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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful part.. 
Nice concept... 
Emotional n painful part though.. 
But liked it :-) 
Continue soon. .. 

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kya maan...abb kya karega...

awesome n mindblowing starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Awesome banner by priya... 👏...thanks you bhabhi ji... 😳


I am extremely sorry... For the delay... My net is giving trouble very much lately... And hubby ji is not ready to change the service provider... So I can only update when net is  meherbaan🤢...

Here is part 2. ... I don't know how it came...but plz let me know...



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Geet changed and left with pammi for the hospital... Maan followed them... As he wanted to know why geet is going to the hospital... Is she alright... Is there any complication in her pregnancy...

Geet and pammi reached the hospital and went inside... 

The CMO invited her and took her to the Venue where a function is going on... It's was the opening ceremony of the new cancer wing... Which geet and pammi funded...

Pammi cut the ribbon and inaugurated the wing... The CMO thanked them and told about the new developments... Geet requested the gathering to donate as much as they could so that the poor will be benefited...


Some came forward and donated some amount... A man came and gave a cheque to the CMO ... He was very happy seeing the amount in Lakhs... He enquired the maan about the donar... The man told the name... The CMO... Immediately went to the Dias and announced the name...MAAN SINGH KHURANA... Has donated in Lakhs... Geet was annoyed by hearing his name but didn't show and plastered a smile...


Pammi who is with geet said... Mithu... Yeh Ladka toh bohut bada dil wala hain...


Geet smiled sadly... And said Haa ... badi maa... Bada dil wala hain... And then she thought to herself... Is liye mujhe yeh bacha diya... Keeping her hand on her bump...


Maan looked at geet standing far... She could see her keeping her hand on her bump... He thought... I will do everything to keep u happy geet... Atleast at this time... He thought sadly...


The function was a success as they collected huge amount of money... Everyone left...


Maan returned to his house... as he entered he saw dadi sitting in the terrace garden with his chachi...


He went to then and wished them... He sat at dadi's feet and kept his head on her lap... He looked exhausted and drained of energy...


Dadi was shocked.. Coz maan never does that... It was only sid's habit... She asked lovingly... Kya hua maan... Aap pareshaan kyun hain...


Maan - mujhse bohut bada gunah hogaya dadi... Maine socha Jo main karr raha tha Woh sahi hai ... main kisiko ko uski saza deraha tha... Par aaj pata chala main kitna galat tha... Ab main apni is gunah ki maafi kaise maangu dadi... Kya Woh mujhe kabhi bhi maaf karegi...


Dadi got worried hearing his words... Maan aap Kya keh rahe hain... Aur kaun aap ko Maaf Nahi karengi...


Maan didn't speak any thing... Dadi again asked him... 


Shalini... Maan's chachi too asked him... Maan beta Kya hua hai... Aap itne pareshaan kyun hain...



Maan sat straight... Looked at shalini and said... Chachi... Woh ladki... Meethi... Galat Nahi thi ...



Shalini got angry ... How can that girl be right ... She got up in anger and said... Kya keh rahe hain maan aap... Woh ladki... Kaise galat Nahi hain... Uske wajah se Sid ne... 



Maan - Nahi chachi... Main bhi yehi sochta tha... 



Shalini - toh... Aaj Kya hua...pata Nahi kaisi ladki hai Woh... Mere Sid ke Saath aise karke... Woh khush kaise reh sakti hain... Meri baddua usse zaroor lagegi... Woh kabhi khush Nahi reh payegi...


Maan - CHACHI... Mare hue logon ke baare mein aisa Nahi kehte hain na chachi...



Shalini and dadi stood rooted...but somewhere she is happy... As the girl who is responsible for her sons death is no more... 


Dadi asked... Maan... Kya keh rahe hain aap... Kya hua uss ladki ko...aur Kya Naam tha ... Unka...



Maan - Meethi... Sid usse Meethi Kehta tha dadi... Lekin Uska Naam Antra handa hain... Aur usne Jo kuch bhi kiya Sid ke liye hi kiya tha ...


Shalini - maan phir kabhi mat kehna ki uske Sid ke liye sab kuch kiya hain... Acha hua Woh margayi... Mere Sid ki aatma ko shanti milegi...



Dadi - shalini ... Maan ki poori baat toh suniye...


