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Thank u dear Rems..Hey read all d chapters in a go must say amazing work 😊 do update soon
Thank u dear Rems..Hey read all d chapters in a go must say amazing work 😊 do update soon
Blue.. thanks a lot.. yes women nowhere they are treated as equal or with some respect.. the treat like shit.. I think the time is changing.. ray of hope..Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti
Respect is as basic as air for a women but these days no one gets that. Loved the update, thanks for beautiful update deepa 👏
Originally posted by: sathuraj
Chapter 4:
Nice concept... dear...Green colour...Air...Astha decided to go away from Shlok...went faraway to enjoy the nature...but did she able to do so...each and every thing she sees...it remains of shlok and the moment they spend...Shlok is very keen to ask forgiveness from astha...he is following her as her shadow...he is reaching her where ever she gone...But will be able to win her back...yes he will win her back but not so easily...he has pay back for the pain and sorrow he gave it to her...The way u crave the trees its shows ur feeling...will u able to wipe the pain u have sowed...The way u treated my wound it shows ur caring...will u able to heal the wound u have created...The way u try to ask for forgiveness its show ur loving...will u able to win back when it have healed...The way u are struggling to winback show ur fighting...will u able to get back me when it have broked...Shlok has to try very hard to win her back ...since he has broken her in to tiny pieces...Poor Astha still cant able to come out of it ...Hope god given them happiness for ever...
My pleasure to treat u darling...Originally posted by: sathuraj
KAMBAR( KAMBAN)THE POET -
Nice information DeepaAmbikapathy and Amaravathy Love Story was one of the epic...True love will always win...Even though they didnt leave together...They stay together in the heaven...But they story spread like a fire in the Air...Thats the special of the the language and the poems...Thanks for the lovely treat...
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