OS: Once Dwarka

AWESOME 👏 you caught the devotion inside Draupadi perfectly  can you please continue this with some devotional flashbacks of Krishna spending times with 6 of them 😊 I really wish someone to write something devotional in this forum 😳

superbly written

@Urmila

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Hmm I haven't thought about writing something like that but it is a good idea! I will think about it! Currently I am thinking of writing a story from Bhanumati's POV

@MeghaSharma
Thank you! I tried my best to put the emotions in!

I have also written a poem about Krishna! Please do read it and give feedback! 

yes, kanha is everywhere, usw bas pukaarne ki der hain.

@Arijiit - Yes! I agree! Thanks for commenting! It motivates me!

Very beautiful & touching. 

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Very beautiful & touching.

Aww thank you! It means a lot to me!

Such a beautiful OS!!! Very poignant!! My eyes welled up with tears and my heart is wrenching!!! You caught arya arjun's and yagyaseni's emotions too perfectly!!! And my bhratha krishna is sarvyapi bus pukaro aur upastit hojayenge hriday main!!Edited by Yagyaseni - 9 years ago