Arshi SS: Rabbe Mere... Kya hai Teri Marzi (Sorry Note page 26) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Kya se kya hogaya aaa aa aa a aa aaa 

Bewafa aaa aa aa aa aa a aa a

Tere Pyar Mein πŸ˜­

That's the song that came to my mind after reading this chapter πŸ˜› Oye Jassi kya hogaya mere Arnavji ko? πŸ˜­ He loves Khushi so much ❀️ and Khushi too loves him ❀️ Their relation was sooo beautiful before marriage  Phir kis mausi ne beech mein bhanji maardi? πŸ˜‘  Jassi my Lassi girl you are a fabulous writer. I loved and enjoyed reading the chapter very much πŸ˜ƒ Moi very very happy and no thankful to you for dedicating this happy, naughty and masti filled chapter to me I grinned reading Arnav's reply to the brainless chick and the way he teased Khushi by showing off his "Gopiyas". Loved his concern for Khushi and his protectiveness over her. Loved the way he showed his right on her by saying that she can't go for a sleepover tonight as she must have her dinner at his home. It seems Khushi's sasuma loves her too. Then what's the problemo? Is it her Sasurji? Is it the difference in their social status? Does Daiyya exist in this story? What The 🀬 is the problem?  Where is Khushi's family? Offo kostins and kostins without any answer  Jassi answers mujhe WA mein bata dena ok? Let's make that a deal πŸ˜‰ 

Brutus wala No


Once again πŸ€—

Edited by RizArshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Really there is alot of suspense... Superb updates... Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
woah... such a contrast between present and flashback... the bond these two shared is adorable, and amazing... i'm NOT asking, but wondering the what has turned the-happy-go-lucky Arnav into this cold businessman... but what's most relieving is his love, his acceptance that Khushi is His Life... even Khushi doesnt have any complaints about this... par kyun... no no no, i am not asking Jassi, just musing aloud... waiting to see as it unfolds...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
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no angry smile coz this part i likeπŸ˜ƒ  
 
But why the hell did you change sweet Arnav to ASR😑
Edited by opsyellow - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
just read it
its a nice concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Hey*hides behind a pillar*

Sorry!! Sorry!!

Kitna acha likha tune..Starting from present to past.

Flashback was so cute and beautiful! Oh God! They were so good friends than what happened between them that they are so aloof to each other now?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome update :)
flashback is cute <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Really really nice n aamzing update...


Very well written...so y did they get married??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Very nice & interesting 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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edited my comment on page no.11