I loved this OS!๐Why everyone come to Manik's house only on this day?๐This OS is written so beautifully..I hope it happens this way๐The closet scene where Nandu was sleeping was written really well.Even with her sleeping..she won't let him kiss her?๐Its really cute.You wrote it so well <3
Originally posted by: .ishqbulava.
WOW This is awesome ya..I was feeling soo bored and craving for some OS so thankyou for this
Beautiful piece of work..very well writtenI would really want Nandini to spent the night at Manik's place..But damn! This girl she won't let him kiss her even in her sleep..poor guy ๐Anyways do write more.
Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
Lovely OS, lol Nandu here also wont let Manik kiss her ๐ and I felt so bad for Manik everyone had decided to not leave him alone
I liked how u made her spend the night in ur story ๐ณ
Originally posted by: gujjupari
Even when she is sleeping, Nandini can't help but add to Manik's sexual frustration๐
All-in-all, a brilliant OS! You seem to be updating one very day! Not that I am complaining! Nope! Not one bit! Keep them coming at this very rate๐
-Pari
Originally posted by: TasmiaFaye
Wow lovely os! Luks lyk fab4 & nyonika had secretly planned to make nandu stay in manik's room. Bechara manik, neend mein bhi nandu usko kiss karne nahi diya. The lines- 'why r u sleeping next to me' & 'u still haven't woken up after that shower have u? Do u need another one? If u still haven't noticed this is my bed & it is very normal for me to sleep in it. U're the one sleeping next to me' are just what nandini & manik wud have really said if such a situation arrives in the show, & i really hope it does! Ur this os is just as wonderfully written as the other os's u wrote! Really cool!
Nice ... Loved it ... I really hope real mein aisa kuchh ho :)
Originally posted by: pickachu
Lovely os!
Poor manik could not kiss her even when she was sleeping ๐I hope that happens in show too ๐ณ
Originally posted by: ForeverForU
aww so cute
Nyonika also came after Fab5...I so want to see this..the way he lifted a sleeping Nandini and slept right to her...OMFG you just made me want to read more on Manan Dua...fab job done๐
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