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Hugs!!!!! 🤗
i love the way ... u mold the char ..splly in the past.. is it good or bad?? but for me... a writer is teh one who can mesmerize the ppl in their own unique way ...
i like the way u described the past.. a part of her ..(though its little )but she has shared with him...the trust she has on him.. and the belief.. 😊
separation is part and parcel of every relation!!! though its painful.. but it makes ppl realize and have their own retrospect!!!
"The most painful thing is losing yourself in the process of loving someone too much, and forgetting that you are special too."
"Since I was young, I have always known this: Life damages us, every one. We can't escape that damage. But now, I am also learning this: We can be mended. We mend each other"
"These pains you feel are messengers. Listen to them."
for their wishes to be granted ...for her to achieve her goal and for him to be able to convince her to give him a chance ...here Geet is getting ready for her friends sisters wedding...she was remembering breakfast where Maan gifted her a basket of fruits 
...and ate the meal she prepared for herself ...she was almost ready when he comes in 
...one look at her through the mirror 
...and all his resolutions to go slow are gone and he is all love struck Majnu again 
...sensing her uneasiness he tries to ease the situation...clutches his heart and moans her name...she is scared he is in pain then realises it is just his usual flirting..she is mad at him and walks away...he says sorry and stops her firmly to close the open button of her top 
...they both go to the wedding ...he sincerely says sorry when he realises how upset she was ...he leaves her and comes back after a few hrs...he finds her outside and all sad 
...he so wants to hug and console her ...but stops himself and ushers her into the taxi...then he starts his nautanki to make her smile again 
...he started telling a fictional story...first she was irritated ...then she rolls her eyes 
...his story gets interesting and she leans forward asking what next ...the hilarious end of his story has her rolling with laughter ...hearing her laugh his world is beautiful again... he prays to always keep her happy like this 
...awesome update...full of Maaneet...so sweet,emotional and romantic
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