MaNan One Shot - Stepping Towards Zero.

Hera Flames

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Gosh, MaNan are growing so much on me.I have so much work piled up to do and here I am writing down this one shot. So much time has went since I wrote this long one shot😆 The fiction is based on yesterday's precap, that is episode 43. That's my take on what might have happened.

Do drop in 2 cents on the way if you can make it till the end of it.😆

My earlier work on this forum:

MaNan One Shot - Is It Really Heart?

MaNan Drabble - It's Beyond Forever.

- Aditi😊

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey,hey...i am the first...

i loved it...❤️

i want to see these scenes on show...

how i wish that u were the writer of kyy...

great job dear👏

jiya😊

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shravya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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👏brilliant post...beautifully writen...:)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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naya os yayyy...finally...
tu mt kr pm muje mil jayega sab...
okay this one was...umm...something different ...i m yet to watch this epi..just tits nd bits...seems amazing...
the way u portrayed the sensible nandini amidst the tension of rishabh...she is very pure at heart...concerned over the fab5 bond nd all...appreciable...
then hidden manik inside monster malhotra...
the conversation abt strong manik in the end stole the show...
beautifully explained...
good job... :-)
PS : upar likhi koi bhi bat sach nai hai...so plz writer se request hai hawa me na uda jaye 🤣

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Uditi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing OS👏

I loved reading it from Manik's viewpoint and it was great to read their conversation in her house

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Posted: 9 years ago

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That was brilliant gurl!

The way you have penned down the situation and the conversation between the two, it was amazing! And it was realistic! No exaggerated moments is what won it for me! It was true to the characters in the show and how they would react in such a situation!

The CVs have high standards to match, after this OS!

Brilliant piece of work😃

-Pari

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: dewcute
hey,hey...i am the first...
i loved it...❤️
i want to see these scenes on show...
how i wish that u were the writer of kyy...
great job dear👏

jiya😊

Lol. I understand this kind of enthusiasm😆

Ah! That's a great appreciation from your side. But I don't think I am capable enough to handle any show😳

Thank you so much.

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: shravz6
👏brilliant post...beautifully writen...:)
👏

Thanks a lot dear😊

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
naya os yayyy...finally...
tu mt kr pm muje mil jayega sab...
okay this one was...umm...something different ...i m yet to watch this epi..just tits nd bits...seems amazing...
the way u portrayed the sensible nandini amidst the tension of rishabh...she is very pure at heart...concerned over the fab5 bond nd all...appreciable...
then hidden manik inside monster malhotra...
the conversation abt strong manik in the end stole the show...
beautifully explained...
good job... :-)
PS : upar likhi koi bhi bat sach nai hai...so plz writer se request hai hawa me na uda jaye 🤣

Now stay happy and let me be too😳

Yeah, I am trying neutral fiction rather than angst or happy. Something realistic.

Awie, I know I am just uh-mazing😎

That conversation alone took me 15 minutes to write😆

Jeez, people these days.. Are just so jealous😎

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