"Jeevan Saathi Saath Mein Rahena" ch 20 page 93 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Komali14

Thank u sanju...😊

m glad u like my comment... i always write crap...nt gud like others...

wn u ll update waiting...

wn ll love season 😳start in this stry...❓

Your comments are not crap darling
I appreciate them very much ⭐️
Already updated 😉
Romance is just around the corner 😳
Stick around.. Mwaah!

Awww sanju this ws cutest update...😊

Antu's MIL is so swt n caring...😛

Antu thinking abt Raghu hw cute...

Antu ws trying to pin her pallu n wn Raghu offered help she poked finger bechari...  

kitna gabrati hai pati se...😳

Raghu as usual caring hubby put her finger in his mouth awww...😳

Raghu looked her n thought she is jannat ki pari hayyy...😳

Muh dikhayee rasam ws tooo gud...

Everyone praised her beauty n Raghu felt proud...

Ruku n machmach luv thm ...😃

Raghu sw her n said so sweet words to her luved it...😛

Raghu ne diamond ring pehanaya luvely gift 😊 n kiss bhi kiya so cute...😳 n thn he took her in his arms ...

Luv this stry so much ...😃 thanx for writing...⭐️👏

Waiting for other rasams n rantara moment...

Plz cont soon...

Thank u😊

 

 

 

 

Edited by Komali14 - 9 years ago

I appreciate them very much ⭐️ 
Already updated 😉 
Romance is just around the corner 😳 
Stick around.. Mwaah! 

_______________Edited by Komali14 - 9 years ago

Sanju,

Originally posted by: Komali14

Awww
sanju this ws cutest update...😊

Antu's
MIL is so swt n caring...😛

Antu
thinking abt Raghu hw cute...

Antu
ws trying to pin her pallu n wn Raghu offered help she poked finger
bechari...

kitna gabrati hai pati se...😳

Raghu
as usual caring hubby put her finger in his mouth awww...😳

Raghu
looked her n thought she is jannat ki pari hayyy...😳

Muh
dikhayee rasam ws tooo gud...

Everyone
praised her beauty n Raghu felt proud...

Ruku
n machmach luv thm ...😃

Raghu
sw her n said so sweet words to her luved it...😛

Raghu
ne diamond ring pehanaya luvely gift 😊n kiss bhi kiya so cute...😳 n thn he took
her in his arms ...

Luv
this stry so much ...😃thanx for writing...⭐️👏

Waiting
for other rasams n rantara moment...

Plz
cont soon...

Thank
u😊

Thanks Nikita!
I've started to love this story too 😳
I'm gonna add cute rantara scenes wherever possible
Rantara moments... Their romance etc etc 😳
The romance will get intense...stay tuned sweeti! 😉

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Sanju,

great writing as always..

Sorry yaar main aaj kal late ho rahi hoon..

Have been busy...

Wow !! I am really happy to see the progress in their relationship..
And the way you have written it is just amazing..

Hats off to you yaar..

-Prerna

Prerna ji thank you!
Its ok jab time miley tab par ke comments kardena 😉
Hugs 🤗

omg lovely story...i read all chapteres...so emotional.. touchy.. antara so innocent yar..i hate her sister. raghu care for antara its gud... i hope raghu uske pyar main pagal ho jaye

i know aage jake antara ki sis raghu pe apana hakh jatayegi.. that time i want raghu use apani jaga bataye.. madly love antara... give her all happyness

thanx for lovely ff dear...sry for the let comment..plzzz continue update soonEdited by pooji145 - 9 years ago

