Update RaYa new OS~ Dabbu's Diary last part and Epilouge on page 15 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jodude

what an update.. superb yaar..!!

love it...
flashback scenes and her dairy its just awesome...

continue soon..




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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part
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With reading each entry in Priya's diary Ram remembering the time he spent with her hurt her unintentionally. But with each he came to know she loves him a lot and how stupid he was didn't see her feelings for him.
Do continue story is getting interesting thanx for the pm...Edited by aanchaltulshan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...waiting for ram's praposal...and priya's reaction
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Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

With reading each entry in Priya's diary Ram remembering the time he spent with her hurt her unintentionally. But with each he came to know she loves him a lot and how stupid he was didn't see her feelings for him.
Do continue story is getting interesting thanx for the pm...



thank u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update 
love it 
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago


Hi frends thank you for all support
Here is last part and epilouge...hope you like it...





Recap :

Dear Diary

Aaj kuch esa hua ki mera pyaar ram ke liye or bad gaya...yes i love u more than anything ram...and i respect ur feelins ram we are best frnd i love u but u dont love me...that ok now i have to move on...
Move on with Rajat...but its hard to me ram to forget u...i love u...love u from core of my heart...

Your truly

Priya

After reading all of this , I was in shock.


My brain started churning and suddenly it hit me like a bucket of cold water.



OS~DABBU'S DIARY LAST PART






Ram's narration :


Then it hit me .


The protective feeling , I had about her was not because of brotherly love. Not friendly love


Every time any guy would hurt her, my heart used to burst with anger.


And when I saw her upset , I always wanted to be the one to make her smile.


This was totally not because of brotherly love. Heck , it was not friendly love at all.


It was love.pure love


After, all this time. I had been an idiot, a complete jerk.


But I was actually in love.


I have to tell her.

Wo mujhse jitna pyar karti h utna hi pyar main bhi use karta hu...


Where would she be?


Where would that Mr. Symboisis take her?


Then I remembered her telling me about going to a book store after having dinner.


I hurriedly took my jacket and took a cab.



When, I finally reached the book shop.



I saw her smiling and laughing and talking to him.


The feeling that she might actually be happy with him started to crawl through me.


Maybe, she didn't love me anymore. As I watched her I saw her hands shake.



This only happened, when she was irritated.



I saw her discomfort .


Then I saw that Rajat was a chatterbox and couldn't stop talking.


That's when the feeling of doubt left me.



I took a leap of faith and went inside the book store.


I went up to her and Rajat stopped talking.



She got up and asked , "What are you doing here?"



And for the first time in my life , I couldn't speak in front of a girl.



So I pulled her close and tried to hug her.



Guess what? She slapped me and ran away.



I followed her hoping that Rajat was not following us.


She stopped all of a sudden.


By this time my heart was in mouth.


It was beating so fast.


Then she started crying.



"What do I do?" was the only thing that was running through my mind.


I had never been in such a situation before.



I pulled her into a hug and held her in my arms.


And she hit me again.
again
Again
On my chest...

She started talking but was still crying. hitting
Me...tears in her eyes...now i feel ho much she love me...i ddnt stop her...


And she said , "Why are you here? And, why now? After all, these years, why now?




"You read my diary, didn't you? Well guess what, I don't need your pity love. Keep it to yourself.



"I don't want it."


Then I took her out of my arms and stared into her eyes.


And said , hey my Dabbu
"Don't cry, please. Stop crying . I need to tell you something."


She looked at me and said , "What?"



I took a deep breath and said, "I ... I ... I.. love you, and I know you love me too."


That time she looked angry and now , she looked furious.


" You loving me is the biggest lie , I have ever heard. I know you. I know how you are. You make girls feel loved and then leave them. Leave them with a broken heart that cannot be mended. I..."


This was too much.


I took up all my courage to say that I loved her and now she didn't believe me.



"Listen to me. I love you dabbu. I promise you that I have only loved and will only love you. I am really sorry for all that I have done. But I really love you and please give me a chance to do things right.

And all those other girls were using me for my money or my surname popularity, not the other way around. And I swear I will not leave you. You are not like those girls I used to date. You are different."


I pulled her into my arms.




And she was still hitting me and trying to run away.

We were now on empty street...



