NEW KaSum OS (Drabble) by MyAna - Page 7

Originally posted by: --Divya--

wow nice os 👏 sorry for d late reply 😳

Loved the merry-go-round walla FF.  It was fun and cute. Totally KaSum.
As for the Forcing you OS.That was so beautifully written. You wrote their nervousness, her fear/pain of past and how he managed to convince her in the end so well.  It was awesome.
I always love your dialogs. I dont know how do it but somehow I feel thats exactly what they'd have said. 👏

Wising you a very happy new year and hopefully more FFs from you. Thanks for your PMs.

Originally posted by: queenie

Loved the merry-go-round walla FF.  It was fun and cute. Totally KaSum.
As for the Forcing you OS.That was so beautifully written. You wrote their nervousness, her fear/pain of past and how he managed to convince her in the end so well.  It was awesome.
I always love your dialogs. I dont know how do it but somehow I feel thats exactly what they'd have said. 👏

Wising you a very happy new year and hopefully more FFs from you. Thanks for your PMs.

Originally posted by: Monika.Gupta

muahh

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Nice update...KaSum blushing ☺️ 😳 😆

Perfect portrayal of emotions,extremely well written and described..but I do wish it was a bit  longer as can never have enough of u..and I always like happy endings..yea I know I'm sappy 😆 so pls,next time make it happy..rest,course,as usual-Brilliant writing,girl!!!😊😊😊 Edited by Naturegirl99 - 9 years ago

awww...it is such a nicely written drabble 😊 i could totaltly able to feel sumona's pain 😭 and that's the beauty of ur writing👏👏
plzzz do post more of ur os and drsbbles as i always wait eagerly to read  to read it😃

Originally posted by: --Divya--

Nice update...KaSum blushing ☺️ 😳 😆

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Perfect portrayal of emotions,extremely well written and described..but I do wish it was a bit  longer as can never have enough of u..and I always like happy endings..yea I know I'm sappy 😆 so pls,next time make it happy..rest,course,as usual-Brilliant writing,girl!!!😊😊😊