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lohananivedita thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Blackheart-

Awesome start
Prologue hmmm amazing
The boy must be rey and kriya like him
Surprise waiting
Update fast


Hmmm, I will update this story as soon as 
possible. 
Thanx dear. 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Usha29

Hey! It's sweet & nice I think person is Rey.

She already fall for him kya baat hai.

Do update soon, don't forget to PM me.


I will surely pm you guys. 
Love u. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing prologue...

loved it..

continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!! kya baat he
loved it yaar!!!!
ab jaldi update kar...
ur just too good aur concept is unique too!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesum concept Nikks...
Kria n Sharon waiteress...
N kria full flat on Rey...
Hehehee...
Now i want a really quick update
pls nikks jaldi karna...
Waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

wow!! kya baat he

loved it yaar!!!!
ab jaldi update kar...
ur just too good aur concept is unique too!


Jaanu...thankx yrrr. 
Love u. 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Meghna_kriyansh

awesum concept Nikks...
Kria n Sharon waiteress...
N kria full flat on Rey...
Hehehee...
Now i want a really quick update
pls nikks jaldi karna...
Waiting...


Meghna di,I will update it soon.
All credit goes to my maths sir. ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜†ðŸ˜†
Unke lecture mein hi aise ideas aate hai. 
lohananivedita thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Monika-

Amazing prologue...

loved it..

continue soon...


Thanks dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kriyansh ss cafe coffee day. 
Chapter two. 
Precap - "surprise"

A woman came and hugged kriya...
Kriya also recovered from the shock and hugged her too and screams "Maasi"...
The woman freed herself free the Hug and said...

S : Maasi nahi shalu, jaan...
K : oh yeah, my shalu darls...
Sm : ho gaya tum logon ka drama...Dramebaaz. 
K : shaluuu...humari feelings ki koi kadar hi nahi hai. 
S : wahi toh, humari feelings ko tum kya samjhoge Smriti babu...
Sm : hey bhagwaan!!!bas, Ab band karo apni nautanki. 
K : darling, poore do saal ke baad mil rahe ho. Kyu apni kriya baby ko bhul bhi gaye. Aur maa, tu phone par bata sakti thi na...shalu aayi hai. Main kuch gift lekar aati iske liye. 
S : koi jaroorat nahi hai...Main toh yahan tum Dono ko lene aayi hun, neha ki shaadi taye kar di hai. Aur tum dono ko waha kaam mein mera haath batana padega samjhi Smriti...
K : wow, di ki shaadi hone wali hai. That's great. Maa tu ja, mujhe cafe sambhaalna hai...Sharon waha akeli sabh kaise sambalegi. Aaj bhi half day lekar aayi hun. 
S : kituuu...nahiii. 
Sm : par main waha kya karungi...
S : Smriti, dekh kitu ne toh mana kar diya. Par tu toh Chal...neha ki Maasi hai tu. Please...Tu waha kriya ki shaadi ke liye ladka pasand kar lena. 
Sm : theek hai, main sirf neha ke khaatir Chal rahi hun. Aur sharda, kriya mujhe chod kar kabhi nahi jayegi...
Apne papa se isne promise kiya tha. 

Flashback...
Kriya and Smriti are in the hospital. Kriya was of seven  year old girl. Kriya's father got injured severally in a car accident. Doctors tried their best to save him but he was going to die. 
[Kriya's father-kf]

Kf: kriya beta, ro mat...main universeji ke paas star bankar tujhe waha upar se dekhunga. 
K : papa, aap universeji ko bolke yahi raho na...
Kf : beta, main nahi reh sakta, par tu mujhe ek promise karegi. 
K : bolo na...
Kf : dekh maine tujhe apna beta mana hai. Tu humesha beta bankar iss ghar ko sambhaalna. Smriti ko kabhi chod kar nahi jaana. 
K : papa, main maa ko chod kar kahi nahi jayungi, promise...

And due to that promise, kriya sacrificed her dream of becoming a dancer. And worked in the cafe to earn the livelihood. 

Flashback ends.

S : bahaut rona-dhona sad picture ho gaya. Main thak gayi. Smriti khana laga, aur sweetie, tu bhi aaram kar le aaj. Acha hua half day lekar aayi hai. They sat to have the dinner together after so many days. 
And went to respective rooms and slept. 
In the morning. 
Kriya hurriedly went to the cafe . and she steadily moved towards the counter. 
And a costumer turned back after giving his order and bumped into her. Due to such force, kriya was about to fall. She closed her eyes, she knew that her back is going to hit the ground. She chanted universeji...universeji in hope of some miracle. 
After a while she didn't feel the hard marble floor. But instead, she felt somebody's arms around her waist. She opened her eyes and found a brownish pair of eyes...In which she was drowning, she could stare at them till the eternity...
Both of them were staring into each other's eyes. As their eyes forgot to blink. 
Sharon noticed that and purposely cleared her throat. And both awkwardly straightened themselves. 
K : sorry sir. 
C : no, I am sorry...Woh maine hi tumhe aate hue nahi dekha. 
K : hmmm . and she ran towards the counter...

Inside the counter. 
S : aaj teri morning toh Sach mein good hai. Sahi jaa rahi hai. 
K :kya. 
S : usse takrana, phir look look...Aur sorry session Kitna cute hai...
K : paagal, chup kar. Uski khud ki gf hai. 
Sh : toh itni intensity tum dono ke beech kaha se Aayi. 
Padoos ki dukaan se. 
K : kya yrrr, kuch bhi Shar. 
Sh : toh tere dil mein uske liye koi feelings nahi hai, 
K : obviously, nahi hai. 
Sh : toh bata, tu teen mahine se usse apne account se cookies kyu deti hai. 
K : kyu ki usse Woh bahaut pasand hai, par Woh apni gf ki wajah se naatak karta hai ki usse nahi pasand, and I really feel pity on him. Ek ladki ke wajah se khud ko badal dena...Yeh koi baat nahi hui warna I don't even look at him. Phir like karna toh dur ki baat hai. 
S : dekho kaun bol raha hai, kriya ghai. Chal ab ban mat. I know you like him. 
K : aise koi baat nahi hai, afwa mat faila. 
S : toh kaise baat hai...Cookies ki pasand...hmmm. 
K : bola na "I FEEL PITY" Aur uskiii gf haiii. 
S : chalo akhir dil ki baat zubaan par Aa hi gayi. Kuch toh feel karti hai...
K : Arrey dekh, kitne costumers line mein hai . Jaakar kaam kar. 
S : you guys make an amazing couple.(shoutingly )
K : Arrey jaa na...jaati hai ki Swayam ko bulau...
S : (blushingly) jaati hun. 
And went to take the orders. 
Edited by lohananivedita - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesum nikki...
Loved kria n massi's bonding...
Bt no KR scean... Not happy...
But u updated before due pg...
Super happy...
Bt y didn't u pm me??
Nxt time zarur krna...