ss:Mounam pesugrathey part 7 updated (page 19)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi friends just thought of writing short ss .hope u people will like it


part 1 (page 1)

part 2 (page 4)

part 3(page 8)

part 4(page 12)

part5(page 14)

part6(page 17)

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Posted: 9 years ago
part 1



Raji walks into office with loads of happiness. Today she acheived her years of hard work .She wants to hug some one and say " i did it " . she walks on the corridor.

she moves to the balcony and stands.
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karthik "lucky charm wat you doing here" .Raji hugs him saying "am a project manager now karthikk so happy noww" .
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Raji was disturbed by some voice.she realises its dream . vishnu "Raji am i right " . Raji nods . vishnu " so neenga than ah athu " . Raji "yaru" . vishnu "intha company ku pudhusa rendu project manager appoint panirkratha sonanga " .

Raji " illa nan Fresher" . Vishnu laughs " i know ungala guide panna solli delivery head sushan anupirka" . Raji " neenga " . vishnu "promotion kidachathum ungala mathri than santhosam ah vanthen ,aprom than unmai therinchuthu ithu yevlo kastam nu " . Raji laughs . vishnu "sireenga aprom kastam ,am vishnu" .

In canteen

karthik "plz lakhsmi ippovey tight schedule ,ne vishnu ku alot panu " . Lakhsmi "sushan kita yevlo suggest panrathu ,vishnu yenna thitran , neyum yenna thitra ,thappu panrathu sushan ,thittu yenakka" . karthik laughs .

vishnu comes with raji . karthik sees her

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karthik "lucky charm ,ne yen pakkathula vanthuta am so happyyy"

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Lakhsmi "dei yenna angaye parthutu irukka" .karthik " illa vishnu kooda oru ponnu vara" . Both comes near them. Vishnu "parunga raji ivanga rendu perum yennoda friends project manager ah promote agitu yenna mathriye varutha paduvor sangam " .

Lakhsmi "raji wow yenaku pesa oru nalla friend kidachurka " . vishnu "appo nanuu" . karthik "dei ne friend illey lover" . vishnu "appadi parthalum ne friend thaney " . Raji looks at karthik. karthik looks at Raji .both eyes sees each other hiding their happiness.

karthik " yeppadi irukkenga Raji " .Raji "awesome " . Karthik "marupadyum parpom nu ninaikala" .Raji "amam am so happy to see my friend" .karthik "friend" .

Lakhsmi "hey ungaluku yerkanavey palakkam irukka" .karthik "yes she is my ug class mate ,lovable friend" .Raji 's face brightens .

Vishnu "yenathu lovable friend ah " .karthik "yes sweet ,talkative girl" .Raji "dei pothum" .karthik "unna pathi nalla vitham ah solren Raji " . Raji holds her tongue as she realised she talked more.
karthik stops realising wat he is doing .

Lakhsmi "athu sari Raji ,team alot paniacha " . Raji "she suggested some ,have to verify " . vishnu "athu irukkatumm yen application yenna achu" .

karthik "yeppavum pola yenaku thara solta" .vishnu "unaku athigam work thanthu kodumai paduthra ,yenaku tharam ah torture ,iva route eh purinchuka mudyaliye " .

Raji enjoys their convo .her mind goes back to collage days

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Raji stops a guy .karthik "yes" .Raji " First year block yethu nu solla mudyum ah" . karthik "solla mudyathu" . Raji " please time aguthu " .karthik " neenga yeppadi ketalum solla mudyathu " .

Raji "yenna help keta over ah pesura" . karthik " ada athu illanga yenakum theryathu " .Raji gets surprised . karthik "solla mudyum ah nu kateenga ,mudyathu nu sonnen " . Raji "adapaavi ' .

karthik " keta vitham thappu" . Raji "mudyala valikuthu " . karthik laughs " karthik" . Raji "Raji" .
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Lakhsmi disturbs her asking " Raji unakku coffee sollidatum ah" .karthik says "avaluku tea than pidikum"


