a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 85

Luvly update...
Aww swayam staring at sharon whole night...
Swaron secnd kiss...;)
Swayam teasing sharon...
Finally dey r behaving lyk couples...
Update asap
Thnx fr pm

Aww... this was a such an adorable and lovely update. Swayam has finally managed to understand Sharon's thoughts. The way Sharon was sleeping and Swayam observing her...hayeee😳😳 Loved teasing Swayam and blushing Sharon.☺️.

Wow chappychappy
Loved it too much

Thanks 4 . D pm

n i read it all in a go :) 

Vry nyc update

hey, I know I have become one silent reader but can't help it as my busy work schedule doesn't allows me to read and comment or like.. Coming back to the story, I m loving the way u r unfolding the story.. be it that confession or the Shimla tour or be it them watching yjhd or anything, I m just loving it.. Last chapter was kinda cute for me.. Ahhh finally she confessed, but I loved the way u penned it down.. her (cute) sleeping description was lovely.. that kalyug wala line was funny.. The teasing wala part made me go to the awww land.. as I saod it before the chapter was cute.. nd yes waiting for u to update the next chapter of this as well as 'It...smile'.. sooo happy to read your third ongoing ff.. its lovely and a treat to read... Arrggghhh ' how can 'nothing lasts forever' end.. but anyway I loved its epilogue.. sorry won't be able to comment on each ff nd won't be able to actively comment on ur works... waiting for the upcoming chapters..


-cheers
    cherry

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Oh please no thanks to me -_- i just gave slight idea 

Major work was to put in words making it cute ^_^ 

i loved the teasing parts ^_^ 

Honeymoon extension :v :v 

 She is so open to confess now ^_^ I'm so happy 

Their second kiss *-* first after confession 

Finally behaving like married couple _/\_

Did he sleep or passed on whole night observing her wife :p so lost in love

:3 Sharon, i can imagine her shocked :p listening to the sudden news :v 

Looking forward to how swayam is gonna tease her more ;)

Update soon :( 

I wanna read next part :'( 

Thanks :')

👏

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Haawww Finally after lots of demanding and threatens madam updated... 😆

Loved it as usual ..👏

But u were saying that u are going update something else na 😉, Then what happened????? I was waiting for that... 😆..But its ohk..i can wait more... This is  beautiful one...

Loved the way swayam teased sharon...aww she is blushing, So cute ☺️

Loved the talk between swaron they are really tooo cute... Swayam is too naughty😆

And the special sleep only swayam can do.😆  what he was doing, admiring his lady love ...😳 Thats so sweet of him...  Im admiring this guy now😆...he is so sweet...and lovely 😉

Really good see their love is reciprocating 😃.. She is openly confessing now... Thts great😛

And their second kiss which reminded me of first one...thats was a pure bliss...😳

But y they going back??😕 

End was so funny😆

Pervert and swayam 😆

I love the last line as sharon's wish to throw him out of universe...such a nice idea...😆😆

Update fast...

Waiting

Keechu

Originally posted by: nidhi.nidsnicks

Di awesome update

Loved it

Loved it wen swayam was staring at sharon at night wen she was sleeping

Swayam teasing sharon ...LOL...!!

Update the nxt part soon

Nd thnx for d pm

Originally posted by: ujwalv

superb update😊

nw they r actually behaving like a married couple..

loved it..loved teasing part..naughty swayam..😛 😃😆

awesome update..

☺️

yaar 2din pehle kyun ja rahe hai😛

kuch plan to nahi hai..surprise😉