Update RaYa new OS~ Dabbu's Diary last part and Epilouge on page 15 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome start
pls continue soon
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Sounds cute n interesting
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  ok  dabbu's dairy ..
starting is  simply superb. 

so   its  basically priya's  heart!   ok they  were  students ! .. 


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 and  will wait  for  updates ... 


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Originally posted by: luvbalh

ok dabbu's dairy ..

starting is simply superb.

so its basically priya's heart! ok they were students ! ..


for the PM


and will wait for updates ...


ok



thank u molly...yes true its priyas heart...
they shifted to pune for post graduation like pune is famous for MBA...
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Posted: 9 years ago
very much interested to know what dabbu wrote..as ram is reading or going to read...
thanks for the wonderful start 
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... nice very different OS

Eagerly waiting fr next part!!!

Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago





So friends here is recap and part 2
Hope you like it...
sorry for length




Recap :

After entering her room , I saw the asprin's box right at the table. I took some and jumped on to Miss dabbu's bed to sleep. As I laid on her bed, I could fell something under the sheets.

Due to the overwhelming curiosity, I took it out only to find :
A diary ...no its

Dabbu's diary


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OS ~DABBU'S DIARY
PART ~ 2

Ram's Narration







I shouldn't have read it but I am glad I did , because it changed my life for the better.


So due to the curiosity burning inside of me , I took the diary out. The dairy was black in colour and on the cover the word " Dabbu's diary " was written in silver.

I thought she hate this name dabbu bcoz she always said me dont call me dabbu i hate this name...Strange yar...then why she kept this name...

Now
I remember this diary from Miss dabbu's brithday when she tried to hide it from me. I didn't know she was using it as a diary but thought she was hiding it from me so I wouldn't copy her work. Guess , I was wrong.


I tried to open the diary but their was a number lock.


I thought for a while and tried complex combination like :


012345


67890


But none of them working...ohhh her birthdate

120189

( i know year is not correct but in this story they doing PG so age shd be around 24-25)

Ohhh uski birthdate bhi nahi hai to kya hoga... I was about to give up but I gave one last try.
I slowly kept the numbers in my birthday...


010988 (again sorry for year its 1973)


And it opened. Priya wasn't so intelligent as I thought.

One min...

Why my birthdate...ohhh god why not my b'date ye dabbu bhi naa...jitna hoshiyar apne aap ko samzti hai utni h nahi...meri b'date rakh li taki agar mujhe kabhi diary mili bhi to main meri b'date try nhi karunga but u r wrong my dabbu...haha i opend...

As I opened the diary a thought came to me ," Why do girls keep diary , just so others can find out their secrets."

Chuckling at that thought I opened the diary . The first page was blank . But the second page,

oh my goddd--

I never thought ... but how could she ... hide her real feelings for so long.


On the Second page "I LOVE U RAM"

Third page...

my name was written all over the page inside ouside surround by small hearts.






I have never thought of her like that. I couldn't read as shock had paralyzed me from turning the pages of the diary.


So I closed it and kept it the way it was.


I got out of the room thinking deep thoughts.

She was there for me in the most crucial times of my life.


She was their for me when my father died and got me out of that miserable time.


She helped me when i need someone



And she was there when I was losing control of my hard feelings and many other times, she stayed along with me to support me.



She is my best friend and the only friend that has been with me through the upside down of life.


So I decided to talk to her tonight.


And as Kartik was going out , it would be the perfect time to ask her.


I waited for her to come home.


Why couldn't I feel the same way like she did?

After all she and kartik were the only ones with me through the toughest times and she was the one who made me feel better about everything.


I had caught her staring at me few times but I felt that I was handsome as many girls in college used to stare at me.


So I didn't take it seriously . But it had come so far , how could I not realize it ?
I mean come on , I am her best friend. I am supposed to know these things.


I had waited for her for hours,

where could have that girl gone?


I heard a knock on the door and quickly ran off to open it.


I saw dabbu standing in front of me but she was not standing alone.


Their was a guy beside her and the look in her eye told me that this was her 2nd boyfriend , her new mister perfect.


What is up with priya yar?


In her diary she writes my name with these love signs but comes home with some other guy.


I was really confused.


I thought of letting this matter go.


I was introduced to her new "mister perfect " Rajat.

Guess what , he was also going to Symboisis. Mr Symboisis , was clearly her type of guy.


Now I was sure of letting this matter go . It was obviously a joke , I mean come on , How could she like a spoiled brat like me?


When she could have someone who was just like her
( The Symboisis Guy).


Mr and Mrs Sgmboisis, made for each other.


Yuck , this thought was going to make me puke.



But I got a feeling inside of me which made my heart fell really heavy.


Must have been the sickness coming again but something inside of me told me it was jealousy.


But I ignored that feeling.


Cause , why would I be jealous?


I mean I could get any girl I wanted , and why would I want Priya?

I needed to clear my head , so I went out for a drive.


       Day passed

i hide this jealousy inside me...which burnt me

Miss dabbu and Rajat were getting closer and closer day by day and I have no idea why that thought has been bugging me so bad. And I have been angrier and angrier.

So i decided to go to consultant



"Breath in , breathe out," I repeated these word to myself.


My counselor told me it would help to bring the anger out and get it down .


And maybe it could help me get the heaviness out of my heart.



It was Saturday night...

i was plannjng to go out but Dabbu told me that she was going with Rajat

now me and kartik @ apartment

miss dabbu was getting ready to go out with Rajat.



I feel like that boy in that freaking serial that she made me watch ( very torturous evening)
Me who doesn't care when the girl's around but gets jealous when priya is with another guy.


I was watching "Movie" with Kartik

I heard miss Dabuu open the door.


We didn't turn around to look at her but I really wanted to.


But pretended like I did not.


She called out " Guys , how do I look?"


I turned around to look at her.


And I was blown away.




to be continued...

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Edited by aman.anjaan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..too good yaar.
Really an awesome update.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb part again
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Awesome update Continue soon Thanks for the PM