Ishra ff:Breath of Fresh Air: last part(chapter 16, page72) - Page 52

doch its superbb... applause

awsome...perfect ending..luved it

Wow wonderful ending and what a twist Bala is a bride ha ha .🤣Finally Raman mission is complete. Thank you for lovely story. Hope you will write some more in future.👏👏👏

beautiful ending .keep writing

Wow nyc ending buddy will definitely miss ur writing but do continue writing such beautiful stories! !! 

This is so beautifully written...I enjoyed each and every chapter of this...
Please continue writing...
Your stories always hit the right chords...

Graceful end. Loved it

Naughty raman & his plan is just awesome👏👏👏

Bala in bridal dress omg🤣🤣

Lovely ff dear. Do write more 😃

awesome..

Prefect ending yaar..

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Wow...just wow

well...dont you think zuch a beautiful story deserves a wonderful epilogue too...am waiting for itt

take your time but do write

oh..i always knew it was ishita...the bride

but ba jiju??

Lol..i read wife and kid line thrice wondering if i am reading wrong then next line confirmed mg doubt

superb ending

i kiss love kiss you kiss.. awww

thnks for this wonderful story yrrd

waiting for another one from your side

I'll definitely think about it, but as of now haven't planned any epilogue 😊
thank you 😳
Edited by dochdoe - 9 years ago