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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Malavika7CLT

Wow..! Finally... you made an attempt to write something based on Seher.. Thank you so much dear. She is my personal favourite.. I really want to read your story, bcz I noticed you made somany posts based on this character.. Plz Continue.. Waiting for your beautiful updates..


I was a hard core fan of asya/ kabhi. After ksg's replacement I quit the show. But seher's entry made me watch QH once again & Sehan stole my heart once again. Seher is one unique character like how zoya was unique. I like guys like Rehan too. So I love Sehan a lot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: -Hurya-

Interesting⭐️...

Continue Soon<3


Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Nice prologue uma di. Want to read more. Update soon and also update your asya stories na i miss them. Plzz plzz


Thanks raj
Will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: ankie95

hey i m in the same boat in which u r sailing
loving sehan after asya
plz pm me for the updates of this story


Yep all asya fans are now Sehan fans. Those who loves asya can't hate Sehan as they are a tribute to asya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrettYSmile

Heyy nice one.. ..I not a big sehaan lover.. ..but I don't even dislike them.. .

I like their characters n both surbhi n shehzad r brilliant actors. .

More over I like ur writting style n stories. .

Beautiful start.. .

Thanks
Yep ss & SJ doing a great job.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

FFinally

Woah
After the orignal asya ended i never got head over heels fr any couple
Bt srsly sehan...god i just love them
Damn cute
They remind of asya
Bt i just love this pair
Rehan is damn cute n seher, god she amazig
Lovely concept
I loved that scene
Dieing to read
Plz cont soon


Yep Sehan is so cute. Sehan gives the charm like asya once did to us. Similar but yet different that's what is Sehan. Thanks yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: nawshi

yes a sehaan story, i am absploutely loving them in show. Loved Rehaan since his entry and now that seher has come, i am hopeful that he can get wat he deserves. Some happiness. Pls continue, looking forward to it.


Thanks
Yep after seher's entry rehans character is developing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cindrella3

Awesome starting!👏 I have already fallen in love with Sehan.❤️ I was about to request you to write a story on them. But you already started it. I'm hooked to this. i want to read more Sehan stories. I have gone mad searching for them on IF. Do continue soon!😃


Thanks dear
Sehan is adorable
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Rehan was puzzled to see tension on sunehri's face. Sunehri & tension! That's something usually won't go with her personality. Some problem is there for sure.
Rehan: sunehri
Rehans voice made sunehri to come back to reality.
Sunehri: yes sir!
Rehan: is every thing ok? Whose call was that?
Sunehri: sir aap phir se mr. Question mark Ke mode pe Gaye. Mera cousin ka call tha sir. Ghar walon Ke bhare mein Soch kar Thoda tensed hoon.
Rehan: are you ok?
Sunehri: yes sir. I am absolutely fine.
Rehan: are you sure?
Sunehri was touched by his care & concern.
Sunehri: yes sir.
Sunehri was feeling extremely guilty for saying lies to a man like Rehan. Rehan! She has never seen a man like Rehan in her life. Simple, soft, humble, caring, loyal, brave. He finds time to spend with orphan kids, sponsor them for there studies. Now a days people won't spend time with there own kids. But this guy spend time with orphan kids, he gives his earnings to those kids who doesn't have anyone. The way he saved her from street rowdies when he saw them hurting her. Upto this 22yrs of life no one had fought for her like Rehan when she was hurt. Every one utilised her hurted vulnerable state. Is that the reason she stopped herself from steeling the money from his office? For past few years she had hidden her soft, emotional side purposefully as she know the world she is in won't allow to think from heart. She is banned to be emotional. But rehans goodness has unknowingly brought out the real her hidden inside all these years. Now she knows she can't be the same heartless, bindass con women again. She has started listening to her heart now. She herself don't know why Rehan has started affecting her so much. She knows she is not allowed to have a normal life like other girls of her age. Rehan is gem of a person! He deserves the best girl in the world. Not a con women like her. After few years she so wished if she was able to lead a normal life. She knows it's too late now. Infact it's impossible. Who will marry a con women? Even if she wants to change will the society allows it? Once a thief they always remains as a thief. That label will never go from her. She should stop thinking about all this. This will only give her pain. She can't understand what game is fate playing with her. Why bappa is making her fall for Rehan when she knows it's not possible? Isn't the pain she suffered up to these years not enough? Does she needs to undergo one more heart break? Once she finished the paper works Rehan had gave she took her note pad. She started to do sketching of a picture which is in her mind.

This was one of her hobby. When ever she is free she do sketching. Or whenever she is tensed also. Drawing gives her happiness. It relives her pain. From her childhood she draws well. She was always the painting champion in her school. No one has taught her drawing. She had won district level competitions in drawing. Many of the judges used to get amassed by her talent when they knew she was a kid from a normal government school under balvikas orphan trust. She had heard many of them speaking that her talent could be hereditary. Either or her parents must have the skill to draw. That indeed makes her hurt. She don't know anything about her parents. Who are they? What kind of personalities are they? How she ended up in an orphanage? From the day she has memory she is an orphan. More than sketching she loves painting. She is a colourful person. But to carry paint always is not possible. So than painting she do sketching more.

