kriyansh ss cafe coffee day

Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Guys...
I am back with a new concept...
Ab joote mat marna, ki phir aa gayi.
I couldn't resist myself and I am here. 
So please bear my craps...
And this story has no character sketch. 
You will be introduced to characters as the story proceeds. 
Toh batao kaun kaun hai interested...
For pms, like or comment and add me in your buddy list. 

Thank you...
Here ends my lecture. 

Waiting for your responses. 
Nikki. 

Edited by lohananivedita - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Index. 
Chapter one - page no 1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4124051&PID=111404181&#p111404181

Chapter two -page no 3

Chapter three -page no 8
Edited by lohananivedita - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
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Where is the introoo pls give that
nd pm meEdited by Sanchita_ArSha - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Kriyansh ss cafe coffee day. 
Prologue. 

A boy around twenty three wearing denims and white t shirt and a jacket entered into a cafe and directly went to the counter and ordered a cappuccino. He walked and sat comfortably on the corner sofa of the cafe. He was totally lost in his lappy. He always sat in the corner peacefully With his laptop. 
Just Then waitress puts his order on the table...

W: sir, here is your order...A cup of cappuccino and almond cookies. 
Person : cookies, but I have not ordered them. 
W : it's free with a cup of cappuccino. 
P: par Itne dino se free...I mean, itni Lambi offer. 
W : sir, it's only with cappuccino...enjoy. 
And she ran away. 
The another waitress smiled mischievously looking at her.
W2:yrr, koi bada maherbaan ho raha hai. 
W : kaun...
W2:miss kriya aur kaun??? Aaj bhi uss ladke ko apne account se cookies de rahi hai. 
K : Sharon, please don't disturb me. Dekh kitne log line mein hai. Chal faltu ki baatein chod aur orders dene ja. 
And the kriya's phone rang. And seeing the number, she hurriedly picks up the call. 

Phone conversation. 

Sm: hello
K : maa, tu theek hai na. Kaam ke samay kyu call kiya...
sm: beta, kuch nahi huwa, bas tu ghar aa. 
K : tu ghar kyu bula rahi hai,maa bol na...sabh sahi hai na waha. 
Sm: kriya, tu pahele ghar toh aa phir batati hun. Jaldi ghar aa ja, bye. 
And the phone got disconnect. 
And kriya took half day leave and left from there. 
She took her scooty and rode to her home and hurriedly opened the door with keys. 
As she entered into her house. 



                                  "Surprise"



Edited by lohananivedita - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome start
Prologue hmmm amazing
The boy must be rey and kriya like him
Surprise waiting
Update fast
Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc concept update soon...:)
Posted: 9 years ago
 concept is cool
sumthing interesting
sumtning different
concept sounds this ss gonna be fun
update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey! It's sweet & nice I think person is Rey.

She already fall for him kya baat hai.

Do update soon, don't forget to PM me.

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