Maan - dadi... Usse blood cancer tha... Aur Woh bhi last stage pe jab usse pata chala... Kuch Nahi hosakta tha... Issiliye usne Sid se breakup karliya... Taki Woh zindagi mein aage badd sake...  Aur yeh baat mujhe aaj pata chali... Theek ek saal baad...


Dadi sat on the chair hearing what maan said...


Shalini... Main Nahi maanoongi maan... Tumhe koi galat fehmi hui hain...


Maan - yehi sachayi hain chachi ... Aaj main handa's ke ghar Gaya tha... Waha pooja aur hawan horaha tha... Maine waha Ek ladki ki tasveer dekhi...aur Woh ladki Meethi hi thi... Meethi ki barsi hain aaj...  Maine pammi handa yani Meethi ki maa se baat ki... Unhone bataya ki Meethi ki maut cancer se hui...


Dadi - kitni ajeeb baat haina maan... Jis din Meethi ki maut hui ussi din Sid ne ...


Maan and shalini kept mum...


Dadi - Jis ladki ko hum itne din gunehgaar maante rahe aur nafrat karte rahe usne toh kuch aur hi socha tha Sid ke liye...



Maan - Haa dadi... Meethi toh Sid ko khush dekhna chahti thi... Aur dekho Sid ne Kya kiya... 



Dadi - Kya yeh sab baatein aapko uski maa ne bataya maan...



Maan - Nahi dadi... Uski ek choti behen hain geet... Ussi ne bataya...



Dadi - oh... Kaise hai Woh log... Ache hain ya...



Maan - humne jaisa socha waise toh bilkul bhi Nahi hain dadi... Geet ke papa ab Nahi rahe... Aur Nahi tauji... Pammi ji unki taiji hain... Aur geet ki maa bhi hain... Lekin Woh asylum mein hain... Geet ke papa ke maut ke baad Woh aise hogayi... 



Dadi - bechari ladki... Itne kam umar kitna kuch dekha hain... Hum bhagwanse prarthna karte hai Ki unhe sab kuch shene ki shakti de... Aur pammi ji ne kuch Nahi kaha Sid ke baare mein...



Maan - mujhe Nahi Lagta unhe kuch pata hoga Sid ke baare mein... Kyun ki Woh yaha rehti thi geet ke Saath... Aur Meethi waha London mein...


Dadi .. Umm...


Silence prevailed for some time... Dadi and shalini were processing the information...



Shalini got a call from her husband ... Rajeev Khurana... Maan's Chahta is in his native place doing hawan for his dead son... Savitri Devi was ill and shalini couldn't leave her and go... So she stayed with savitri Devi... And maan also...



Shalini went away to talk to her husband...,



Dadi got some thing and asked... Aapne aisa kyun kaha maan ki koi aapko Maaf Nahi karegi... Kya kiya hain aapne maan...



Maan turned pale... He knew his dadi will not leave him now... He wanted to share everything to dadi now...


Maan - dadi... Woh... Maine... 


Dadi - Saaf Saaf kahiye maan aapne Kya kiya hain... Humare dil bohut ghabra raha hain...



Maan finally told her everything... How he trapped geet and got close to her and then broke her heart ... And how he came to know geet is pregnant now...


Dadi was speechless... She shouted... Maan... Chi maan... Aap ne aisa kiya hume yakeen Nahi hota... Aap apne badly mein itne andhe hogaye ki ek masoom ladki ki zindagi bar baad kardi...



Maan - Maine kuch Nahi socha tha dadi... Sid ki suicide ne mujhe kuch socne hi Nahi diya... Main pagal hogaya tha... Mujhe aur kuch sooja hi Nahi...har din chahaji aur chachi ko Sid ke liye rota hua dekhte toh mujhe bohut gussa aata tha uss ladki par... Sid toh bohut hi acha tha aur naram dil bhi... Woh kabhi bhi  Kisi ko bhi hurt Nahi karta tha... Aur uske Saath aisa hua dekh ke mere Dimag pe badla ka bhoot Chad Gaya tha... Aur main usse bhi tadap the hue dekhna chahthi tha... 



Dadi - bas kijiye maan... Aap ne Jo kiya uski koi safai Nahi hain... Aap Meethi ko galat keh rahe the na... Phir aapne bhi wahi kyun kiya maan... Kyun...


Maan had no answer for this... Yes he had done the same thing which he said is wrong...


