New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32(Page 6)

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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:30:43Z
Originally posted by anupam_dil


nice ff ...per yeh husband kaun hai krishna hai kya...and priya is thinking about ram ah doesn't suit for priya's character...
anyway story age padne ki mansha tho kabhi nahi chodenge...
waiting for the next part continue soon
and thanks for pmSmile

Hehe..anything cn suit priya when we saw things with her way..hopefully I woudnt disappoint u all...thank u soo much for all ur supportSmileSmile
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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:31:37Z
Originally posted by meena..


awesome concept
cont soon
could u pm me after update?

Thank u soo much dear...sure will pm u
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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:32:10Z
Originally posted by veena23


Originally posted by rosinagoor


Lovely concept
continue soon
Thanks for the PM Smile

Thank u soo much roshi I know its difficult for u reading in hindi..thank u so much for all ur effort
I love your writing & your stories very much
please don't say thanks
I am waiting for you first update
Update soon Smile

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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:33:09Z
Originally posted by sandhyasn


nice
loved Priya's view
please continue

Thank u sooo much..m soch rhi thi aap padhengi ya nhi.bht soch soch ke pm kiya thaTongueTongue
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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:34:11Z
Originally posted by peeyara


nice intro
triangle LOL
i think husband krishna hoga, is it?
waiting for first part Tongue

Hahaha...dekhte hain...
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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:36:04Z
Helloo...

obessed raya fans..hmm..am also..but not in mood to drag it more..anyways...I want to write this one with little mature way..I want to express a women's feelings when she is in frndship love & marriage. ..& all r not happen in her way...how many tantrums she face with herself...logo se ladna to duniya ka sabse asan kam h...hum hr teesri silly si bat pr hr teesre bande se lad sakte hain...par khud se ladna bht mushkil kam hota h...aur jo khud se lad pata h whi jindgi ji pata h..ye to har kahani me hota h ki chahe jaisi bhi situation ho last me hero heroine ko milakar hum apne sukun ke hisab se khush ho lete hain..par jindgi aisi nhi hoti...bht bar aisa hota h ki hum jise apna hero ya heroine samjh rhe hain...wo hame milta hi nahi...lekin jo hame milta hai hum uske sath kya karte hain...main yhi likhna chahti hu...if we dnt hv option..what option can we found for ..?

according to me ek story me teen trh ke logo ki feelings hoti hain ..ek us bande ki feeling jo story suna rha h...uske andr bht less feeling hoti h wo bs sunana h isliye suna rha h...dusra wo jo story sun ya padh rha h..agr story uske pasand ke characters ke sath h to wo unhe imagine krke padhta h..ya phir ek fake si imagination bna ke padhta h jaisa ki writer ne scene create kiya hota...pr story ka soul us insan ko pta hota h jisne use likha hota h..hum jarur kahaniya kirdaro ko lekar likhte hain pr jb hum writer hote hain to un characters me khud ko rakh kar situations ko handle karte hain aur circumstances aise creat karte hain ki agar kahani samne wale ke pasand ki na bhi ho to bhi wo khud ko usse jodne ki koshish kr sake...I defently believe ki feelings kabhi wst nhi hoti...agr m feeling se likhungi to kadr karne wale jarur milenge...

thank u all for ur appreciation. ..moving on first update...hopefully it gets good responce...

part 1 ...


priya balcony me chair pr baithti h aur ankhe band kar leti h...shayad wo apne sapne ko phir se jeekar apni gltiyo ya uski galtiyo ko dhundhna chahti h..

aaj se teen sal pehle ye sab chakkr shuru hua jb inka pehla bada drama series ka official announcement hona tha..priya & krishna were already well settled as actors. ..in their drama company. ..but this time director dnt want to make a series with old couples...so he try to find out some new faces...there is no option for krishna as he is the super talented & handsome actor...but director on his way...sabhi ke dil me dhak dhak dhuk dhuk ho rhi thi jane kise lenge kise nhi..krishna is as always vry sure ki use to lena hi h..he is quite genuine & flirty type guy..itna tension life me leta nhi h..pr thoda kuchh kuchh cheezo me confuse rhta h..ya keh sakte hain ladkiyo ke mamle me..fendship to kr leta h sabse pr bht openup nhi ho pata h...

priya thodi nervous thi..as she also know that ki uska bhi koi option nhi h but phir se ek aur jodi bnani padegi then phir se sbkuchh settle krna padega..understanding chemiatry frndahip...ufff..actor hona itna asan thode hi h jitna duniya ko dikhta h...but priya is always vry confident to do anything. .& always having a very pretty smile on her face...which suits her so much...

waise to puri unit me ye gossip rhti h ki shayad krishna aur priya dost hain...but indono ne kabhi ekdusre se bat bhi nhi ki dhang se...they only admire eachother & praise their talent at evry single moment of success. .sari unit ekattha hoti h director aata h..he announce a drama series which paired by Ram kapoor & priya sharma with them there is one more couples in it...ram aur priya ka nam sunte hi sabke hosh ud gye...ek to koi ram ko janta nhi tha...dusre krishna ki jgh koi aur hero ye handle karna kisi ke bhi bas ki bat nhi thi..not even krishna...but they r waiting for next couple's name...director announced next two name randomly... sarika chaudhry & krishna oberoy...

ufff..now evryone is little relax but they r excited to meet two new stars for their unit...

