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Nicely thought..starting is good..especislly the first few lines..Keep writing..and all the best!😊Edited by KHUSHI-99 - 9 years ago

Devika, mann khush kar diya, priye!!! I didn't even think you will use the meaning of the name so precisely!!! Awesome, poignant, intriguing snd well written!!, bow down to you, devika!!!

What a great start! Loved the starting verse and the words following flow very smoothly together.
Beautiful thoughts expressed very well...kudos! Thank you for the PM

Hi di  Edited by AadhyaAashutosh - 9 years ago

No words to tell u how much ur words had effect on me !!!

Originally posted by: varaali

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Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

Nicely thought..starting is good..especislly the first few lines..Keep writing..and all the best!😊

Thank you very much dear 😊 keep reading 😊

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Devika, mann khush kar diya, priye!!! I didn't even think you will use the meaning of the name so precisely!!! Awesome, poignant, intriguing snd well written!!, bow down to you, devika!!!

Dhanyavaad Priya Jiji 🤗 aapke madhur shabd ne mera bhi mann ko khush kar diya 😃 mai apne Aaryaputra se itna prem karti hun jo shabd me prakash karna bhi sambhab nahi hai 😳 phir bhi mai prayaas kar rahi hun unka hriday ki bhasha sabko samjhane ke liye 😊

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

What a great start! Loved the starting verse and the words following flow very smoothly together.
Beautiful thoughts expressed very well...kudos! Thank you for the PM

Thank you very much 😊 glad that you liked it 😊 I think it is the main feature of Yudhishthir that only Krishna could understand him, & that's why ordinary people cannot understand him, so I used that verse only.😊