Raji smiles and thinks " Thiruda athanyum ninaivu irukka unakku" . vishnu " machan yeppadi da" . Raji " parava illiye konjam nybagam yellam irukku pola nalla vishyam ". karthik " inga irukku anga irukka nu than theryaley ". Raji " u are my best friend da how could i forgot our sweet memories " . karthik smiles "Thanks " . Raji gets a call and leaves . "


vishnu asks " dei inga yenna nadakuthu " .Lakhsmi "athaney ne avala love yethum panunirkiyo ". karthik "hey stop stop am just a friend , avaluku Tamil arasan kooda engagement agidchu " . vishnu " avanga engagement irukkatum unaku yeppo da " . Angel comes in saying "nalla kelunga vishnu " . karthik "Angel i need time " . Angel " itha thanda 5 varusam ah sollitu irukke" . karthik " Raji intha office la join panirka" Angel smiles "hey nijam ah a yenga " .


karthik "As a project manager " . Angel "omg poi parkanum neyum va" . she drags karthik with him. Vishnu gets confused " lakhsu" . Lakhsmi "yenna da " ..


vishnu "doubt ah irukku " .Lakhsmi "note paniya Raji ya parthathum ivan face ley bulb yeryuthu " . vishnu "Raji ku than engagement agidchu nu solraney vidu yenna panrathu" .


Raji gets surpised to see Angel & karthik . Angel "Raajii,where u gone missed u so much" . karthik thinks " itha sollathan nan ninaichen mudyaliye " .Raji thinks "itha karthi solirntha yevlo nalla irukkum" . karthik " Angel unna romba miss panna" . Raji mind voice " ava miss panala nu yaru keta " .


Angel "aprom Raji life yeppadi irukku" . Raji "romba santhosam ah irukken " .Angel "Tamil yeppadi irukkar,yenga irukkar" . Raji replies " us la irukkar " . karthik " sari neenga pesitu irunga nan kilambaren" . He moves from there.



karthik walks in corridor his memories goes back to collage days


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karthik walks in the ground .Raji shouts " spring head " . karthik turns "yen ippadi maanatha vangrey" . Raji "i love this name" . karthik " love you too" .Raji gets shocked " yenathu" . karthik " ada friendly ah sonnen " . Raji "karthik friends ah irukka mudyumna palagalam ,love varumnu thonuna vendam " . karthik "sari sari friend than pothum ah " . Raji " bayama irukku karthik ,yen dad yenmela romba nambikai vachurkar atha kapathanum" . karthik "amma thaye valikuthu mudyala " . Raji beats his head playfully. karthik "sari maranthuten yethuku koopita" . Raji " ne than da parkanumnu solirntha " . karthik takes a form and says "lucky charm itha fill pani kodu " .


Raji "neyum unnoda Raasi um" . karthik " kindal panatha" . Raji " karthik yenakku oru doubt " . karthik " yenna " . Raji "namma senior Tamil irukkaru illey avar yenna love panraro nu " . karthik gets surprised .Raji "test paniduvom ah " .karthik "deal okay " .

Next day

Morning Karthik parks the bike .Tamil smiles seeing him. Karthik "hi".Tamil "yena karthi innaiku late pola". Karthik "yes na konjam late agidchu".

Tamil   "nan onnu keta thapa eduthuka matey illa".karthik   "go ahead".Tamil "intha shirt alaga irukka".Karthik "what".


Tamil   "hey illa,nan konjam costume romba parpen,yepavum    kanagu solluvan ,innaiku late ah,orutharum kidaikala,class room porathuku munadi ketudunum".



Karthik "dress la yena anna   irukku,nama manasu than karanam".   Raji overhears and laughs out.


Raji " Tamil poyum poyum ivan ah kekuringa tamil,yeppo paru black shirt liye suthitu iruppan avankita poi kekura paru"




karthik"oye black yenoda favorite". Raji "sari da blacky".karthik gets surprised.Raji "yena ada,   yethum nyabaga paduthiten ah".Karthik"amam yethana nick name vaikra yenaku " .