Ram POV

after announcement when me enter in their unit...they look like..ye kahan se aya yar..haha..sometime eyes r more expressive then word & I feel it in her eyes..she look at me like huh ise mera hero bnayenge?..khair..I am not intrested in that..ladkiyo ki to adat hoti h..handsome ladke dekhkar muh bnane ki..but I am on my way..kya karu mera nature hi aisa h..mujhe jindgi se bht pyar h to m har kisi se pyar karta hu..aur apni jindgi me anewale har saqsh ko bada pyar deta hu...hahaha..lafkiya ho to phir mere se achha koi nhi hota deal krne me...but han..main meri conditions follow karta hu..flirt krna is ok...pr m khud ki trf se kabhi push ups nhi krta meri to ek girlfriend h use hi handle kr lu bht h pr agr ladkiya foce karti hain to ekadh date kar leta hu...haha..anyways..bht mazak hua jara serious mttr pr chalte hain...dekho to ye khubsurat bala hai kya?...jise mujhe handle karna h..ya jisko main mila hu handle karne ke liye...bechari..lol

director ne hamara formal intro karaya...so I got she is a star of this unit & hv gud chemistry with very next coupl's actor named krishna...so I hv to make more gud chemistry with her ..intresting..to gya m uske pas bade tameez se hamari hi hello hui...as we r in acting profession. ..so we r very useto of shake hands & hugs eachothr..but dnt know why she only say hi..to me...anyways mujhe kya karna h..let see..abhi to kahani shuru hui h..


priya POV

ufff...when he entered. ..I thought o my god ye mera hero bnega.?...attitude to dekho aise chalke aa rha h jaise seedha Hollywood se aya h..huh..anyways mujhe kya...mujhe kaun sa jindgi bhar uske sath kam karna h..khair director ne hamara formal intro karaya..so I get to know he is a star of his company. .& also hv very gud chemistry & relation with his co stars & colleagues. .as he is very cheerful & chubby type guy..adjustable with evry situation. .pr kamal ki bat ye thi ki uski ek girlfriend bhi h jiska bina mange hi mujhe intro de rha h wo bhi pehli mulakat me..hadh h uski ek gf ho ya 50 use mujhe kya lena dena h..waise bhi hum jis profession me h ita quite natural to hving bf/gf ..its not a big deal..waise bhi sb priya thode hi hote h..anyways..kyun m isme itna ghus rhi hu..waise smart to h pr I thought mind se jyada smart h..lol..anyways..abhi to shuruat hain dekhte hain..how we deal together...

krishna POV

hmm..to I am also in...damn first time someone give me a kind off insecurities. .but yet I am very professional so dsnt mean who is main or who is in front of me..I hv to do my work very professionly ..but pta nhi kyun meri intention is bat me jyada ho ja rhi thi...is priya ok with him?...I know she ia vry professional too..but may b I know her from long time & very well..so I hv sm doubts but thats ok...khair jo mujhe mili h uski bat karte hai ...gooddd..puri over excitements ki dukan h kuchh jyada hi happening lag rhi h...krishna beta handle hr very patiently wrna iski impatience me kuchh jyada happening na ho jaye...ufff kitna chipak chipak kr bat karti h..ye aajkl ki ladkiya bhi na...seekhna chahiye inhe priya se...kitna patiently logo ko handle krti h...she is too gud..

are m priya pr kyun ghum phir kar chala ja rha hu hadh h...anyways...lets see ye ovrdose kya kya katati h mujhse...

sarika is also a very gud actress..but she is more intrsted in his hero..as she is naturally mad for him..actually she is a part of this compny from long time but didnt get any opportunity to show her talent..finally she get..even with her dream boy.. so she is out of control now..we cnt help it..& she had a doubt on krishna & priya that they fall for eachother..gossip ki to dukan h puri...

to b continue. ..

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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:39:14Z
interesting story...superb update
aww ...they all r actors...hmm interesting...

di lafkiya means..??Confused
ohh krishna likes priya..?
i think krishna may b ronit roy...am i right..??
sarika sounds like neha...im just guessing dont mind..

continue soon...Smile
Edited by jodude - 2014-09-18T07:44:08Z
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Posted: 2014-09-18T06:40:37Z
Very Interesting & very different concept of RaYa Story
Beautiful Update
I like both Ram & Priya"s POV
Now both of them nervous too
Looking forward to know how Ram & Priya become best onscreen couple 
Continue soon Smile
P.S. Few mins before i am read this part in FB Smile
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