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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey it was an awesome update!!
Again PreeMan couldnt meet, i mean face to face talking
But not worry, i hope next time they does,
Thank god Preet got the sketch, she slept holding it, thats so cute!!
Anshuman was kinda caring towards her!!
Sorry for late comment, actually i had read the part in metro, lol i was so eager to read it so read it there, but couldnt comment there so!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow, awesome part👏
this one is my fav so far😃
they didnt meet again...😆 but its ok, i loved that anshuman came to the haveli and a good look at preet 😳 and even covered her with the blanket..😳 that was so sweet
going by the precap it seems that preet will finally meet him
looking forward to it😃
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: The_Imane

Hey it was an awesome update!!
Again PreeMan couldnt meet, i mean face to face talking
But not worry, i hope next time they does,
Thank god Preet got the sketch, she slept holding it, thats so cute!!
Anshuman was kinda caring towards her!!
Sorry for late comment, actually i had read the part in metro, lol i was so eager to read it so read it there, but couldnt comment there so!!

WOW! Everyone is sooo eager to read the story! I am overwhelmed😳
Thanks a looot for loving my FF so much!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

wow, awesome part👏
this one is my fav so far😃
they didnt meet again...😆 but its ok, i loved that anshuman came to the haveli and a good look at preet 😳 and even covered her with the blanket..😳 that was so sweet
going by the precap it seems that preet will finally meet him
looking forward to it😃
thanks for the pm

OMG! At first i thought this update will get average liking But now! It became the FAVORITE update😲
Thanks a lot!!!😊😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear!! 👏
Can't wait for them to meet!! N Anshuman is flirting with her!! 😲
Do update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Was down with fever and severe headache🤢 That's why couldn't update on time😭
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BTW! I have added the characters of Deepak and Daisa on majority demand😃 Don't forget to check the Character Sketch!😉
And now...the wait is FINALLY over!!!😳

Tip to enjoy any kind of writing:
To enjoy any kind of writing follow the given steps😆😃
1. Read the writing once.
2. Close your eyes and think of it.
Thus, you will be able to enjoy the writing in your mind as if you're watching it😃
Hope this was helpful😊

I write using this technique. First I imagine the characters, the way they'll talk and behave and then write it and present it here😊
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Chapter 6

As Vampires don't sleep, Anshuman was thinking about Preet and the moments he saw her, all night. When he realized he was actually thinking about his enemy, he moved to thinking how to get close to her.

Next day...

Preet was walking through the corridors of the Palace, thinking what would she do now. Her parents left her alone, now she was all alone. She had a great responsibility of herself and the Moon Stone but she was still unaware how precious her powers were.

This was her own home but yet she was unaware of many things in this Palace. This was still a mystery to her. She needed to know many things about her ancestors, their Holy Book, her powers and this Palace.

Thus, she decided to practice magic and explore the whole Palace.

Daisa came to her.

Daisa: Su-Prabhat, Ranisa.

Preet nodded.

Daisa: Kal Anshuman aya hai.

Preet: Anshuman! Kaha hai?

Daisa: Vo raat ko aya hai, lekin aap soo gayi iss liye mil nehi paya. To maine socha...use yehi rok leti hu. Vo raat ko yehi ruka tha.

Preet: Vo raat se yehi pe hai?

Deepak intervened into the conversation.

Deepak: Dekha aapne, Daisa? Maine kaha tha na, Ranisa ko bilkul pasand nehi ayega ki Anshuman yaha pe ruke. Ranisa, maine to Daisa ko pehle hi kaha tha lekin...(Preet interrupted)

Preet: Daisa, aapne bilkul thik kia!

Deepak was surprised.

Deepak: Lekin...

Preet: (strongly)Deepak, ek humesha yaad rakhna! Dehradun ki Rani mai hu, yaha wahi hota hai jo mai chahti hu. Kaun sahi hai aur kaun galat isska fyasla mai karungi.

Deepak: Haan, Ranisa, mai janta hu. Lekin Raja sahab humesha kehte the iss Haveli mei koi anjaan nehi aa sakta.

Preet: (strongly)Mai janti hu. Raja Utkarshh aur Rani Disha ke baad ab iss Haveli ki zimmedari mere upar hai. Iss liye ab mera hukum chalega. Samjhe?

Deepak: (bowing down head)Ji, Ranisa, jaisa aap kahe.

Preet: Hmmm. Daisa, chaliye.

Daisa nodded and followed Preet. Deepak didn't like this attitude of Preet at all and was confused.


Preet and Daisa walked to meet Anshuman. He was standing in the hall in front of a big and wide bookshelf.

