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Awesome...ls update the next part soon...
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awesome update
Raman knows her BT ishu don't how??? this is a question
she is happy with her family ???? big question
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Hi frnds,thank you all ,excuses if any grametical or spelling mistakes

and here is the next part

Part-4:

 

(In Mumbai)

He  enters a New Year party with his friends after long back because he came back to India  last week from London after completion of his higher studies

While he enjoying the party he hears a giggle sound from a group of girls,but  he can't find exact one.

After some time

 He is on the way to washroom talking with someone on phone.

A girl  hurries to the washroom and dashes him,his phone falls on the floor. And her phone also

 Girl: - Oh my God! I am so sorry!

 He:who is facing down gets up - Don't worry, It's...my mis...take

He was mesmerized by her beauty. Her bigger wider eyes and pink lips, long hair, slim waist.the entire world stops some time to him. She is saying something, but his ears stop working. His eyes only working  specially to watch her expressions. His Heart beat already stopped before some seconds. She wore a blue jeans with a pink shirt and a scarf around her neck nothing else, but she looking so beautiful to him like an angle. Something magic around her.

Girl : no no it's my mistake I am really sorry,I am in hurry,I am really really sorry.

Suddenly power gone. His eyes missing her that few seconds also.

Power comes back.

He :(coming to his sences)looks around.

 all are shouting "HAPPY NEW YEAR".

They look each other and both at a time says "happy new year"

Both smiles at each other.

Both picks another's phone, they exchanges their phones.

Once  again greet each other and she moved from there.

He(st):oh god!what a new year!!may be this is love year for me!

After some time:

He  back to the party with his frnds ,but his eyes was searching for her,and again he hears that same giggle sound from one corner but this time he figerout her from few inches distance with some other guy holding her hand

He :are yaar!ye vahi ladki!

At same moment she looks at raman and smiles with hello sign

He  replys with same smile

Girl :with hands sign "may I come there?"

He :" yes nod".

But she came with that guy holding his hand with her

Girl : "hello! I am ishitha...ishitha iyer"

He :"hai! i am raman...raman bhalla"

Ishitha:nice to meet u and he is my fiancee "subbu..subhash"

Raman: "nice to meet u too"

Ishitha:u know subbu?he is the first one in my new year!right raman?

Raman:yes u r the first one in my new life,I mean my first new year,I just entered  in to my business life

Ishitha:congrats..but this is the last new year for us as bachelors

We are getting married soon, we love each other since 5 years. This is the bachelors party for us

Raman:congrats  yaar!

Btw wt r u doing mr.subbu?

Subbu:me and isshu are doctors just completed our internships.

Raman:oh both of u doctors!great combination,made for each other.

Both are blushed at each other.but raman face changes with that news ,they both are in love...

At the same time raman phone rings

Raman:excuse me!u guys carry on ..

 ishu and subbu back to the party and enjoyed

Raman came back to the party after some time and watched  both ,ishu and subbu laughing with each other

Raman(st):don't know why I am feeling bad for their relation?wt happened to me?i just saw her before 2 or 3 hours. But I can't see her with him, annoyed with himself.

Raman drinks more than his usual days and watching subbu and ishu

At that time subbu went to attend a call

A group of guys watching ishitha from some time and mixed some drugs into her juice

Unaware of ishitha drinks more than 2 or three glasses

Subbu on phone call:

Subbu:hello amma!

Subbu's mom:hello subbu!kaha thi tum?

Subbu:amma! I am in a new year party with my frnds

Subbu's mom:party?ishitha bi tere saath?

Subbu:ha  amma!she is with me

Subbu's mom:kithne bhar maine kaha shadi se pehele aisa nahi mil sakthe,tume maloom nahi rituals?

 Subbu:amma!i am sorry ,frnds ne force kiya,isiliye aana pada.

Subbu's mom:teeke,abhi se abi ghar vaapas aavo.ishitha ko dekh na bhi math,samji?

Subbu:ok amma!i will be back home

Subbu(st):"ab mai ishu se milke nahi ja pavunga,vo muje chodunga nahi,she will force me for more some time.ek kam karthi hoon,ghar jane baad phone karoongi..yehi teek hoga!

He leaves party without informing her.

In party:

Ishitha waits for subbu and starts searching for him

That group of guys informed ishitha "ur frnd went to hotel room to meet someone,and he informed u, meet him there,he is in hurry that's way he can't inform u,may be he is waiting for u there"

Ishitha:with drugs effect she feels dizzy and can't stands  properly "oh thank u ,I will meet him"

 ishitha leaving party hall to hotel room                                                                  

Raman  : just watches ishitha and follows her

That guys also followed ishitha unknowingly about raman

And  ishitha enters in lift ,that boys also enters lift

At the last moment of door close, raman stops the door with his one leg, enters into lift.