Maan - I am sorry dadi... Mujhe kuch pagal pan sa sawar tha ... Main Kya karr raha tha kuch samajh mein Nahi aarah tha...


Dadi - Kya aapne poocha geet kitne mahine ki pregnant hain...


Maan nodded in a no... Meri himmat hi Nahi hui dadi...


Dadi was feeling awkward while asking this... But she needed to know... Aap ko koi andaza hai ki kitne mahine hosakta hain...


Maan - main usse 5 mahine pehle mila tha... Uske baad aaj hi...


Dadi - umm... Matlab Woh 6 - 7 mahine ki hosakti ... Uska bump dikh raha hain Kya...


Maan nodded... a little...


Dadi - ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga... Main usse aise akele Nahi chod sakti...  Aur aap ki saza geet hi decide karengi... dadi said sternly...



Dadi left from there... 



Maan stared at the way dadi went... He felt a huge burden on him... He slowly walked away and exited his pent house, Came out of the building...and started to walk  in the slight drizzle... Coz of the drizzle the roads were empty... Maan started thinks about his deeds... Every thing came infront of his eyes... He reminded of seeing geet for first time on road... That too on a scooty... Which he never expected...



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past...


When he came to mumbai and enquired about the handas... He came across a weird habbit of geet... Even though she has two to three cars geet loves to ride her scooty... She used that scooty in her collage days... So he thought to follow her... He took a bike of his friend and followed her... As usual geet took her scooty and started to office... A car was following her at a safe diatance... Maan noticed that too... Geet was enjoying her ride... She had stopped at around 5-6 places... She came across a mandir and she stopped her scooty.. Got down and offered her prayer from the road itself... Maan slowly passed near her he could her what she was saying...



Geet - bhagwanji... Aaj apni bachi ko maaf kardo... Aaj ek zaroori meeting hain... Main agle hafte zaroor aaoongi... Aaj aap yehi se meri prarthna sweekar karlo... Coz she is allowed to ride her scooty only once in a week... 



Geet started again... She came across a small boy and a girl begging on the road side... She went to the near by shop and bought food items and gave them to the children...



Geet and maan stopped at the signal... Maan came and stopped his bike beside her... A girl was selling flowers... She offered them to maan... He rejected... She went to geet and asked her to buy them... Geet saw the white roses... She couldn't refuse them... So she bought the whole bunch of roses... The light turned green and they moved ahead... At one point there were traffic police... They were checking the bike riders whether they are wearing helmet or not... One of the constable noticed geet and stopped her scooty... She didnt wear helmet... He stopped her...



Geet - sir plz... Jaane dijiye na... She said making a puppy face...



Police - kyun... Kyun jaane doon... Rules sab ke liye ek hi hain... 



Geet - haa sir... Pata hain... But pehli galti samajh kar maaf kar dijiye na...



Police - kyun tum meri koi lagti ho kya ki tumhe main maaf karoon...



Geet saw her watch and pretended as if she is running late... Sir... Plz jane dijiye na... Mera boss bohut khadoos hain... Agar main late gayi toh mujhe job se nikal dega... Plz... Plz... 



Maan who was behind her showing the papers... Wondered... How easily she is telling lies... She is the boss and and telling that she is a worker... 


Geet - sir .. Plz...


Police - pehle yeh batao helmet kyun nahi pehna...


Geet thought for a while...


Geet - sir ... shaadi ke liye sir... Shaadi... With both innocence and mischievous eyes..


Police - shaadi? Yeh kaisa reason hain... Aur shaadi aur tumhara helmet na pehhen ne ka kya connection hain...


Geet drametically said... Bohut bada connection hain. Sir... Bohut bada... Dekhiye... Agar helmet pehungi toh baal kharab hojayenge... Aur baal jhad jaayenge... Aur baal jhad gaye toh main poori tarah bald hojaoongi..she said making a cry face... Aur bald hogayi toh koi bhi ladka mujhe dekhega hi nahi...waise dekhe bhi kyun...aap hi so chaiye a... Kaha the hum... Haa... Aur nahi dekhage toh pasand kaise karega... Aur pasand nahi karega toh shaadi kaise karega... Boliye na sir... Koi bhi ladka bina baal wali ladki se shaadi karega kya... Geet said all this while making a puppy face...


