[POETRY] Oh Why Mother?.....(Karna and Kunti)

This is completely my take on Karna's reply for Kunti in poetic way

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Your Highness you come here as my Mother

Did my pain ever made you bother?

You got rid of me like Garbage into river

Why the thought that I may die even didn't make you shiver?

To keep your stainless image cherished

You gave up me to be perished!

I was unwanted never a boon for you but forever a curse

Is this the reason you left me to bear the worse?

At the arena you were as calm as dove

Why didn't then you bathe me with your love?

How could you mother

Watch me becoming foe of my own brother?

When the society insulted me the worst

Why didn't then the dam of your love burst?

Why didn't your heart then cry?

Or was the ocean of your love forever dry!

Now too you aren't here for your long lost child!

Yet you expect me not to get wild!!

Duryodhan may be evil devil in your sight

But for me he is my might!

He fought the world for my sake

His love for me can never be fake!!

He completes my family, I thank him a ton

I would rather die with him, then living as your son!

You say you don't want me to die

But your love for me is a big lie!

Your horses brought you the wrong way

Go on the route that for you lay

Pandavas will see what you need

I am not the one you must pleed

They are your loved son at last

You need not approach this low-cast!!!

Yet a pleaders wish is my command

It's my duty to fulfill you demand!

Your sons are and will always remain five!

Either me or Arjuna will only one will lose Life!!!

But as I was in pain and you were fine

You are someone I can never claim mine!!

You blurted the truth in a single say

But look what I have to pay!

Brother or Friend what should I choose

Whatever the war results ultimately I am going to lose!

Now I have died in all possible way

How can I ever get a new life you say!!

Why and how could you mother?

Why didn't my suffering make you bother???

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Awesome, dear!!! Extremely heart-touching and wrenching too!!! Touched my heart and made me cry!!!

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Awesome, dear!!! Extremely heart-touching and wrenching too!!! Touched my heart and made me cry!!!

Beautiful poem...u have brought out Karna's emotions well... 😊

Brilliant dear. The poem was very emotional and touching 😭

You have penned every question that Karna had for Kunti in this poem that too with good rhyming words. While reading i felt as if Karna is singing this sad song of his painful life to his mother.

Very well written

Originally posted by: amritat

Beautiful poem...u have brought out Karna's emotions well... 😊

Originally posted by: surbhi82

Beautiful

Originally posted by: surbhi82

Beautiful

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Brilliant dear. The poem was very emotional and touching 😭

You have penned every question that Karna had for Kunti in this poem that too with good rhyming words. While reading i felt as if Karna is singing this sad song of his painful life to his mother.

Very well written

its beautiful and portrays the feelings of a forsaken son and his anguish truly u expressed the beauty of karna's character so nicely in a poem...