owww this is great,
im relieved that rachna is staying with him..dont want her to go but neither want i kabit to fall asleep,
it would be great to see some romance between them...
great work and thanks for pm
Originally posted by: crtkelly
Nivi this is really great stuff here. I personally don't think the pace of the story is too slow, and i totally get how you get pulled in another direction than you originally thought to go -I say go with the flow I don't think the story will suffer for it!
Anyway back to the update..uh hell yes Nikhil deserved that beatdown! I am very glad that Rachna and Kabir are together now, he definitely is in need of comfort poor soul. Can't wait to see what happens next😳Thanks for the PM and please update soon especially since the only RaBir love we are getting are in the ffs right now don't know about everyone else but l'm feeling particularly tortured right now😆
Originally posted by: Princess.S786
Great update
Thanks 4 pm
comment:
p_commentcount