Police man gaped at her... The other police man who was checking maan laughed loud at geets reasoning... Even the policeman questioniong geet also lauged and gave her licence... And said jao... Sirf iss baar ke liye... There was smile on both the police men's face... They were again and again remembering her reasoning and smiling...


Geet smiled happily and went to her scooty... She saw flowers... She took two flowers and offered them to the police men... With a big smile... The police men took the flowers and she waved them a good bye...

 
Even though maan was smiling hearing her reasoning... He reminded his revenge and thought how manipulative. ,,, this girl is... And followed her again... 



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Maan come out of his revive with a sound of horn... He thought... She was innocent... But I was blind and couldn't see through her innocence... she was being naughty... And the damage is huge... What will I do now... How will I rectify My sins... Will she ever forgive me... Will she ever see my face again... What about my child... Am I that fortunate to be with my child... Maan was going mad thinking all these things... He wanted peace... His legs were giving up... He didn't know how much distance he walked... He saw a dargah near by... He thought he could find solace there... He went inside... Offered his prayers and sat there... He saw many people...he started seeing people cursing him for his sins...  He couldn't sit in the crowd... He left from there and sat at a far place... Facing the dargah...



At a far distance and a side to the dargah... He saw people walking on fire... He went there and asked the person standing there... The person replied it is a form of seeking forgive ness from god for their sins... Maan thought may be he should walk too on the fire... He may find some peace... He removed is shoes and waited for his turn... He was about to step in... A hand stopped him... Some one patted from behind... Maan looked behind... He saw a fakir baba smiling at him... He has a divine aura around him... The baba pulled him  and took far away from the place... Maan couldn't refuse... He was in trance ... And followed the baba with out any protest...



Maan - aapne mujhe kyun roka baba... 



Baba - kyun karr rahe ho yeh...



Maan - apni gunah ko thoda toh kam karna Chahta hoon baba... Shayad isse mujhe thodi si shanti mile...



Baba - kisine kaha hain ki aise tumhe Mann ki shanti milegi...



Maan - waha sab karr rahe hain baba... 



Baba - Woh  unki galat fehmi hain ki agar apne aap ko Bhagwan ke Naam se dukh pohunchao toh shanti milegi... Bhagwan kabhi bhi apne bachonko aise Karne ko Nahi kaha... Yeh sab Inki banayi hui hain... He said showing the people around...


Maan - phir main Kya Karoon baba...


Baba - ... Tumne Jo kiya hain usse toh mita Nahi  jaa Sakta hain... Aur Nahi hi bulaya jaa Sakta hain... Toh kyun karr rahe ho aisa... Mat karo...



Maan cried hearing the baba's words... It's true... What he had done cannot be undone... He has no way out of this... He has to endure the pain which he have given to geet...



Maan - Nahi baba... Aisa Nahi hosakta...mujhe kuch toh karna hoga... Maine usse bohut buri tarah se dard pohuncha ya hai baba... 



Baba - agar tumne dard diya hain toh dawa bhi tumhe hi deni hogi... 



Maan stared at the baba... Yes he is right... It's him who gave her the pain... So now it's only him who should reduce the pain...



Maan - Woh mera chehra bhi Nahi dekh rahi hai baba... Main Kaise dawa ... 



Baba - yehi tumhari pashchatap hogi... Usse dard se mukt karo jise tumne dard diya hain...



Maan - baba par kaise baba...



Baba - beta... Main bas rah baat Sakta hoon... Tumhe hi uss par chalna hai... Aur kaise yehi bhi tumhe is sochna hoga... Main toh bas uss upar wale ki sandedha pohunchata hoon... Saying that baba placed is peacock feather on maan's face... Maan closed his eyes...  When he opened his eyes... He was at the same place and position where he earlier sat ... Watching people walking on fire...



Maan was shocked... He looked around for the fakir baba... But he could find none... He didn't understand anything...



 He stood up and went to his house... He directly went to dadi...



Dadi - kahiye maan... Ab Kya hain...



Maan - main janta hoon dadi ... Maine Jo kiya uski koi maafi Nahi hain... par main kuch karna Chahta hoon jisse geet ki dukh kam hojaaye... Aap hi mujhe sahi rah dikha sakti hain dadi...



Dadi sighed... She was still not recover from what maan said... But seeing maan this miserable how can she not show him the right path...



