ArShi TS: It Was You All Along (Last Part - Pg 54) *COMPLETED* - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow... such a beautiful story...
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have commented on the first page :D
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Very much waiting for tomorrow now! !
Awesome one😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story.plz continue soon.can't wait
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oh dear. This was a touching work. I want to read ahead.

Still more things to come in the open. So Lavanya and Kushi are sisters or cousins?


But a woman who has not given birth cannot breast feed right? There won't be milk right? It is not medically possible right?


If Arnav loved the girl Muskaan, then he did not love Kushi! If he realized and decided to love the girl named Muskaan then how can he punish Kushi?! When he can confess love to Muskaan, why can't Kushi fall in love with NK, even if its a facade?!

Also in my eyes, Arnav is the wrong doer. What if Lavanya was really Muskaan. Just imagine, he loved Kushi inside but proposed and married Lav as she is Muskaan and then devoid her of his real love? That's what he did right. How can he do that Lav when he still don't know the cheating Lav has done! He was even able to sleep with her and have a child with her but he grits his teeth when Kushi loves someone else or is helping his child. Hypocritical.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heart touching story update pleas
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very entertaining yaar. There was not a single moment where I got distracted while reading. Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was very nice and very emotional
It reminded me of the movie "BODYGUARD" ..
Looking forward for part 2
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: daljeet

oh dear. This was a touching work. I want to read ahead.

Still more things to come in the open. So Lavanya and Kushi are sisters or cousins?


But a woman who has not given birth cannot breast feed right? There won't be milk right? It is not medically possible right?


If Arnav loved the girl Muskaan, then he did not love Kushi! If he realized and decided to love the girl named Muskaan then how can he punish Kushi?! When he can confess love to Muskaan, why can't Kushi fall in love with NK, even if its a facade?!

Also in my eyes, Arnav is the wrong doer. What if Lavanya was really Muskaan. Just imagine, he loved Kushi inside but proposed and married Lav as she is Muskaan and then devoid her of his real love? That's what he did right. How can he do that Lav when he still don't know the cheating Lav has done! He was even able to sleep with her and have a child with her but he grits his teeth when Kushi loves someone else or is helping his child. Hypocritical.



Hi dear I read your comment above and I just wanted to tell you that I had actually seen on Channel "TRUE" a show about that it is possible to breast feed a baby even though if you are not the biological mother it's medically proven ... They had also showed a guy breast feeding a child ... It's just all about your inner feelings and love at its purest makes nature go against its course ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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how can she be so selfish poor arnav being played by two girls, continue soon...

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