Arshi SS: Rabbe Mere... Kya hai Teri Marzi (Sorry Note page 26) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
edited my comment on page no.3😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Jassi 🤗
Welcome back!!! I missed you so much. But yes take rest and at the same time do what you feel like doing. 😊
Prologue was interesting. It had the physical attraction, love, longing and pain. In short everything.
Khushi loves Arnav, Arnav loves her but still he is holding back his true emotions. There has to be a reason obviously and I like this little mystery. Looks like they're married here (given the first half). Would wait for you  to share his reasons of hiding his emotions behind a mask.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Aye aye captain...

So u r back...,

& u know what u r back with a bang... 😉 😛

Loved the teaser, will be eagerly waiting for d update..,
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Great prologue my dear. Hope u get better soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Res

UnRes

Khushi's love for Arnav has no bounds, she is fine even when he doesn't acknowledge his feelings to her inspite of feeling sad. Seems like there is mystery involved in Arnav's thinking of 'kaash mein tumse mohabbat karpaata..'

Good start Jas 👍🏼Edited by Skiran - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Congrats on your new story! This sounds like it will most definitely be a pleasure to read. Do continue soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
it was such a marvelous concept dear.
sound is v v interesting and deep.
lovely written.
can u pm me pls.
tfs.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Reswa... will be back soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
why arnav is holding himself from khushi...
 
awesome prologue.. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
I am here, where is the teaser?:P