Rehan was once again lost in sunehri. He was working on his laptop but once he shifted his gaze from it unknowingly it went to sunehri who is sitting in front of him. She was so involved in something which she was doing. She looked so cute in pink kurthi & patiala. He rembered when he met her on the road initially she was in pink too. Pink suits her well. Already she is so cute when she wears pink it makes her adorable. He himself can't understand what's pulling him towards her. Why do he feel that she is his destiny? Is it because the way she cares for him? He remembered the night she barged into his guest house, the way she asked that you have not ate anything? This was something which no one had asked at him. No one has really cared whether he ate or slept. This girl is creating some feelings in him which he has never felt.

He came back from his wonderland. He knows sunehri has finished the work he gave her long back. Then what she is doing now, that too she is too involved. He went near her. He was surprised to see sunehri working on a sketch. Rehans footsteps made sunehri realise that he is standing near to her. She looked at him.
Sunehri: woh actually I finished the work & I was free so I thought
Rehan: just show me your sketch.
Sunehri gave her note to him. Rehan was stunned to see an amazing sketch made by sunehri. It was a sketch of a small girl doing some sort of painting & a mother sitting next to her & helping the kid. The background was a room which looked like it belong to some Disney princess.
Rehan: this is so gorgeous sunehri. I have never seen such a beautiful sketch in my life.
Sunehri give her beautiful dimple smile to him.
Rehan: you are missing your family a lot? Right sunehri?
Sunehri's smile faded.
Sunehri's thoughts: yes Rehan I miss my family a lot. Even though I don't know anything about my parents I miss them each & every second in my life. I don't know who are they? I don't even know there names. But I so wish if they were there in my life. My parents, siblings, cousins, relatives, grand parents. I wish I had a big family. May be I am not that lucky.
Rehan noticed her sadness on her face. Her sad face indeed affected him.
Rehan: you can give such a takkar to dinsey world.
Sunehri: ji?
Rehan: see the room in this picture. It's more beautiful than a Disney world princess room.
Sunehri smiled.
Rehan: one minute! Did you do graduation in interiors? Or fine arts?
Her face once again.
Sunehri: It was my ambition to become an interior designer. You know Rehan from my childhood I used to design every were, with waste stuffs, broken stuffs I used to create some arrangement stuffs & decorate the place I used to stay. But it all remain as a dream.
Rehan: kyun?
Sunehri: I couldn't continue my studies after 12 th Rehan.
Rehan could see pain in her eyes. He remember her saying in dhabha " aap jaise Amir logoko hum jaise Garib logo ka parishani nahi samjh sakthi"
Is it because of poverty sunehri couldn't continue her studies.
Sunehri is so talented. She needs to achieve her dreams. He needs to talk to her about her studies. He decided once they go back to guest house he should talk her to continue her studies.
Rest of the day both were busy in there work. After sunehri's entry in office she made sure that Rehan ate on time. She used to give him company for lunch & tea break. Rehan started enjoying her company on dining table. Rehan never ate proper meals on time. It depends upon his work. Usually he will be having his meals alone. Sunehri's sudden interference in his life changed everything. Now he had started to believe it was for better.

Evening

Both Rehan & sunehri was going back to guest house from the office.
Sunehri: Rehan please stop the car.
Rehan was astonished.
Rehan: what happened sunehri?
Sunehri: woh actually there is a Ganesh temple here. I will go to temple & come. You go & take rest.
Rehan stopped the car.
Rehan: it's ok sunehri. I will wait here. You go & come.
Sunehri couldn't say no to his caring face. She nodded her head in a yes. She smiled & went. On the way she climbed the stairs she turned back only to see Rehan looking at her affectionately. She smiled at him.
Rehan was happy that she turned back before going inside. He wished to see that. Why? He himself don't know.
He know there is something very special about sunehri! Something different! She entered in his life as a fresh breeze of air which took away all his pain & dragged him to happiness!

Pre cap: sunehri meets Shishupal & rosy & informs them that she can't steel rehans money.

A/N: those who want pm for this story please mention in the reply so that I could sent them only to those who needed. Many of my pm list readers are only asya fans & wants only asya stories. So I can created a new list for Sehan story. Please give your names for those who want pm.

This story is based on Sehan. I am not anti sahil but I am not a great fan too. So much of sahil won't be here. This story is about seher & Rehan who met each other as they were destined to be together. It's there story how two different personalities, how two people from opposite circumstances falls for each other & stands together by there side always.

Sunehri/ seher had basic education. Her past will be revealed soon. I want to see asad's shade in seher. Except for her self loathing she is completely zoya. So that's why I showed her as a person who can draw well. Her dream to become interior designer too comes from asad.

Edited by Az07 - 11 years ago

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