Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
Superb part
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Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
Superb part
Thanks for.pm
Continue soon
Originally posted by: lpsakshi
Thanks for pm
Its going nice
But I am confused
Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
just superb waiting for the next
asap update please ,,thank u for ur pm
hey...amazing story! dat was another intresting shot! so rams a vampire n got to noe dat his hypnotism doesnt work on priya! intrestng! n u brought dat juhi..god she z so yuck...nyway hope ram deals with her well! n were dey humans b4 bcuming vampires? nyway dat was a gr8 idea! n new title also though it killed d suspense! :p cont soon n sorry for i wasnt able to comment on previous updates!
very intrestng story...!!!! π
good pace...!!!!yha bhi juhi... π€as werewolf...!!!jldi se isko eliminate krdo...!!!!! πraya ko milado...!!!aur ram ko human bhi banado...if possible... :Piam alien to these vampires and werewolfs concept...toh idea nhi...!!! πcontn soon...!!!
thnx fr the pm...!!!
Originally posted by: Bunny_honey
Nice Story, read all parts in one go,
Sabko Vampire bana diya goodππ Krishnaji ko bhi π aur wo bhi shareef Vampireπ€£π€£ But Ram ko blood sucking Vampire aur baki sabko shareef Vampire kuyn? Yahaan par bhi juhi aagayi werewolf banke. Waise ye samuya , sid, rishab jo blood bank ka khoon pite hain wo kiya apna matching blood group dekhke pite hain ya aise hi koi bhi blood group utha lete hain aur cheers cheers karke pilete hain. ππ π€£π€£Really nice adoption of the story or really nice story as I think this one is first fiction on Raya based on supernatural things.Waise main Vampires se ek question poochna chahati hoon , ki woh log humans ko apne matching blood group dehke hunt karte hain ya ase hi koi bhi blood group chal jata hai. Waise ye dangerous ho sakta hai because alag alag blood groups se blood clotting ho jati hai which causes death. πππ€£ π€£ Agar kisi ko mile toh meri taraf se plz ye question plz poochlena.ππVery good story, especially the scene where Ram save her from car , it reminds me about twilight's scene.Nice one , continue soon.π
Originally posted by: akilagoud2
very interesting story
ram vampire n priya human being
continue soon
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Awesome update and thanks for the pm
Hai... A name change followed by a lengthy lovely updateπ
Niceπππ.What the hell is that stupid Juhi doing here.. I think that the murders are by Juhi... Maybe Rajat is a werewolf...Superbly written... Hope Juhi doesn't create any problems for Priya...Please continue soonThanks for PMπ
heyy senior... i guessd it right..π₯³ ram is vampire,...
yee juhi forest mai mili ...π ye to jungle rani nikli...π€£ wo kya karegi..?πaww ram n priya likes each other...πi guess ram b waha aya hoga chupke chupke dekh raha hoga rajat n priya ko...πsuperb updates yaar..!! love the stry... interesting too..continue soon...π
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