Chapter 4
Please read and do comment... Thank you! 😉

Antara stood in front of Raghu... Blushed red and gaze lowered. Raghu couldn't take his eyes off of her. Shy and embarrassed Antara had no way to escape. "Chalo baccho aur bhi rasam baaki hai jissey pura Karna hai." Mom said. Rantara sat down on the beautiful loveseat. A beautiful decorated coffee table was set before them and on it was a golden pot with milk and rose petals in it. "Guys iss me dus gold coins hai..tum dono ko coins dhoondna hoga...abh dekhna ye hai ki kiskey haanth zyada coins aatah hai...agar Antara ko zyada coins miltey hai toh woh zindagi bhar Raghu par raaj karegi aur agar Raghu ke haanth zyada coins aatey hai toh he will rule upon Antara... Toh Chalo game start kiya jaay! Ruksana said. Raghu glanced at Nervous and shy Antara. They both shoved their hands in the bowl. They both started searching for the coins. Raghu noticed Antara was smiling. This was the first time he saw her beautiful smile after marriage. He never wanted to steal that smile from her. He wants that smile to last forever. " come on Antara! Ruksana cheered."come on beta! Mom cheered for Antara as well."bhaai chorna mat! Machmach cheered. Antara had few coins and the rest was in Raghu's hands. "Mujhey zindagi bhar tumara gulaam banna manjoor hai Antara. Raghu said in his heart and grabbed her hand. Antara tried to free her hand but he won't let her. He gently put all the coins that he collected in her palm .Antara's gaze shifted on him...he winked at her...Antara looked away embarrassed. " times up! Ruksana said. Everyone laughed when Raghu showed them his empty hand. "Ye Kiya bhaai? Machmach said." Machmach...zyada machmach mat kar...mayney wahi Kiya Joh tu ruksana ke saath Kiya thaa. Raghu said. Machmach looked at ruksana and blushed. "Tu bahut khush naseeb hai Joh tujhey Raghu jaysa pati mila ...ye game haar kar unoney ye prove kardiya ki woh tujhey khush dekhna chahata hai...aur tum dekhna woh tumey bahut pyaar karega..bahut khush rakhega. Ruksana said to Antara. Antara became more red. Raghu was talking to machmach but his eyes were on Antara. He was lost in her smile. He couldn't resist himself so he sat down beside her and whispered in her ears." Issi tarah husti raha kar...acchi lagti hai. Antara just managed to nod. Her heart was pumping hard as his words roamed her ears. Raghu was stealing glances of her while she couldn't meet his piercing gaze. Rantara were escorted to the living room. "Ye haldi aur chandan ka paste hai..dip your hands and imprint it on the wall. Mom said. Raghu dipped his right hand while Antara dipped her left...together they imprinted their haldi chandan covered hands on the wall. Everyone applauded and made noises. Rantara were enjoying these rituals very much. Raghu rubbed his finger on Antara's cheek. Everyone giggled while Antara just changed shades. " food is ready guys! Ruksana announced. Rantara sat down to eat with machmach/ruksana and Raghu's office staff. Antara's body shivered with gooseflesh when Raghu fed her with his own hands. Antara kept her gaze lowered...sharm ke maarey bura haal horaha thaa uska. Raghu fed her from his plate and ate himself as well. Antara didn't resist.. He seemed very Happy and she didn't wanted to ruin that. Raghu's staff admired and adored them as they ate together. "You are so lucky. One of the staff said to Antara." No..I'm lucky and blessed to have her in my life. Raghu told the staff. "Wah Kiya baath hai! Someone said. Antara felt blessed at his words. Soon the dinner was over. Lights were dimmed and music started." Everyone on the dance floor! Machmach said loudly. The hall turned into a dace floor by none other than machmach and ruksana. Couples were dancing and enjoying themselves. Ruksana and Antara got busy chatting when machmach dragged Raghu by his hand ."tu kaha leja raha hai mujhey yaar? Raghu asked. "Khushi ka mauka hai bubbly aunty ko kaysey bhooley?" Bechari kab se entry maarney ki koshish kar Rahi hai. Machmach said. "Arey yaar I can't drink tujhey toh patah piney ke baadh mera Kiya hota hai...may sab bhool jaata