Os/SS: "RaYa-Ek Prem katha" - Page 4

Originally posted by: shailST

Very nice story continue soon

Originally posted by: contactcharu

very different story
pls continue soon

Originally posted by: peeyara

it does need tym to read all 😆

isme hindi words bhi hai, seek your translator elp, whoever is avaiable 😆

Originally posted by: armanz

OMG first part padhke main 🤣 aur pet dard aagaya mujhe... deyyvudaaa 🤣 kya aithihasik prem kahani likha hain..shabash..esp Armani sut, Mercedes, Iphone and above all WA isse jyada purani era mein nahin likha aap logon ne..Thanks to u ppl..

Historic dekha toh I thought of horses and crown not of Iphone n WA 🤣

biscuit 🤣

Neha and Vik ka aithihasik side love story shuru bhi hogaya aur ye RaYa bhi na mirchi khilane jaisa bekaar challenges mein apna time waste kar rahe hain 🤣

Loved the way Kappu got eliminated himself.. 

yaha bhi tedhi bindi 🤣 Raja ho ya business man Ram toh Ram hain🤣

Thanks for posting this..will read 2nd part later.

Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: OrangeBlossoms

Rofl

Kya khichdi pakayi hai aap logon ne milke👏

Hassi toh rukne ka naam hi nahin lerahi🤣

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

hahahaha oh my gd 🤣

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

😲 😲 😲 yeh story thi ki ek aur kichdi

meine hamesha se chaha tha ki malati story likhe...lekin itna kamal karegi pata nahi tha😆

all are four writers  r awesome...aanchal ki wish ko itni achhi tarah se fulfilled karoge pata nahi tha😆 bass naam ke aage prince and princess lagakar historical bana diya😆 😆ek bhi character ko nahi choda...sab ki achhi se band bajayi hai😆...dates ko khajur kehte hai na...shayad😆

story ke baare mein kya kahu...wah...wah...wah..wah...jab PM dekha toh historical dekha toh sabse pehle Jodha Akbar dekhne ki feeling aayi aur jaise hi pada feeling sab choomantar ho gaya😆

Princess Priya ko apple juice pasand hai aur yahan ek member ko bhi pasand hai😉...kahi yeh woh toh nahi😆...must say you all are very good in writing😳

prem katha ko aage badao ...hame Pm dene ke liye shukriya🤗

Originally posted by: ILoveRamKapoor

LOL ive only written 2 lines hehe. credit goes to malati and naseeem and ofcourseee jodude

Originally posted by: veena23

Hahahaha...gosshhh..yuvraj...hadh h aplog...gud gud

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Yes indeed i took so much time .. 

and these my Two translaters [Viji and malu ] were nt going to help me to translate this poora in english 😆   

They will die by translationg it .. 😆 

so I read the parts with so much difficulty 

and few i asked from My dear hubby tooo ... 

He rofled and asked where you got thes lines of hindi  .. 🤣

as he knew about this forum he very well knw it sfrom here only .. 

as seeing his laugh i didnt ask him furthur as it wass too too crazy to read 

full with fun

I loved it 

see i fiinihsed today .. 

i prefer you both not to write in HINDI 😡🤣