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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update dear... Really heart touching story... Love ansh conversation n shiv ananya bonding...eager to know more...thanks for the update this soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

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amazing update!!!!!
at least for a minute anandi thought that shiv is cute when he was sleeping... and shiv also thought that an angel had fallen on him, awww 😳

ananya sooo cute wants to spend time with her papa...
and the way she went to the office and waited for an appointment, so adorable ❤️
glad the misunderstanding about ananya between shiv and anandi got cleared...
i'm sure soon they'll accept each other too 😉
and last but not least... shiv and ananya make the best father-daughter pair!!! they have similar likes and dislikes, and they understand each other so well... and oh yah i love how shiv automatically gets up at 3 to check on ananya, and that ananya too says i love you papa in her sleep at that same time... and and and shiv checking on the otehr baby, anandi 😳

waiting for the next teaser 😊

Dear for the comment and for liking the update

Congrats for coming First

I always feel that a person when is sleeping looks the most innocent and cute

Yeah he felt that an angel had fallen from the skies but acc to him that angel is Ashima who is in the heavens

ShAnya are the cutest daddy and daughter; Siv checks up on her and she too in her sleep says papa I love you cause she has not been able to tell him that on his face and he too;

The MU cleared Oh my he gave her a dhamki that he will send her back to the maayka if she interferes from now on 😆

You know I wanted to add another dhamki that she could mess with Shiv the man, the business man but she dare not mess with Shiv the papa and get her act together But then I thought that would be too harsh so let it go

Yeah the other baby like when I wrote about Anandi putting her things back in the cupboard I felt like i was writing about a child who puts back the toys in the toy cart after scolded by mom for littering the toys everywhere in the house

Lots of ShAnya coming up with AnSh ka tadka maarke

Thank you once again for liking the story


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Posted: 11 years ago
It was the most sweet update ..
I will read the update two Time still cannot over it .
I cried in office part .
And anandi shiv part also .,
Yarrr pls don't end so soon.
Tzr @midnight ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chahat ,

It is such a beautiful update. Emotional, cute and lovely.⭐️

I really got angry when Shiv left office without meeting Ananya and that scene of she sleeping on bench n still wanting to be with her DAD without any complains was so touching .

Loved fighting Shiv-Anandi. 😆

The way Shiv let out his feeling for Ananya was also very nice

You have shown the beautiful start of bonding of Father n Daughter would like to see it more and eventually love to blossom between Shiv and Anandi.

This story getting more interesting by each passing day please update it soon. In case you send PM please add me to it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's beautifull update
Interaction btw ansh
Nw bounding btw daughter n father


Simply awesome

When shiv didn't meet his daughter by mistake n ansh convo too touching

Update nxt part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chahat...I am speechless...it took me two hrs to read this one...coz I was going slow and was feeling each and every thing to its depth...the insecurities of anandi as a mother and hesitation of shiv as a step father...both of them were right in their place...and than d entire convo on d bench...it moved me to tears...I was crying literally...coz I can understand d pain of a child without father...me being one...anandi's concern for her daughter and her frustration for shiv was natural..on d other hand d entire dialogue of Shiv touched d bottom of my heart.. He was like a true father making anandi realise her stubbornness...loved d equation between father daughter duo...it was one emotional journey for me reading this update
& one more thing loved d way when shiv said I will drop u to ur mother's place if u wish so but my daughter will stay with me...
God ..every girl shd get such a cool daddy...Thank u for this one.. Thank u Fatema for d plot...initially after reading d plot I had doubts on how it wud turn into... But this till date has been d best plot and chahat can work wonders with any framework...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HemaG

omg...such a lonnggg update
ll read now...
and comments tomorrow

okay

OK as and when you cna but a long one

I promise with a pic i will also give long answer like i did for preeti

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Posted: 11 years ago
WHAT AN AMAZING SS ! LOVED IT !! I was both 😭 and awww while reading the update ! Loving Shiv and Ananya's bonding :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
uhh.
finally i m back after readinfthe. update 4 times...
OMG...
this update was sooo cute...
loved ananya and anandi so much...
shiv was very nice in this chap.,..
so sad for ananya...
how much she longed to spend time with her papa...
and loved the concept..i l u papa...
and papa loves u too thing...
that is the cutest tjing in this update ..
and now...anandi finds shiv innocent...
oh...wow...
but so soon...
and he...my goodnes...he thought its some angel...
huh..
loved his reaction after knlwing its anandi...
and the gunny thing is anandi doing circus on bed..
haha...i imagined it very well...lol
and ira think ok ok...i didnt like her much...
and loved the backhug...
thanks for the SPICY scn as i asked (LOL...i know u didnt write for me...)
Still...wat i expected came...so happieee
🥳
and lag phera...shiv came..really o_0
forgot to mention...the DIABETIC joke...
karela can't get diabetics...seriously...she called him.karela... 🤣 loved anandi here..
and evn the plate snatch scn was too gud...
best was Ananya...waiting for shiv...THAT SCN WAS MINDBLOWING...i reread it 20 times...how sweet of her..
can someone be more cute...and i loved shiv ignoing her thinking as anandi evn more...
like papa like beti...lol...both adamant fellows 🤣
and finally thr comes the confrontation...

hh...he held her hand so tightly...aww...poor anandi...
HIS DIALOGUES WERE BEST...PERFECT AS EXPECTED ..,,
loved how he saod wat he wanted and how she bahaved...
and whn he was xplaning about the things she got for her...
i was so touvhed...
DAMNNN...BESTEST...AWESTRUCK SCN...
i loved a's explanation too...
evn she is right...she cant think more after seeing his attitude on her...
and the small gal was katti katti with mommy...how ute...
and btw wat is PINKIE...i didnt get it...
and loved shiv checking out for anandi...
uh..the love story started...hahah...sweet...
and the morning scn...uhh...papa beti bonding started...FINALLY...sweet moments..how thy said dialogues same...
and ananya still katii..but waved to was touching..lovely gal..
and the line...IT LL TAKE TO BOTH DENTIST AND DOCTOR 🤣
and the car scn also cute...
shiv explained her well...
oiked his childish language..
silly pooh...hahha...
so this update was a COMPLETE PAVKAGE...
LOVED IT THOUROGHLY...
i got ansh and ananya dreams too 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: devi117

res comments tomorrow

A long one

Teaser will come after every one unres the comments

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