manan os : the love trap

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Posted: 9 years ago
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manan os: the love trap

space has just completed an academic year and now nandu and group had a good relation with fab5 except for nandu and manek our mr monster. today is a very exciting day at space as it is the last day of the college and the vacation r abt to begin bt in the mist of all this excitment ad chaos of the last day der is sumthg going on in a mischevious mind tht is miss navya she has been observing manek ad nandini frm sumtime ad has a felng tht der is sumthng going on between thm bt she ws nt sure abt it ad hence decided to speak abt it to harshad as she approches harshad ad start talkng abt it the fab5 pass by them ad happend to hear thy r conversation ad decided to intervine

KABIR:wht bulshit are u tokng manek aur payaar woh bhi nandani seh have u lost it????

Navya:mein ne yeh kaha ke i have a doubt i am not sure about it.

Alya: dont try to spread rumors if u are nt sure.

harshad:wht if it is the truth even i hv seen manek lookng at nandini

Kabir:kkiz then let hv a bet to c if he has felng fr miss moorthi r nt

navya:done

mukti:bt hw wll we cum to knw we cnt ask him directly othr wise he wll break our bones

Kabir: thts der

alya:wht r u all tokng guys jst cut the crap

harshad:r u ppl bckng out of the challenge

Kabir: no nvr

alya:bt ...

kabir : u jst sty out of it

navya: kkiz thn i hv a plan(she recites the whole plan to the grup)

harshad: isnt it to filmy

navya:shut up harshad c hw it wrks lk magic

harshad : im nt so sure abt it

navya:jst sty out of it

harshad : as u wish gal

navya: kkiz guys nw lets get to wrk

NW THE SCENE SHIFT TO THE REHERSAL HALL

manek is stng ad parctise or trying to practise

suddenly the whole fab5 enters the rehersal hall with a very happy face looking at them manek askes

manek: what happened guys kya khush khabri hai??

kabir: nandani is leaving space and going back to manglore

manek: what(in a shocked voice)

then suddenly navya enters from behind

navya: why are u nt happy u always wanted this right now as ur wish is granted rejoice

manek: why???

navya: her brothers treatment was sucessful which was her only reason she cme to mumbai nw tht he is alright thy have decided to go back

manek: bt wht abt her education??

navya: why r u so concerned abt her waise bhi uncle aunty has admitted her in a college there

manek: when is she going????

navya: today at one by train

manek: thank god good riddence and he walks away

alya : see i told u

just thn thy here a car roar and thy go out to check whn thy see manek passing by in a rush

navya : see i told u so

alya: how can u be so sure tht he is going behind her

navya: so lets follow them

thy all start following manek who seems to be driving as if the devil is behind her they all stop outside cst when they see manek comming out of his car and dashing inside and they all start following him and the scene tht takes place in front of thm shocks thm to their core

a very desperate manek demanding nandini not to go and a very confused nandini not understanding what is going on (as u see nandu had just come to see off her relatives and she had informed abt it to navya who had used this info fr her benefit)

nandu: what r u doing here???????

manek: you tell me first wht r u doing here and where are u going????????

nandini: i am nt answerable to u mr malhotra so app pls mujhe bata sakte hai app yaha kya kar rahe hai???

manek: u cant leave me here and go like tht

nandu: huh!!! i didnt get u

manek: tht is the problem u dont understand anything

nandu: wht r u trying to say???????

manek: wht i m trying to say is tht i love u and i dont wnt u to leave

nandu: bt who told u tht i m leaving

manek: navya

nandu: bt why would she lie she knws tht i came here only to see of my relatives

manek: so u r nt going

nandu: no bt wht u told me is tht d truth or is it one of ur pranks fr revenge

manek: no miss moorty i really love u

nandu: really

manek: really ur ayyapa ki kasam

nandu:i love u to (and they hug)

and in the mean time navya is jumping in joy as her plan worked out quite well

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Nyc os! The best thing wud be if smthing lyk dis really happens in da show!
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Thanks for the replies ppl 
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hey,hey,that was an adorable trap..
i loved it
good job👏
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"...and alya is fuming in the background."
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Awe such a sweet os <3
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Navya and Cabir got them together :)