Dadi - maan ... Jaha tak aapne bataya... Mujhe aisa Lagta hain ki geet bohut akeli hain... Uske inn do teen saalon mein bohut kuch dekha... Woh bohut akeli feel karti hogi... Issiliye jab aapne ne dosti ki toh unhone mana Nahi kiya... Aur aapke kareeb aagayi... Usse sahare ki zaroorrat thi maan... Aur aapne jab Woh diya toh .. She sighed... Abhi bhi Woh aise hi hain maan... Usse pyaar aur support ki zaroorrat hain... Emotional support ki... Agar aap chahte hain ki aapko maafi mile toh pehle geet ka dil jeetna hoga... Aur Woh itna aasaan bhi Nahi hoga... Shayad bohut baatein bhi Sunni hogi aapko... Geet shayad aapse baat bhi na kare... Aur kaam Kisi aur se karwaye... Kya yeh sab aap sehen karpayenge...



Maan - main kuch bhi Karne ke liye tayyar hoon dadi... Kuch bhi...



Dadi - ek baat batayiye maan... Kya aap ko ek baar bhi geet se...



Maan understood dadi's unsaid words... He turned to the window and spoke slowly...-  Haa dadi... Mujhe Uska Saath bohut acha Lagta tha... Waqt ka pata hi Nahi chata tha... Ek sukoon hota tha... Uske Saath hota hoon toh... Bohut tasalli hoti thi... Aisa Lagta tha ki agar Woh Saath ahi toh aur kuch Nahi chahiye...par Maine yeh sab tab Nahi socha dadi... Bas Sid ko yaad karke apne aap ko rokta tha... Shayad mujhe apni dil baat sunke in chahiye thi... Toh yeh sab Nahi hota...



Dadi looked maan in disappointment... It was clear that maan loved her... But he couldn't see through his revenge...


Dadi - theek hain maan... Aap batayiye... Geet se aap ka contract hogaya Kya...



Maan - Haa dadi... Bas ek signature ...geet ka ... Aur sab khatam... He said with tears running from his eyes...


Dadi - Nahi... Kuch toh clause hoga... Dhondhiye... Usse... MSK hain aap... Dimag lagayiye... Agar geet chahiye toh usse Jude rahiye ... Kisi bhi tarah... Ab sirf business se hi aisa hosakta hain... Personal level pe toh Woh aapse baat bhi nahi karegi... 


Maan nodded... He called one of his employee on legal team... And he got the clauses...


Dadi - kuch mila...


Maan - Nahi dadi... Geet humse tabhi kaam karegi jab tak Mumbai project hai... Ab toh Woh khatam bhi hi chukka hai... Ab kaise...


Dadi - ek khatam hogaya hai toh doosra shuru kijiye... Aur clause toh yehi haina ki Mumbai mein Jo bhi construction KC karegi... Usske interiors... Handa designs and interiors hi karegi... Toh problem solve... 


Maan - hugged dadi... Dadi u r a genius... Aap ka Dimag ka jawab Nahi...  For the first time after knowing the truth.. Maan smiled...


Dadi patted his checks and said... Hamare Baal aise hi safed Nahi hue maan... Aur aap bhul rahe hain ki aap KC ke ex- chairperson aur MD se baat karr rahe hain... Aur Haa... Hume hamari bahu chahiye... 


With the courage given by dadi... And baba... Maan started his journey to win geet and her forgive ness... Will he succeed... 






Note - Humsaaya update will be late... As I want to complete this one ... Next part will be last one... Hopefully😆





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Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesme part
maan decided to get geet back n he loves her..
I hope everything goes well this time..
Cont soonEdited by _CookieMonster_ - 9 years ago
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maan following geet n pammi
n found them opening cancer hospital
geet irritated with maans donation
she cant forgive him 4 what he did
maan confessed his sins to dadi
he walked aimlessly n got answers from baba
he have to rectify his mistake..
n dadi is genius to give him an idea to keep her thru business
nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan confessed everything to DM !
In his revenge in didn't listen to his inner conscious and destroyed everything.
DM correctly understood Geet's SOM, and why she accepted his friendship at first place.

Nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsemm update maan revealing everything to his family dadi suggesting maan to go near geet to take care of her
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Posted: 9 years ago
very emotional
maan told all to his daadi which make her angry n disappointed
maan want punishment for him n happy life for geet n his child
he wants to be with them  life long
daadi show him path 

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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! brilliant update dear...loved it a lot...