Raman:hey ishitha!where r u going?and where is subbu?

Ishitha:oh raman! You!subbu is in room I am going to meet him

That  boys all are looked at each other , decides to leave her because raman also with her

Raman and ishu both are gets out from the lift at some floor

They both are out of control because of heavy drinks and don't know their destination.

They both stood with others support

Raman:oh! in this floor?

Ishu:yes

Raman: which room? i mean room no?

Ishu:room no? that guys didn't say room no?wt I do?

Raman:don't worry!i will help you to find ur lover!

Ishu:thank you,you know? I love him so much,and he also loves me too..

Raman:hmm..

Ishu: raman,wt about u?don't u have any girlfrnd?

They  both are forgot to find subbu and entered in some room talking with each other

Raman:no I don't have any girlfrnd

Ishu:why?ur looking so handsome and,hot yaar, but not more than my subbu!

Raman:(annoyed )because she comparing with subbu,come close to her and places  his hands on her shoulder and said "sach bathao, subbu is more hot than me?"

Ishu:looked into his eyes "ofcourse not"

Raman:then why u told subbu first?

Ishu:sorry...with puppy face

Because of heavy drinks she vomits on her dress and raman's.

Ishu:I am sorry yaar,I will clean it

And immediately grabs him into bathroom

And starts cleaning with water

Raman:ab tum chodo,mai bhi tume help karoongi.

Ishitha:u r so sweet,u always helping me.

Raman:u know?u r  beautiful ishitha

Ishu:u also

suddenly shower water starts, they both drenched totally

Ishu:ayyo murugan!it is too cool

Raman:come out

They both gets out from bathroom.

Raman:are itna cool yaar,muje nahi chahiye ee shirt!

Ishitha:muje bhi nahi chahiye!

Raman and ishitha throws their shirts immediately. 

raman stares her wet beauty

And starts kissing her in every inch of her body

Ishitha also equally responding with him.his touch made her going crazy.

They both lost their senses at that moment and spend together that night

Next day morning:

Raman wakes up first and sees ishitha,who peacefully slept in his arms.he feels

very happy that innocent face lying with him in the bed under the duvet

But that moment brushed  ,by realizing what happened.

The room was messed up with their dresses.

He came back to his senses and wears his dress .

Raman:what I was done?how can I did  this?tears flows on his cheeks. ishitha is still sleeping.

He tries to remember,how they are came here,their talking,and he is kissing her...

Raman talks to himself.

I am sorry ishitha for what happened,but ,muje patha nahi ee sab kaise hoga,mai tumhare gungeghar hoon,but I can't even face you, mai maafi ka laayak bhi nahi hoon!

He  leaves that place with guilty face.

After some time ishtha wakes up. Her head is aching with hangover.

She realizes her body is covering with duvet.

She is shocked,looks around,but she couldn't find anyone in the room.

Ishitha:ayyo amma!ye kya hogaya mere saath?she tries to remember something but nothing works, because of that drug drink.

Her mind blured with thinks.she is coming with some one and talking something ang she trows her shirt and kissing him.but she cann't finds his face. Tears flows her cheeks continouslly.

Suddenly her phone rings . it is subbu.

She immediately picks the phone.

Ishitha:subbu!where r u?

Subbu:ishu,please don't angry with me,kal raath jo kuch huva,I am very sorry.

Ishu feels slite relief,thinks it was subbu,she spent night with him,no words to her to ask.

Subbu:I don't know how to say sorry!

Ishu:phir bhi!tum ne muje inform bhi nahi kiya!

Subbu:kaise batho,tum tho acchi mood me thi.

Ishu:phir bi,this is not right way.

Subbu:patha tha,lekin kya karoo?mom ne aachanak call kiya,tho mai ne tume disturb nahi karna chahtha hoon,isiliye mai jaldi wapas chali.

Ishu:tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakthe ho?

Subbu:just 2 days,after all we are getting married na?

Ishitha(st):haa ishu!ye tumhara hone wala pathi hoon!isme ithna chintha kar ne waala baath kya hai?after marriage also it will happens na!

Subbu:maine galthi kiya,par samjao na situations ko!ab bas,just take rest.i will talk to u later.

Bye ishu, love u

Ishu:teeke bye.(feels uncomfortable)

Immediately she wears her dress and leaves from there.

The next two days she is very busy with all marriage preparations,haldi,mehandi functions.

But her mind feels,how embarrass to meet him after that night what happend.

