Ishra ff:Breath of Fresh Air: last part(chapter 16, page72) - Page 48

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Posted: 9 years ago
Itna chotusa update but I loved it
Ruhi- ishita part was lovely
And that always <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally you updated .wonderful updated plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
ur written style is amazing😊
means alot
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful portrayal f feelings n even more beautiful convo...loved it.. Fantastic job dochdoe
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update. Loved Ishra conversation. Is she the bride. I think he is speaking about her. last lines are very touchy. He wants her to say it aloud.
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Posted: 9 years ago
What a beautiful update!  Thanks so much for the PM...

Loved her resistance, love his pain, love Ru's excitement- love it all.

And the last bits of their conversation...

Really looking forward to your next update!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Faboulous update Doc and thank you so very much in English version too. Poor Ishu have heartache thought she will,lost Ruhi and  I think she also develope feeling for Raman so she feel sad too. I think she will ask Raman not to Mary to the other girl. May be I guess the girl they talk about is her the parents and Raman must be agree for marriage  but Ishu not aware of it.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing part👏
gosh, raman was so romantic towards the end.. i had butterflies while reading that..☺️
do continue soon😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
beautifully written
I can clearly see the turmoil the Ishita is going through with your writing. I hope this goes through some interesting sequences where IShita will get jealous of her. I have a doubt is Raman really marrying someone or they are all referring to her. Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww..beautiful update! loved Ishita ruhi convo.. i really wish if Raman marries Ishita and officially make Ishita as ruhi's mom...
loved it esp IshRa's convo at the end!

cont soon!