PARCHHAIYAN - ateet ki Updated EPILOGUE on 20-1-2015 /P 142 - Page 93

thanks for pm dear,,

I would say u wrote it in a very simple and elegant way 

Showing wht a girl face sometime in a marriage and wht all she do 2 keep the marriage working but it not shld only be the girl the boy shld also compromise but in our society only girls r blame if the marriage is not working 

I love it maan was so understanding he helped Geet and her fears he was standing by her side in all the way 

I was scared with the way maan said he was yash frnd but that God it was just a dream but tht dream and with tht her guilt helped geet 2 move on 

Geet was again insecure when maan started 2 dance with other lady and with tht maan shouted on her which took geet back 2 her shell

But maan again understood everything and compromised 

Love it when geet faced all her fear and den there lived happy 

Awesome yaar I love it 

 geet part were very beautifully wriiten.. pov's..

like geet who faced  ugly past ... it very hard...

we sld place are self in their shoes... to feel it..

maan love /selfless love...made her 2 love him back...

 though he burst out...when she preg

by his support geet faced her past...she forgave them...bcoz she want maan and her life  free from past fear...

aweome..👏

 

all emotions superbly written.. ur a wonderful and gr8 writer..congrats!!

Fnly she over come her fear &shared her feelings wid him