These two days were hell for raman. his mind reminds that night thousands of time.

Finally raman decides to meet ishitha and ask her apologies.

Feels he cant live that guilty life forever.

He finds ishitha address and wants to meet her next morning.

Next day when he reaches her society.the entire society was decorated by flowers and garlands.

And that time only, the bharath is coming with groom. He sees subbu in marriage dress attire.

He finds that is ishitha-subbu marriage.

Raman(st):aaj ishitha,subbu marriage,how can I face her today?

No,I don't disturb her again.she is moving with her new life,her soulmate.

Maine ishitha ke saath jo kuch bi kiya ,vo maafi ki laayak bhi nahi,muje is gulty se jeena hi hoga.

I am really very very sorry ishitha,all the best for ur new life.

He leaves from there,while subbu enters kalyana madapam..

Precap:

Ishra meeting,

Ishitha:aap muje janthe ho?

 

Thankyou friends,next part will be soon...

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wow... suprebbb story... i am totally in love with dis story... i loved it... especially aarav n raman's relation... i love demmm... are yaar plsss make ishra meet soon... n if u can plss pm me too Edited by yazhi - 9 years ago
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arey yar...same precap frm 2 parts...
im eagrly waitng fr ishra facing each othr...
ur making delay...
anyways stry is intrstng bt waitng fr ishra face off...
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Hello friends,thankyou for your comments,and sorry for late,excuses if  any mistakes..

here is the next part..

Part-5

Raman wakes up from sleep with a sudden jerk.

"I am sorry ishitha".

Raman phone rings.

Raman:hello,

PA:hello sir,good morning

Raman:good morning,bolo,kya baat hai?

Pa:sir aaj meeting schedule bol ne keliye phone kiya,vo aap kal meeting nahi attend kiya na,vo aap keliye intezar kiya.vuska meeting aaj fix karoo?

Raman:ok.,bye

Raman cuts the call and gets ready for office.

Pa:hello man! I am from psr

Ishtha:hello,boliye,

Pa:mam!aaj ka meeting 11 am fix hogaya.it's ok with u?

Ishitha:yes,thank you,I will be there.

11 am at psr companies:

Ishitha enters into company.

Ishitha:hello,I am from MAWF.

Pa:hello mam,sir is in meeting,aap thodi dher wait kijiye.

She takes to ishitha into raman's cabin, makes her to sit in a couch.

Pa:mam,sir thodi dher me aajavungi,would you like,tea or coffee?

Ishitha:coffee is ok,thank you.

Pa leaves from there.after a minute a boy comes with a tray of coffee cup and handed to her.

But  cup slips and coffee spills into her dress.

Ishitha:kya bhayya?aap ne ye kya kiya?she is trying to clean with dupatta.

Boy:sorry mam,galthi se gir gayi...please aap saaf kijiye, yaha washroom hai,sorry madam.

Ishitha goes to raman's wash room.

Raman comes to his cabin,talking some phone call.

He watches that boy cleans the floor,same time ishitha comes back from washroom.

Raman stares at her,while she is wetting her dress in her world.

Raman shocked with that sudden entry,his eyes stops at her.

Ishitha:feels  his presence,sorry sir, galthi se coffee gir gayi thi,so I used washroom..

Raman:it's ok,tum...yaha?i mean aap...

Ishitha:hello sir,I am ishitha iyer.i am from MAWF.

Raman(st):ye muje pehchan nahi kiya,"may be she forgot me".

Raman:hello ishtha,nice to meet you,he gives a shake hand to her.

Ishtha:nice to meet you too sir,his hand touch makes her something weird feeling.

Both takes their positions.raman starts a normal conversation.

Raman:sorry for yesterday,I had a sudden meeting.

Ishitha:it's ok sir.

Raman:ji boliye,aap MAWF keliye bath kar ne aayi thina?

Ishitha explains all things and  concepts of MAWF,and tells that they are searching for sponsors for kids accepts.

Raman agrees for sponsoring ,and asks her ,he wants to visit foundation once.

Ishitha:thank you sir,it is very helpful to foundation.

Ishitha is happy for getting a new sponcer.

Ishitha:ok sir,when ever you want to visit,you can come..

Raman:teeke,I will come tomorrow.any problem?

Ishtha: you are always welcome sir.

Ishitha: we will meet tomorrow.i have to leave now,thank you so much once again,

She leaves from there.

Raman reaches home early,and thinks about ishitha.how she is coming and talking with him.it is look like a day dream to him.

Ishtha informs sharad about raman sponcership,and other details.

Sharad:good ishtha,you did it,I know he will help us, he used to like these charities.he is good hearted person.