Daisa: Ranisa, vo raha aapka mehmaan.

Preet slowly walked close to him and stood just behind him. Anshuman also sensed someone behind him. So he turned without knowing that she was just behind him. His turning made her slip and she closed her eyes. But Anshuman saved her like before.

She felt the same strong arms which she felt at the jungle. But this time when she opened her eyes, he didn't disappear... He was right in front of her.

And...they meet for the first time!

~~~~Background Music~~~~
Faili thi siyaah raatein, aaya toh subah leke
Khama si zindagi mein jeene ki wajah leke
Khoya tha samundaron mein, tanha safeena mera
Saahilon pe aaya hai, tu jaane kis tarah haan leke
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta 
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta 
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata 
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Ab kya hai kehna, humko hai rehna
Jannatein bhula ke teri baahon mein mein panah leke
Faili thi siyaah raatein, aaya toh subah leke
Khama si zindagi mein jeene ki wajah leke
~~~~Background Music~~~~

Deepak also came there but this scene shocked him.

Deepak: (thinking, worriedly)Mujhe khatre ki ghanti sunayi de rahi hai... Kuch bura hone wala hai!

Anshuman and Preet's eye-lock broke with Anshuman's words.

Anshuman: Are you okay?

Preet: (coming out of thoughts)Huh?(standing up)Y...Ya. Thanks...

Both stood apart, a kind of silence grew between them.

Anshuman: (breaking the silence)So... Hi, i am Anshuman.

Preet: Janti hu... Maine hi aapko bulvaya tha. I am...

Anshuman: Preet! The Queen of Dehradun. I know.

Daisa: Deepak, chalo, mujhe tumse kuch kaam hai.

Deepak: (doesn't want to leave)Lekin...

Daisa: (strongly)Maine kaha CHALO!

Daisa, with Deepak, left them alone.

Anshuman: (trying to make conversation)Kitni ajeeb baat hai na...hum ek dusre ko jante huye bhi nehi jante.

Preet: Hmmm.

Anshuman: Aapne...mujhe... Kyu bulvaya?

Preet: Oo! Can we walk and talk?

Anshman: Sure! After you.

Preet walked and he followed her.

Preet: Mujhe aapki ek sketch mili. Actually, vo meri sketch hai...banayi aapne hai.

Anshuman: Oh, haan! Lekin pata nehi kaise vo khoo gayi aur kal pata chala ki vo aapke paas pohoch gaya.

Preet: Ow... Aap bohot achcha sketch banate hai.

Anshuman: Thanks. I have a request... Please, mujhe "aap" matt boliye. I feel old.

Preet: (with a little laugh)Okay... Aur aap...i mean, tum... Tum bhi mujhe "aap" matt bolo.

Anshuman: No, ye kaise ho sakta hai. You're the Queen, you deserve respect.

Preet: Mujhe pata hai. Lekin mai bhi kaunsa bohot old hu. Aur rahi baat respect ki...respect "tum" ya "aap" kehne se nehi dete. Vo to dil se diya jaa sakta hai.

As she said he observed her carefully.

Preet: To...TUM bhi mujhe "aap" nehi bologe, okay?

Anshuman: Rani ka hukum koi kaise inkaar kar sakta hai!

Both laughed and continued walking.

Preet: Tum kaha se ho?

Anshuman: Shimla. Aur mujhe painting, sketching ka bohot shokh hai. Maine Dehradun aur usski khubsurti ke baare mei bohot suna hai. To socha aake dekh bhi leta hu.

Preet: Achchha...to kya kya dekha?

Anshuman: Abtak to kuch nehi. Lekin maine ye bhi suna hai ki yaha ki sabse khubsurat chizz yaha ki Rajkumari hai. Lekin usse milna namumkin hai. Lekin mai bohot khushnaseeb hu, jo vo sabse khubsurat chizz mere samne khari hai, mujhse baatei kar rahi hai.

Preet: (laughing)Thank you!

Anshuman: "Thank you" to mujhe kehna chahiye. Mujhe tumse milne ka mauka dene ke liye. Sach mei, you're very beautiful!

Preet: Thanks. But...don't you think aaj ke liye kuch zyada flirting ho rahi hai?

Anshuman: Flirting? No, mai sach keh raha hu!

Preet: Achchha, thik hai!

Anshuman: Tumne mujhe abtak nehi bataya...mujhe yaha kyu bulaya?

Preet: Meri painting banane. Jab mere paas vo sketch pohchi to maine socha itna achchha painter ko aise jaane nehi dena chahiye. So...here you are!

