Ashlok FF: Heads Over Heels Ch 24 pg 145 - Page 85

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Posted: 9 years ago
chap 20 & 21 excellent update jane👏
astha's inner thoughts are well written👍🏼
so the atmosphere changing slowly,they are falling in love😉😳
loved ashlok car sequence❤️
waiting for next updates...update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I want to listen to u.. I like u best without any makeup..
oh dear lord!! I'm dead!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bm11


Yasna, I'm really grateful you always find time to pass you sweet comment to this story.
Even more I like that the story is unpredictable for you😉

Thank you so much😃


yes...this Shlok is full of surprises...and totally unexpected for me
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Posted: 9 years ago
UN RES BELOW CHAP 21 ...AND IMDD NEXT PAGE
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Part19
He was not mad at her...he was mad about her...wah!how a kiss transferred d most complicated relation into a most beautiful one ❤️
Her uniqueness made him mad...mad in love:-)
Part20
Head over heals 😉 and both have a picture about... where they stand in this relation...she came to knew that he's not sorry abt d kiss...
When they gonna confess
Part21
It's a lovely dovely update...these two can set fire even with mere talks...
"You breath,I like this sound"...so romantic!
Trust!..gonna play a big role in their relationship?

Really great updates... loved it...❤️
Tks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bm11



Dear Mrs. Priya🤗

After the time you've spent reading what is written by me I must say you are one of the most hard-wotking or better say hard-reading😆😆persons I've ever known.
All chapters in one go? not lazy for sure👏

This one is really different in many aspects. I hate being repetitive😡

Thank you for the time you granted to reading and COMMENTING!
You are very industrious girl and I love you😉



Hard reading 😆 I agree...Ikr...once I start... there's no point of return when it comes to ur writing 😉
And I must admit...am head over heals hooked with this story...
And I love u too 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jane 🤗..my oh ..my outstanding 👏, you do strike a chord with readers...like the metaphorical language 😊
I was a gal who always loved mysteries & thrillers; this story has some enigma interlaced with right proportion of romance ...me likes 😉. This reminds of a 90's hindi movie called as DIL 
I was right from start...these 2 resist each other like hell and all their harsh words & the war is just a pretense and she pierced thru his heart😛, now that he accepted the love to himself; I sense a lot of passion from his side..will the gal be able to handle it! But she has her own mind..want to run from these feelings as far as she can ..but she can't. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
till nw story is gng grt. Any update today??? eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Jane 
  sorry for not being able to comment for the past two updates😔.i got an error message saying that "you are not allowed to post more than 40 posts in a single day.it read that its to prevent spamming and asked to contact them".i tried many times and got the same message.i was so irritated as i didnt even post a single comment that day.now it became ok. loved how their relation changes,though i would admit i dont at all understand everything changes after a kiss😉.  ...like the world changed ,...sky changed... and stuff...Its like the blind man deaf man talking,you know🤣.if you know what i mean.u'll know for sure😆.love you,Jane.wondering what would happen next.maybe anjali will think that astha is plotting for something.cant guess though.love you,Jane🤗.
Edited by Waheedaralli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bm11


Poornima, attracted? I think he's loosing his reason. To kiss the enemy...well, not reasonable at all😆
Do you agree?

Thank you😃

i saw this today😆.thought of replying anyway.attracted would be a understatement.i understood what u r saying...aww...he is so madly in love😳.