Ishitha:ya shard,he is a very good person,and he personally wants to visit foundation.

Sharad:that nice ishitha,please make him comfortable,bye.

Ishitha:bye.

Ishitha(st):sach me bahut aachha insaan hai,ithne aachi position me thi,phir bhi thodasa attitude bhi nahi hai.par use dekkar muje aisa kyo lag rayi,mai vuse phehle se janthe hoon?

Next day:

Ishitha comes toMAWF along with aarav.because he forced her ,"he also want to meet his friends in foundation and wants to play with them."

Ishitha:aarav beta!tum jakar apne friends ke saath kelo,muje aaj jyada kam hai,aur chirdren ko bhi chekup karna hai,kisi ko thang math karna,kisi ke saath fight math karo,vuse bathhameez math karo, kisi kaam ki jarooth ho,vuske help karo,aur...

Aarav:ayyo mom,every time same lines,mai chota baccha nahi hoon,mai janthi hoon ye sab!

Ishitha:I know mere bachha,phir bhi...,mai tume lunch time me miloongi.teeke?

Aarav:teeke,bye mamma.

Aarav runs to play ground and ishitha to her work.

Receptionist:hello,ishitha mam!

Ishitha:hello simran,how r u?

Simran :fine mam,aap last Sunday nahi aayana?bacche aap ko yad kiya.

Ishitha:ha ,thodasa kam tha,isiliye nahi aaya.

Ishitha:aaj ek sponsor aane vala hai,vuske liye thoda kyal rako,mai rounds jaatha hoon,agar vo aayi tho please muje inform karo.he is mr.raman kumar bhalla.

Simran:teeke mam.

Ishitha leaves for rounds.

Raman comes exact time.specially he exicted to meet ishitha once again.

Simran:hello sir,what can I do for u?

Raman:hello,I am raman bhalla.

Simran:welcome sir,ishitha mam ne bhathaya,aap aane vali hai,mai abi ishitha mam ko bulathi hoon,vo children ward me tha!

Raman:no problem,mai bhi chidren se milna chahtha hoon,muje vaha lekar chali jao..

When raman reached to ward,she is talking with children.he stares at her while she is talking with children,her small smile with bigger eyes,her innocent face.she wore a chudidhar,left free long hair,she is simple and beautiful as usual.

Raman stands exact behind her.Her back towards raman face.with the children reaction she turns a side, because of a toy which is on the floor,she loss her balance and gets slips.suddenly raman catches her with his hand. raman and ishitha looks at eachother eyes.she forgots her state.

Ishitha:are aap yaha,still holding raman.

Raman:mai ne chikdren ko dek ne aaya,but suddenly aap...he releases his grip.

She stands properly by adjusting her dress.thank you so much..

Ishitha:mai yaha children ko check up karne aayatha.

Raman:aap chidren doctor ho?

Ishitha:yes sir,mai weekends yaha aakar inko dektho ho!

Ishitha walks towards to all wards and he follows her.she introduces some children and the tells about their wishes.raman was impressed with that children innocent smiles ,even when they are known about their health conditions. He was so inspired with them.

Raman:thank you so much ishitha,muje inn bacchon kushi keliye kuch karne ki chance mila.i will try my level best to fulfill their wishes.

Ishitha:thank you sir,it's great about you.

Raman and ishitha looks at eachother,they walk together towards ground.

Ishitha:if you don't mind,mai aap se kuch bath karna chahtha ho?

Raman:kahiye?

Ishitha:aap muje janthe ho?i mean hum kayi mili phele?

Raman:aap ko yaad aayi?mai tume jantha hoon,shayad tum bool gayi humara first meeting.

Ishitha:mathlab...

Raman:we met already some years back in a new year party with your husband subbu..

Ishitha: she does't responds to the word her husband,but she tries to remember raman.

Sorry ,I forgot u,but I got it now,vus din mai aap ko dash kiya..!

Raman:tum nahi,mai ne kiya..

Ishitha:koi bhi,par aapne muje kal kyo bathaya nahi?

Raman:muje laga,tum muje bool gayi,isiliye..

Ishitha:par aapne muje bool nahi thina?

Raman:(st)mai tume kabhi bool nahi sakthi..

 

Precap: aarav comes and hugs raman,ishitha stares at them.

 

How is it friends?next part will be soon...

Thankyou all..

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wow... awesome very interesting... cont soon
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Ohhmyyy! Ths ws brilliant! Lovedd it! Sooo araav is Raman's son?? Whrs Subbu?

Eager to read moreee! Cont soon!
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fablous...update as soon as poss...
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Its getting interesting day by day ...pls update the next part soon...