Anshuman: Ye aur bhi bohot achchha hua! Meri kismat kitni achchhi hai jo Rani Preet Thakur khud mujhe apni painting banane ko bol rahi hai!

Preet: To chale?

Anshuman: Ya, sure!

They walked further.


They reached a room, she opened the door.

It was filled with the portraits of her ancestors.

Preet: Yaha tumhe zarurat ke samaan mil jayenge.

Anshuman: Okay...

He searched and found the necessary things and set them at the centre of the room.

Anshuman: All set! Tum...yaha baetho.(indicating to a tool in front of the canvas)

Preet obeyed him and sat on the tool.

Anshuman: So, let's start!

He showed her to sit in a definite position. Then he started the painting.

After 2 hours...
Still Preet was sitting at the definite position without any break or movement as if she was doing meditation or she is any lifeless statue. And Anshuman was doing his job with passion and full concentration.

After 2 more hours...
Still no one took any break. Both were doing their respective works.

Anshuman: Done!

Finally, Preet moved who was sitting like a statue till now.

Preet: Good.

She walked to the canvas and was amazed to see it.

Preet: Wah! Aisa lag raha hai ye koi tasveer nehi khud mai hu. So realistic! Sach mei, you're an awesome artist! Thank you.

Anshuman: Thank you to you too, ki tum tin ghante se bina hile baethi thi. Hats off!

Preet: (smiles)Tumhare jaise itne kabil artist ke mai kuch kaam aake...mujhe khushi huyi.

Daisa, with 2 servants behind with trays, knocked on the door.

Preet: Aiye.

They entered.

Daisa: Umeed karti hu maine apko dono ke baaton mei rukavat nehi dali.

Preet: Are nehi, Daisa, aap kabhi rukavat ho hi nehi sakti!

Daisa: Ranisa, ye kuch nashta aap donoke liye.

The servants kept them on a coffee table.

Preet: Oh! Anshuman, mai to tumhe innse milvana hi bhul gayi. Ye hai Daisa, jo mere janam se bhi pehle se meri dekhbhal kar rahi hai.

Anshuman: Owww...

Preet: Oh! Mai to bhul hi gayi. Daisa, dekhiye na, Anshuman ne meri painting banayi hai. Aap hi bataiye kaisa bana hai?

Preet showed her the portrait.

Daisa: Vakay mei, bohot khubsurat banaya hai aapne.

Anshuman: Shukriya...

Daisa: Aap dono baethiye aur nashta kijiye hum chalte hai.

Daisa left with the servants. PreeMan settled themselves on the chairs and had the snacks.

They gossiped a lot! They gossiped for like hours. On the first day thy bonded so well as if they knew each other for ages...

Anshuman: Ummm...Preet?

Preet: Huh?

Anshuman: Washroom...kis taraf hai?

Preet: Vo raha.(showing the way to the attached bathroom)

He hurriedly went to the washroom. As soon as he entered the washroom, he quickly locked it, went to the basin and threw up (vomitted everything that he just ate)

He washed his face and then looking at himself in the mirror.

Anshuman: (with his Vampire teeth)Haveli tak to mai bare hi aasani se pohoch gaya. Ab Preet ke dil tak bhi bohot jald pohoch jaunga. Sirf kuch aur din...usske baad Rani Preet ka koi naamonishaan bhi nehi rahega!(grins with his teeth)

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FACTS: 
According to my research, Vampire can eat normal food like humans. But they need to throw it up because it can cause problems in their digestion.

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So, finally after a looong wait PreeMan met!😃

Sorry for troubling you guys like this😛😃

Don't forget to comment what to liked or disliked! Criticism also welcomed😊


IMPORTANT:
The next update will be after a week on 9th because on 6th its EID!🥳🤗 So these days will be very hectic and busy😃

Till then imagine what will happen next with PreeMan and keep loving them!!!😳

Love,
Zariyat

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Ufff! Finallyyy😉
The great Meeting of Preet and Anshuman and full update of PreeMan!
Dil khus kar dita mera😃😛
And I really liked it was the same as the first meeting. This time with open eyes😆!
I dnot get what is the problem of this Deepak! Well he was true about 'khatra' ! He makes true sense at times but still is a pain to ears🤣!
Wow Painting ban bhi gaya! Ye toh 3G se bhi jada speed pe nikle 😉!

Continue Soon.
Waiting for more Pree Man scenes. Edited by Vampire-queen - 9 years ago
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of course , like it, keep update
Posted: 9 years ago
veri nice story!!! i like it very very much i wish!!! i can see this story on tv!! i m wating for next chap.!!
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lovely ... ll be waiting for next part..