Tamil smiles. Raji   gets suspicious. Karthik"sari sari class ku pogalam"



Raji "yenda intha kolaiveri first hour sullan ".Karthik "appo nan varala". Raji "iru da nanum varen,pakathula irukra coffee shop poitu   enjoy panalam".


karthik jumps and says "smart idea".Tamil gets annoyed.Tamil "vera yengum pogalam ah nanum varen".Karthik "Tamil anna ungaluku   bore adikum"


Raji "dei romba pihu panatha ,neenga vaanga   Tamil". he agrees.all the three reach the coffee shop



In Coffee shop karthik sits with   Raji   and Tamil.Tamil thinks "ivanga frienship level purinchu apuram game play pananum"


Raji "dei yena order panalam".Karthik "yeppavum pola unaku pidikatha hot choclate enaku,yenaku pidikatha hot jelebi unaku".


Raji   laughs "dei Tamil ah koopitu vanthurkom".Tamil "enaku oru ice cream pothum". Raji "neenga   baya padam ah sollunga   karthi bill pay panipan"


.karthik "hey ne pay panuratha thana sonney,athu yellam mudyathu". Angel   comes and asks   "yena yen nanban ah kodumai paduthureenga".


Karthik   " hey ne hospital poratha thaney sonna". Angel "ne koodathan college poratha sonney". Raji "ithu pointu" she   joins them.Tamil gets annoyed.



Angel   " yena Tamil kolaiveri la irukra mathri irukku,Tamil ivangala nambi kooda vantha nama kathai avlothan"



Raji "poi solura Tamil,last time bill paya pana solliten athuku than intha build up"

Angel " bill yevlo nu kelu".karthik"just 2500 rupees ithuku than sir ivlo build up thara romba panura iva ".Tamil smiles


.Raji " ippo ne bill kodupiya matiya".

Karthik " Tamil   Raji   kaga kodupar ,illa Tamil". Tamil gets shocked.


Raji laughs "dei yena ithu". Angel " ama mama   un purse,en purse rendumey gali aga koodathu,yeppuddii". Karthik patts her saying"nanbenda".


Tamil "adapaavi ippo nan out ah".Raji " appadithan nu nikaren".Karthik laughs


Angel   " hey Raji   yenaku oru doubt ne un collage days la love panirkiya"


Raji   "appo panala,ana ippo panuren".Tamil and   Karthik gets surprised.


Tamil thinks "yena iva propose paniduva pola irukkey". karthik "   hey   yaru nu sollu" . Raji " unakku theryatha " .


. Karthik "innum antha ponnu kita sollala,ava accept panalan ah apuram alagan ah friendship ah ilanthuta yena panurathu athan". Raji   smiles "athu yelam onnum agathu".karthik "are you sure". Raji   smiles "amam yethum agathu"



.Karthik "appo pidichurka".   Raji "ofcourse".Karthik "i love you   Raji ". Raji "love you tooo"..


Angel   jumps "adapaavi ivlo speed ah oru proposal".Tamil gets shocked. Raji   laughs out "dei yedu 3500".

Karthik takes the money and gives to   Raji saying"yena Tamil anna ippadi   sothapita,ne shock aga matey nu sonen,iva illa nu sona,ippo paru nan thothuten".



Tamil smiles "appo ithu fun ah" Angel   "adapaavi dei,appo ne propose panaliya".Karthik"ila   ,yellam   Raji   oda game plan ava yenaku yeppavum friend matum than " .


.karthik turns to Tamil "sari sari,Tamil ne va,poi ice cream vangitu varalam".Both walks from there.

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karthik thinks   "appo puryala Raji ippo puryuthu ,oru vela neyum ippadi than irukkiyo" . He moves from there.


friends hope i didnt bored you all
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Posted: 9 years ago
Different story line but please intha KR ah pirikkadeenga azhudhiduven
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ammukuty

Different story line but please intha KR ah pirikkadeenga azhudhiduven


Thx Ammu    no seperation   here   da .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice. Good flow of thoughts.   A small suggestion, if u use different colors for flash back, it would be nice, i feel.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vasubadri

Very nice. Good flow of thoughts.   A small suggestion, if u use different colors for flash back, it would be nice, i feel.



Thnk u sis will change next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi sis.Different story nice effort . Please give us a nice update. We all need to release tension of the promo. Waiting for your update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: plily

Hi sis.Different story nice effort . Please give us a nice update. We all need to release tension of the promo. Waiting for your update dear



Thx lilly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Different story line ... Liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice different too. Please unite KR cant bare them to seperate after seeing the promo.