I squeezed her tightly against my arms and said , "I won't let you go, even if you try to run."


She suddenly stopped.


She looked up and slowly smiled.


And I leaned in closer and our lips touched into a kiss.


For the first time in my life , I had kissed the girl I loved and the best thing was that she loved me too.


I kissed her with all my love for her and to tell her that she was mine and mine alone.

She smiled hug me tight...

She asked u relaize so late ram...

u said me golu naa now i m agree with you...i m really ddnt know abt ur feelings but

But why dont u tell me how much you love me...why u hide so much inside you... Sorry dabbu soo sorry...

She put her fingers on my lips...
Ram no need to sorry u reliazed its biggest thing for me...

I love u priya...i shouted...lift her in my arms and round round on empty street...rain drops on us...
I love u priya...


And from that day on , she was the only one for me and I was never going to let her go.


Not even in a thousand years.




Epilogue





It has been 2 years sice the day I confessed to her.


The best 2 years of my life.


But something really surprised me,

Kartik was escastic when we told him that we were now a couple. He was almost more happy then me. But note the almost, nobody could be as happy as I was.


I was really confused when he said, "Finally, it took you long enough." But who cares about about he said, anyway.


We had completed our PG degree successfully in pune and back to mumbai. I actually did well in collage, but its all because of dabbu...now i am india's leading business tycoon...


Priya got ooportunity to teach in
IIM...

Speaking of dabbu, I was about to meet her in the book shop where I confessed to her that day. I was hoping to surprise her with something. After all, today was our anniversary. I stopped my car infront of the shop. I was about to get out but my phone rang.


"Hello" I said without looking at the number.


"Hey, its me, Kartik." the person on the other end said. "Do you have the box and don't mess this up man, otherwise you will have a special appointment with my fist."


I checked for the box in my jeans pocket. It was there. Was he stupid? How could he ever think I would forget such as important thing.


"Yeah, I have it. And of course I won't mess this up. Are you calling me to make more nervous than I already am?" I said


"Yep." He said, I could picture him grinning, "Go get her , Lover boy."


"I will, see you later." I said smiling to myself.


I took a quick breath, and got out of my car.


I could see Dabbu looking at some books with a cute frown on her forehead.


The scene made me smile. I could feel my heart beating fast. This was it, I would do it today.


I quickly went inside the shop and went over to priya. She had not noticed me as she was too busy looking at the books. My miss Dabbu will never change, thats what I love most about her.

I hugged her from behind.


She didn't seem surprised. "Took you long enough." she said softly


"I was busy @ KI ." I said turning her around, so she was facing me.


She gave me that smile which made my legs tremble and said, "Wow, busy are u?"


"Anyway, Happy anniversary." She whispered.

I leaned and gave her a quick kiss.no one notice us



I pulled back and let her go, she seemed slightly suprised as she was usually the one to pull away when I displayed affection in public.

I drag her to the corner

I got down on one knee, brought out the box in my pocket, opened it and said, "These 2 years has been the best years of my life. You have always been there for me no matter what. You have made my life brighter and me happier and more content. Will you please be mine forever? Miss Dabbu will you marry me?"


She had tears in her eyes and her face had been brightened by a cute blush.


She looked at me in the eyes and whishpered, "Yes."


I felt my heart explode.


I quickly took the ring from the box and put it on her ring finger. It was the perfect size. I was smiling like crazy.


I took her chin so her lips were close to mine but...then



I could hear the claps of the people in the shop...

We came back to my home...



My mom and priya's parents already know about our relationship...they decided our marrige one month...


Marrige day :

Dabbu now mine forever...we are married now...

...Thanx to dabbu's diary...




After 1 year they blessed with beautiful baby boy...


they named him

" RAYAANSH "
RAM PRIYA KA ANSH

HAPPY'S ENDING


Thank you all...




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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome yaar just amazing love the ram confession n pls start ur new os plsss aman
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Posted: 9 years ago

first    for  late posting 


 uh .. wat an  update.  

 story  is  just  superb.  

last part  their  confession is too good. 
bechari  she  waited  so long for him 

good thing he too realized its love. 


  fro  such a lovely  OS

 



Edited by luvbalh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb superb update n epilogue
Thanks for pm