hun yaar! Raghu said. But machmach forced him to drink. Soon the two friends were drunk and laughing at nothing! " bhaai Terey ye gaal pe kaala teeka kaha se aya? Machmach asked. "Arey yaar mom ne laga diya ye kah kar ki merey bacchey ko nazar na lagay . ...ye mom bhi na patah nai Kiya Kiya karti raheti hai. Raghu said." Arey ye teeka toh Antara ko lagana chahiye taaki ussey kisiki buri nazar na lagay. Machmach told him. "Accha?" May abhi laga kar aatah hun. Raghu stammered and headed towards Antara who was still chatting with ruksana. Almost falling and composing himself he finally made it to Antara. Machmach came and dragged ruksana to the dance floor. Rantara were left alone. "Chal Antara dance kartey hai! Raghu said while forwarding his hand to her.Antara gulped." Mujhey dance nai aatah. Antara said."I'll teach you... come. Raghu said. Antara reluctantly gave her hand in his. It was dark..they could hardly see anybody on the floor...only lights were the colored lights that were dancing above their heads. Antara was trembling badly. A whimper escaped her lips when Raghu slide his arms around her slander waist and pulled her on him! Her hands automatically landed on his chest. His alcohol breath steamed her face. Antara than realized that he consumed alcohol. "Aapney sharaab pii hai? Asked Antara. " just a little bit. He said. Everyone around them were dancing but rantara stood in their midst talking! "Aapko araam Karna chahiye..you are drunk! Antara said. She was concerned because Raghu was stumbling and losing his senses. " Chalo na I'll take you to the bedroom. Antara said. "Baad me..pahelay mujhey tumey ye teeka lagana hai taaki tujhey buri nazar na lagay. Raghu said." Kaha hai teeka? Asked Antara confusedly. "Merey gaal par. He said and squeezed her hips and pulled her more onto him. " Kiya kar rahey hai aap.. sab dekho rahey hai. Antara whispered as her heart pounded hard. "Kiya kar raha hu...kuch bhi toh nai bas apna ye teeka tujhey lagana hai. Raghu said while leaning to rub his cheek with hers. Antara broke free and ran from there! Her chest rose and fell as she hid behind the pillars. " Antara! His voice reached her ears. "Hey bhagwan aaj woh mujhey chorega nai! Antara thought. He was looking for her when his eyes caught her pallu flying from wind that was coming through the window. A smile appeared on his lips. He looked dangerous with red eyes and killer instinct. He pulled on her pallu and it came off. Antara almost screamed in fear when Raghu pulled her petite figure in his arms! " Choro na...Kiya kar rahey hai aap? Antara twisted in his powerful arms like a fish trapped in a fishing net. His alcohol breath was intoxicating her badly. Her throat went dry as every fiber in her body went weak giving her dizzy spells. "Nai chorunga jab tak teeka nai laga du! Raghu's deep husky voice gave her chills in her spine . Her daadi's words roamed in her ears." As a wife its your responsibility and duty to fulfill your husbands needs and wants! "To please him and satisfy him even if you are not in the mood! Antara relaxed in his arms. Raghu leaned and rubbed his hairy cheek on hers.Antara squeezed her eyes shut as nervous excitement ran through her veins. Antara hissed as his stubble pricked her milky skin. Both were losing control as sensations were overshadowing them. Antara's pallu fell on the floor as she quickly embraced her bosom and looked down embarrassed. Raghu scanned her from top to bottom...he could see very little from the darkness. Antara stood caged in his arms with trembling and wobbly feet! Raghu tilted her chin and whispered." You are beautiful Antara! Their gaze met as the moonlight peeped through the window giving them a little bit of light. They stood there searching in each others eyes. He gently cupped her cheeks and rubbed it with his thumb. Burning with embarrassment and nervousness she looked down as his eyes were too much to bear and it was ripping through her heart and soul. She squeezed her chest with her arms as Raghu toyed with her silky hair.
Second part scroll down...Edited by sanjinimala - 9 years ago