wait for ramans gussa on ronit wen he finds this..and was subbu all ther wen Raman answered the rapid fire question??frw doubta here and there but otherwise wonderful chapter..the flashbacks wer too good..it gives depth to their character and surprisingly to shagun's character too..and thanks for the mention..I love to be the first to read ur updates..

Originally posted by: malar3

Wat a wonderful update..from the garden scene to the last scene it was too good..so subbu dance with ishita..here I thought their next encounter wil be dhamekar but to think of it in a way it shows that ishita has completely moved on and no place for subbu in her life..but surely that idiot and his friend are gonna interpret something else..doesn't ronit know ishita is married and that too to the Raman bhalla..setting his wife to subbu can't wait for ramans gussa on ronit wen he finds this..and was subbu all ther wen Raman answered the rapid fire question??frw doubta here and there but otherwise wonderful chapter..the flashbacks wer too good..it gives depth to their character and surprisingly to shagun's character too..and thanks for the mention..I love to be the first to read ur updates..

Originally posted by: .Rajji.

 I'll be your Guardian tonight. Tum akeli nahin ho and tonight you'll live. Not just breathe. I'll make sure of that.

RKB gives me life.

She spun in circles like a toddler as the passing carriage flung rose petals in the air.

Filmy!

Happy. He should be happy.

All there is to know about life : you should be happy. Bas. Eternal bas. 

"Nothing worse than yours, or maybe the same as yours. Heartbreak."

This girl would light aflame the remains of the man lost at war with fate and love.  

And from his ashes would rise another man. A man who stand on his own, for his own and no one would he able to bring him down. No one.  

You give hopes to your own characters. Cruel woman you are.

Fate. Meeting Ishita was fate, marrying her was choice but falling in love with her was beyond his control.  

Perfection.

Rohit had arrived an hour. 

You mean Johar ?

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Wait. I need to put a disclaimer.

Thank you. Subbu and Ishita have had encounters before like the couture shopping but if you notice Ishita fails to interact with people who aren't her immediate family or aren't her Delhi clan. And even in the couture shopping scene she was too engrossed in Ruhi and then in telling Veer off to pay attention to Subbu.

No. Ishita isn't in the media and Rohit arrives after the whole thing happens and he only interacts with Subbu throughout and Subbu is the last person to reveal Ishita ka married status. I'm pretty sure Raman would laugh it off as he knows it wouldn't affect Ishita, per se.

I started penning the chapter at 10 pm last night. Went to bed at 5 am. (Same when it comes to Rajjo), woke up at 8-9am and finished hole chapter by 3pm along with Rajjo. I just wanted to get to the kiss. The next update will start from the end of Yeh Ishq Haaye sequence and then move on. The rapid fire sequence is long and the chapter was long as it is. Hope you understand.

Glad you liked it. I shall share the compliment with Rajjo.

ok I understand how difficult it Wud hav been to write such along chapter..so next chapter we are gonna have the rapid Fire scenes..jus had the doubt..thanks for the clarification..and I think u shud put the disclaimer

I don't know where to begin from and what to point out, it was perfect and I loved it to the core. You just made my day girl!

Ishita found herself waiting for Raman. As if he was her drug. Her personal dose of ecstacy. Something she wanted to be forever high on. 
Edited by .Rajji. - 9 years ago